SaJan poem by me... a bit long :-)

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Hi All, this is so long because I wanted to tell their whole story in it. This is their SaJan story tried to tell in simple words. Please be patient. I know you might get bored reading this long poem. Also this could get a lot better. Please give your inputs.
I have changed rhyming style after first 2 stanzas. Forgive me for this blooper (As we forgive MJHT bloopers all the time 😉)
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He is a cool dude, superstar and charming,
She is innocent and pure as dew in the morning.
Yet he was so lonely inside; and so insecure,
But she was rock solid for others' happiness for sure.

When they first met in kali ghata; he was in disguise,
She liked only him in all, he was so very nice.
He saved her from drowning in the pool in blindfold,
They did not realize, but sparks flew in that behold.

She thought Bhavesh was such a good friend,
But Samrat was just having a little fun.
One day she came to know about him,
Whenever he comes, she used to run.

Then Samrat caught her singing alone; so soulful,
He decided to bring her talent in front of everyone.
Her confidence was low; she was very scared,
But samrat had a plan, as always to the perfection.

She brightened his Diwali; he got her confidence,
She sang so beautifully; only for him on the stage.
They became great friends thereafter,
And she became the star of the Excel college.

He stood up for her; he told her his secrets,
She helped him pass; looked through his outer shell.
But a little; harmless bet came between them,
Her trust was broken; down her cheeks; tears fell.

He tried so hard to get her back as a friend,
Said her, "Choodo jane bhi do no why…"
She said he could not realize others' feelings,
He decided to change and try and try.

She needed a true friend; she was all alone,
He gave her little Sam, he gave her lucky charm.
He became a secret friend, gave her strength to go ahead,
But did not let her know, he was the one holding her arm.

He taught her dance; he ate for her hot chillies,
She stood beside him, taking Guru Samrat's advice.
Soon the moment came, when they reunite,
On the tunes of 'Khuda jane'; their friendship started to rise.

They were colored in each others' colors on Holi,
They became the best friends before they know.
The moment came soon when she realized,
She had fallen in love with him; head to toe.

Her dreams shattered when he did not give her red rose,
He thought she is only his best friend.
The reason was his own confusion about his feelings,
And he thought she is too good to be his girlfriend.

Then another girl came in between them,
He liked her, she decided to help her Soulmate.
She was ready to do anything to see her Samrat happy,
But the other girl wanted them to get separate.

She stayed away from Samrat for his own good,
But he could never leave alone his Chashmish.
The other girl tried to frame her to make her go away,
But he stood by her as always, the other girl was to finish.

He was framed for revenge and had to go to jail,
She was always with him, helped him in that tension.
She hugged him with joy and love when he was free,
This was the start of the moment of his realization.

Both decided to tell each other; she did it first,
He did not hear it, confusion thought to be rejection.
She was hurt and went back to Morena to forget the past,
He decided to follow her to do his confession.

He proposed in style on holy day of dasehra,
She was so happy; hugged him tight.
All of them came back to college,
Thinking now everything, will go only right.

She tried to help his sis; whom he hated so much,
He was mad at her for breaking his trust.
In the rage of outburst; he called her Gunjan,
She was so hurt; but she had done what she must.

But nothing could keep them apart for long,
Their love had the strongest bond of friendship as the base
His Chashmish took promise never to call her Gunjan,
She kissed him on the cheek, blushes all over the face.

She started dreaming what every girl dreams,
It made him worried; in that he did not believe.
She thought this V day will be the happiest for her,
He will propose and together they will happily live.

But he did not propose; told her his inside fears,
She went away from him and he had nothing to give.
She was dead before the bullet pierced her heart,
Lying in his arms, she lost her will to live.

He was all lost; he cried and cried for the first time,
Realizing what she meant to him, ready to take her as wife.
He called her back from her death with all his love,
Miracle happened and she returned back to life.

But she lost her legs and did not want to be a burden,
It did not matter to him, his love was so divine.
She was so brave; and took charge of her life,
He was with her always, whenever needed as her Gin.

He wants to win her trust again and get her back on feet,
She does not want to trouble him thinking he deserves better.
But he is Samrat, his plans for her never fail,
It is just a matter of time and they will be together.

These are Samrat and Gunjan, aka our SaJan,
We all know; to us what they mean.
We just love them more and more and more,
SaJan is the purest love story I have ever seen.

Ritesh

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow ritesh....its very very nice!!.👏..gosh you took back to the beginning of this beautiful love story...😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: gina87

wow ritesh....its very very nice!!.👏..gosh you took back to the beginning of this beautiful love story...😍



Thanks Gina for the kind words... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey lovely poem ritesh....u have caught d sajan story very nicely.....grttttt work👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: meens1981

hey lovely poem ritesh....u have caught d sajan story very nicely.....grttttt work👏👏


Thanks for the appreciation 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice!!!!!
You've got talent dear............. and I would thank you to use it for Sajan.
Realy that's I need.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yasri

<font color="#333300">Very nice!!!!!</font>

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<div><font color="#333300">You've got talent dear............. and I would thank you to use it for Sajan.</font>

<font color="#333300">Realy that's I need.</font>


Thanks dear for appreciating...
and anything for SaJan 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You have made tthe sajan lovestory soo much more beautiful. If you people keep on doing this then how am i going to sleep with sajan thoughts everywhere.
Anyways bad joke i know seriously it was a pleasure to read it.
Reeshu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sayankgunur

You have made tthe sajan lovestory soo much more beautiful. If you people keep on doing this then how am i going to sleep with sajan thoughts everywhere.

Anyways bad joke i know seriously it was a pleasure to read it.

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<div>Reeshu



Thanks a lot 😊
You sleep and see saJan in dreams too 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: samrat_anki

wow...what a poem,....loved it



Thanks for the compliment 😊

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