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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: kahish-rox

post it in the fanfic forum or else this topic will be closed...great beginning!!!!

Thanks for telling me 😃, i didn't know!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mrs. Verma's party ( the one tushar and charu were supposed to go to).

The party is quite a lavish affair, as all or atleast most of the top businessmen and company execuetives have got together. ppl are meeting and greeting eachother after days, weeks,months or even years. Among the men there is the usual talk of shares, stocks but the spice of most conversations lies in who will be the most successful indian businessman of the year. On the other hand, the women are bzy gossiping or pretending to be nice to each other.
man 1= m1 man2=m2

m1: ' So, Mr. Pandey, what do u think ?who will bag the best Indian businessman award?'
m2: ' Hard to say anything, Mr. Singh, after all, some pretty good businessmen have made their comeback and I am sure that it will be a tough call between the G/R and Soyam Shergill!'
m1: ' Oh yah, heard that Sujal Garewal is alive and back. Well, if he still is the same then I agree with u, its going to be rough neck to neck competition. You know at times like these, I wish I too had an enemy to fight with whom the business world would become an open battlefield. I mean look at the G/R, and Soyam Shergill… so much happened to the G/R yet they r still out there and among the top ranks, and then consider Soyam Shergill, who knew him, b4 his enmity wid the G/R became common knowledge?
m1: ' I know what u mean. Infact when Sujal was still here, there was a time when all the top contracts seemed only to go to either Shergill or G/R. Both these companies wanted to outdo each other and they would end up working extra hard, which would result in only either one of them bagging the contracts.'
The two men continued to talk, while one of their subjects for the conversation, stood by and overheard everything. He took a glass of wine to his mouth and took a sip. As he put down the glass, he looked back to see his, Soyam Shergill's reflection. He thought for a while, about what the men had discussed and had to admit that there was some degree of truth in it.
s= soyam
s( to himself): ' I never thought about my enmity wid the G/R in such a way, but they do have a point. Alrite Sujal if having u alive means my professional success, then u live.Anyways, it will be more fun to see u die slowly and painfully at my mercy. Yeah, I will reduce to such pitiful state, that instead of me, u will kill urself. And to begin wid, ur lady love will have to hate u from the bottom of her heart. or better go away from ur life for good.'
Now seeing Charu, continues to think: ' And I see just the person to help me.'

Soyam walks over to Charu wid a rose in his hand.
s: ' Hello charu, long time no see.'
c: ' What is it, soyam? why r u bothering me?'
s: ' Such impoliteness! and that to the one who helped u get ur love.Oh, sorry I understand u still haven't been able to get Tushar, and I am not surprised. I mean kashish giving u competiton, how will u?'
c( glaring at him): ' It's nothing like that, tushar is my husband and no one can come between us.'
s: ' chaaaaaruuu, u r forgetting that kashish has already come b/w u too. I mean, u still haven't got him and she did.' ( he's implying the fact that kashish and tushar ,umm how do I say it, did it, while charu and him are still living like strangers)
Charu now in deep thought, listens to him and is looking over at Tushar, who is talking to others in the party.
s (he realizes as he sees Charu thinking, that she might not believe that kashish would try to ruin her marriage, and so he continues): ' Charu, u might not believe me, but its the law of nature. All beautiful and seemingly innocent things are dangerous. I mean, look at this rose, so beautiful and so innocent that it is considered to be a symbol of love and yet,' ( now he hands over the rose to her, it pricks her), ' it too has thorns.'
Saying so, he leaves, while Charu looks down and looks on the drop of blood forming on her finger, where the rose pricked her. She looked up and saw tushar, and then decided there and then, that she would remove the thorns between her and tushar's relationship from their lives, for good.

A car stopped outside the party hall, and a guy walked out. The camera follows him, as he enters the party, and then shifts on the surprised faces of the guests there, who recognized him.Wherever, he goes in the party, ppl stare at him in surprise, either of the fact that he was back or the fact that he still was the same, infact better at the same time. The men immediately had a new name to add to their list of businessmen,who could potentially bag the award, while the women had a hard time not to stare at him and discuss him. For the single senior yet young aged female execuetives he was the same guy whose affection was worth vying for, for mothers he was the perfect eligible bachelor for their daughters or nieces, and for the still young girls, he could have soon become an idol. His looks, his demeanor seemed changed, and whether this was an improvement or not was hard to say, as most in there were simply awed by him. What was the change? nobody could pinpoint it, as everything about him seemed to contradict each other. He was cordial yet cold, had unkempt hair yet managed to look completely sophisticated and if all was not enough he wore a small mickey mouse ring on his pinky. He finally made his way to the host of the party and as she turned around, she exclaimed: ' Oh Arun, u r finally here!'
thanks guys, for the encouraging comments, and yeah, i might only be able to continue on weekends, so till then enjoy and all comments are welcome. sorry, if my grammar or punctuation is messed up, i was in a hurry to write this and get reviews.....
Edited by nabz8888 - 19 years ago

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