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hi guys...i m writing fanfic. do read and comment...its my first try.. gunjan aur nupur ka clg mai second day hota hai.. g-di..mujhe yaha bohot ajib lag raha hai... n-gunjan tu fikar mat kar..mai tere sath hu..
g-di sab hame kyu dekh rahe hai...
n-ham is clg mai naye haina isliye..
diya aur samrat ate hai..
d-hi morenas....oh sorry..
g-diya sab hame aise kyu dekha rahe hai..
d-gunjan dear..dont worry ham haina..
s-vaise chasmish.........oh sorry i mean gunjan..tum to hamari class mai hi hona..
d-yes sammy gunjan hamari class mai hi hai...
s-tab to bohot mazaa ayega..😊
n-kyu...mazaa kyu ayega..
s-vo...
d-nupur common yaar ab ham sab dost hai..
s-ha....😊so gunjan friends..😊
samrat aur gunjan haat milate hai...fir sab canteen mai jate hai...
d-betho na tum dono..😊
n-ha..😊
s-to kya khaoge tumlog??😊
n-hmm..muje na pav bhaji khana hai..pata hai hamare morena mai ramu kaka ki pav bhaji sabse achi thi by god....😊
any-wat....ramu kaka...
sab haste hai...
d-nupur ye morena nahi hai..ye mumbai hai..😊
n-to kya mumbai mai pav bhaji nahi milti??
any-of oh tum kya pagal ho
s-any..mind ur language..😡
d-relax sammy..any to sirf mazak kar rahi hai..
g-di mujhe class mai jana hai..
n-thick hai chal....bye diya..
d-bye..😊
gunjan aur nupur apne class mai chale jate hai...jab gunjan class mai enter hoti hai to sab us par haste hai aur mazak udate hai...vo dar jati hai aur rone lagti hai...fir samrat ata hai..
s-ye sab kya ho raha hai....😡
student 1-hey sam..ham to sirf mazak...
s-shut up...😡
diya ati hai...
d-kya hua sammy??
s-candy..ye sab gunjan ki mazak uda rahe hai...
d-ohh....gunjan dont cry dear...
s-agar agli baar kisine bhi gunjan ko rulaya to mujse bura koi nahi hoga...dekh lena..😡
d-sammy relax....
s-gunjan agar agli baar kisine bhi tumse kuch kaha to mujhe keh dena...ok
g-...😭
s-gunjan pls ro mat...
d-gunjan now stop crying..
s-sab abhi isi waqt gunjan ko sorry bolo...
g-uski koi zarurat nahi hai...
s-zarurat hai chasmis.....i mean gunjan...
sab gunjan ko sorry bolte hai...
hey guys..its my first try so pls tel me how is it i know its very short but i have to go so...pls pls pls comment and pls be frank...ur comment r very precious to me....
hazra
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Soulmate_Sana thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its really an awesome start
mindblowing one
plz plz continue soon
and plz add me into ur pm list
sana.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWSOMEEEEEEEEE FF
I LOVED IT
CANT WAIT FOR UR NEXT UPDATE
PLES CONT SOON
N THANKS 4 THE PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great story..... 👏
Want too read it...soo please
cont soon and PM me..... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#5
tht was soooooooooo nicee plzz contuioed soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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reallyyyyyy it was awesomeeeee
gr8 starting
really loved it!!
thamxx for the pm!!
and continue soonn!!
really a rockin ff!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow superb hazra dii!! 😊😊
this ff is rocking!!!!!👏👏👏
plzz rite next part fast!!!!😃😃😃
continue rocking!!😳😳😳
thanxz for the pm!!
or i hav missed this wonderful ff!!!😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome updt..!!
gud start..!!!!
cont soon..
thanx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was very nicee....plz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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grr8888 start...
cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

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