Sat-Sun filler- Nakku-Datta FF - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is really good! Do continue.. 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good one...i like the post sups scene. and babi trying to stop naku...that was perfect.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey this is an awesome FF. If you provide pm service, plz do add me.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww, really cute!! loved it, continue soon! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankyou verymuch for liking the fan fiction 😊
Well guys I thought I will present a different avatar of Datta😍

So the brief summary of what happened after my previous fiction on Monday is something like this

After the breaking of engagement with Supriya, Nakku indirectly is the reason for lessening of the affect . Datta is slowly getting influenced by Nakku and her qualities. He eyes her with a different look. He likes her attitude and her approach towards life and how she takes all in her stride. When people around keep calling her Bhutini he feels offended.

He doesn't understand his feelings. Slowly he is thinking that he is falling for her . But he notices that she is good to all and not just with him.

When he is away from home for a few days earlier he would miss only Aayi and his sisters but of late he misses Nakku too. Bhaji sometimes jokes with him saying Bhau looks lost.

Any day when Nakku is not seen around he gets frustrated but cannot ask anyone.

Finally over a couple of pegs he realizes he is not sure whether he loves her but he is sure that she can be a very good partner to him in life. He wonders how his family will take it. He thinks they will understand him. He decides he should talk to Nakku before talking to his Aayi.

Well guys the story continues from here.

Datta is in a car coming back home. He thinks within himself "Why is it Iam feeling like a teenager at the idea of proposing to Nakusha"

As his car is entering inside he sees a lot of commotion inside. He wonders what is happening and is later with his gun.

A police van is outside his house and as he approaches the house he hears shouting from the outhouse. He heads towards the house and sees BAbi shouting at inspector More.

Datta shouts "Eh Kya horaha hai"

More turns towards him and says "Lijiye hum aap hi ke intezar kar rahe hai. Us din aap in logoko bachake achcha nahi kiya"

Datta syas "How dare you enter my house without my permission"

More brushes him off saying "I have not come to do harm to you. I have come to warn you about these people."

Datta ignores and More continues "Eh log dhoke bhaaj hai. Aap ne unhe sir bhitakar rakha hai. "

In the mean while Bhaji Rao and Aayi come there.

More who has come with a mission tells them "I have come to warn them not to play in your lives"

Datta says "We know to judge people U may leave now"

More says "Datta bhau bhi dhokha kha gayi na"

Babi, Nakku , her father are all with shocked expressions.

More continues to say "I will prove to you how badly they have ditched you all. They all always are like that. Initially they instill confidence and later take advantage of the situation"

Bhaji Rao says " Aap ne suna nahi bahu ne kay akaha"

More says " Jo mai bathane wala hoo uske baad apke bahu kudh dakhe marke baaher rnikalenege"

More says " U all don't believe na. He pulls Nakku in front and says "See her innocent face. She is not as innocent as she looks."

Datta is raged and says "Shut up"

More continues he goes and gets a piece of cloth and starts rubbing Nakku's face. Babi tries to stop but he pushes her aside and by the time a little of her face is revealed.

More tells "Everybody see for yourself what this mother and daughter are doing. They are applying colour to nakusha's face so that she looks horrible and gains other's sympathy. Now U all must have understood the real colour.

Everybody looks startled.

Nakku runs inside. More tells "Iam leaving now. My work is over. I have to tell their truth to you, that s why I have come. Its upto to you all if you keep them in your house"

He leaves and thinks inside now where will Nakusha go but come to me. I have used the correct weapon against her.

Datta is startled. Aayi says "Babi you come with your family . We have to talk to you all. Now I think you can clear the colour from your daughter's face now that we all know.

Datta doesn't say a word and goes away.

Datta is in his room and bangs the table hard. He remembers the scene in which he asks her to tell why Inspector More is after them. He remembers the scenes when all call her bhutini.

Bhaji RAo comes inside and tells him that Aayi is calling him as Babi's family has come.

He is getting down the steps with a stern face . They show the beautiful Nakusha with her mom and all looking at her with amazing expression. Bhaji Rao exclaims "Baap re baap kitni gori hai"

Nakku is looking at Datta who is getting down the stairs without looking at her. He comes and sits down and looks at Nakku who is staring at him. He looks very coldly at her and she bends down her face.🥺

End of the episode.

Well guys my questions are

1. Will Nakku's family be asked to leave.

2. What will happen to Datta- Nakku

If U have liked it this far may be I will continue in these lines.

Whatsay..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved this one yaar
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thats very nice sarala...i liked it that u have left it hanging...we dont know how datta will react to the whole thing.

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