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Sonikins

@Sonikins

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#71

yar fati after readng this part i have to say one thing i love you

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Maz

@Maz.

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Fattu loved the prida scene you wrote!!..awww it was so sweet...the teasing..and the i love you......gosh miss them.

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sonika.d

@sonika.d

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#73

rachyyy love u dear 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗

4 dis wonderful thread great additions loved soho babies blog

@fathima: yaar what a lovely scene.it's awesome.loved it so much

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Fiction#1 written by adventure_gurl
Hey everyone! I decided to write a scene before I get busy with studying.

It had happened so quickly. They had an argument and she had gone towards the stables. She attempted to ride one of their new horses. He reached there just as she lost control of the reins. She was thrown off.

He caught her in his arms. Prithvi looked at Damini with concern. She slowly opened her eyes.

"Tum theek to ho?," he inquired.

She nodded meekly. She could have been killed if he hadn't been there.

He picked her up and brought her back into the house. He placed her on the bed and took off her shoes. She grimaced for she didn't want him to take off her shoes when she was capable of doing it herself.

He looked her over asking her if she felt any pain.

" I just feel a bit shaken up and my neck is stiff," she replied recovering her voice.

He shifted her so she was sitting up in front of him and he sat behind her and massaged her neck. His warm breath against her neck still sent shivers down her spine.

After he massaged her neck, he pulled her hair to the side and kissed her along the base of her neck. Then he whispered," I am sorry Damini. If I knew this would happen I would never fight with you," he declared.

Her eyes moistened. She slowly turned to face him, her hair nearly hitting him in the face.

" Prithvi it was my fault too. Don't blame yourself," she whispered.

She caressed his cheek lovingly and then they shared a quick kiss.

When they broke apart, he made a move to get up.

" Where are you going Prithvi?," she inquired.

" I want to make sure you are ok. I am just going to call the doctor," he stated.

She grabbed his hand.

" I am fine for now. You did a great job. There some pain but for now I can deal with it," she assured him.

He looked at her with concern.

" Let me get some painkillers so you can rest properly. However if you feel worse later on, you have to see a doctor," he stated sternly.

She smiled and grasped his finger in her hand.

" I promise Mr. Saxena. I will be a good girl and I will rest. I will also try not to fight with you," she added.

He shook his head and leaned down to kiss her forehead before he went to get her medication.

Hope you guys liked this short scene , will try to write more another time!

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snehakapoor

@snehakapoor

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

hey sonali.........i loved it.........it was so simple yet so sweet............pls write more.......

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

@Sonali- thanks for liking my scene and i know how u feel about being inspired to write when u have to study and all, happens to me all the time, i am studying and then my mind wanders to PriDa 😆!! @ your scene-- really liked it, very nice and sweet!!! especially Prithvi's concern for Damz, he is the sweetest husband!!

@aparajhita--thanks for reading and liking the scene!!! yup our Prithvi is very romantic😉

@Soni-- aww i love you too!!!🤗Glad u liked it!!!

@Maz-- thanks for liking it!! i know i'm missing them sooo much!!

@Sonika-- thanks for reading and liking it!!!

Edited by desigirl_18 - 15 years ago

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Siddharth Patel

@-Sid-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

awesome part sonali didi,

kya end tha fight ka, just loved it.

keep coming with more parts

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soumya

@lnmdj_greatfan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

@sonali di ... wow nice scene .... sweet n simple ... relli luved it ... n ya pls write more ... will be waitin fr more scenes ...

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Sonali....Short & sweet...👍🏼 Please update more scenes soon. Looking forward to it.

Khushi.

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maham

@...Maham...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#80

Hey Sid and Fati.. shocked everyone to see me here FINALLY? 😳😳😳 sorry very busy these days. and i can be very bad at complimenting.. anyway here goes

Sid: read as much of your work as i could and its very nice.. i enjoyed reading it... all the scenes were different in thier own aspect..GOOD JOB. there were bits here and there which were very well written👏👏👏👏 as for this latest one i likd it alot.. the rain, the chaat... very nice.... and then the fall.. ah reminded me of the old days... liked the morning scene as well.. Damini should know that Prithvi is shy around everyone else except her.. 😆😆😆😆😆 Good Jod Sid.. you write well..😃😃

Fati: read your scene two days ago but couldnt find time to comment. sowie!! 😳😳liked this as well... nice to see the whole family together😃😃😃 hehe Pri flirting in front of Soho and Damz getting shy... nice nice.. me likey😃😃😃then the whole carnival scenario was good as well.. liked the end bit in which they share and eye lock... Good Job you too👏👏

Cheerx,

Maham