MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 69

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Posted: 15 years ago

Amazing promo i am sooo tensed about MayUr what Nupur have...................?

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Posted: 15 years ago
great promo
but what happened to nupur?
and what doctor said?
honeymoon in singapore
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey, Daksha,

Interesting promo.

Why mayank didn't reply?

Pls update ASAP.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Dodi,

I just love the promo alot, OMG! Great Mayur are sooo emotional & romantic:) Hope the problems solve between them.
SG ohh! They're getting tickets for thier HONEY-MOON omg!
Can't wait for the next part!
You rock meri jaan:) Love ya<3
Aisho.
Posted: 15 years ago
omg whats wrong with mayur??
interesting promo!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice promo dear.............
do continue soon..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
UPDATED: PART 22
Scene: Mayank's Flat

Nupur enters with Anjali…….

N: Kal Mayank ka birthday hai…….aur pichli baar tumne mujhe surprise diya tha na………. kal dekhna main tumhe kaise surprise doongi……..

She puts the shopping bag which she brought from the market……….

N: Anjali……….hum papa ko kal bataayenge……dikha denge ki surprise dena humein bhi aata hai…….

Scene: Sehgal House


Samrat's Room……..

Samrat is going out wearing his formal coat for the office………Gunjan was coming in when he bumps his head with hers…….

S: Oh I am sorry……wo……main office ja raha hoon…….

G: Ji……..

Samrat steps down from the stairs and directly goes out of the house…….Gunjan is standing in the corridor watching Samrat going out……and Samrat's mother is standing in the loby……she sees Samrat leaves for the office……..and then raises her face and sees Gunjan standing there…….

SM (to herself): Kaisa hai ye ladka…..shaadi ke agle din hi chal pada office…….Gunjan ka chehra to dekho…….kisi ko bhi bura lagega…..main dekhti hoon issko shaam ko……

In the evening……..

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Nupur in the whole day prepared cake for Mayank…..

Mayank comes from office…….Nupur was in the bedroom…..

M: Nupur….paani…..

N: aa rahi hoon…..

M: Accha main khud le loonga fridge mein se…….

N: Nahinnnn…….ruko maine kaha na main aa rahi hoon……(she is worried that if mayank will open the fridge he'll see the cake)

Then Nupur comes and gives him water……

M (with his naughty smile): Nupur tum na ho to main pyaasa mar jaaunga……Accha ab doctor ke yahaan nahin chalna….

N: Haan chalo……

Scene: Sehgal House

Samrat enters…….puts his bag on the couch and sits there…..

Samrat's Mom also enters……..

SM: Aur kaisa raha aaj ka din Samrat…….office mein koi kuch keh raha tha……

S: Nahin kyun mom…..

SM: Ab teri shaadi ho gayi hai…..main tujhe daantoongi toh accha nahin lagega…..Gunjan ke liye bhi teri kuch responsibilities hain……shaadi ke pehle din hi koi office jaata hai kya……Itne log hain office mein par……hamaare Samrat ji ko hi sab kaam karna hai na……

Gunjan enters with a tray with cups of tea and some snacks…….

SM: Aao Gunjan beta……..baitho yahaan……….

She then gives honeymoon tickets to Samrat……

SM: Ye le tere honeymoon ki tickets………aur khabardaar jo maine Gunjan ki hansi ko gaayab dekha toh…….

SM(to Gunjan): Tu khush to hai na beta…….(she caresses her head)

Gunjan looking down and nods her head in yes…….

SM: Aur Samrat maine socha ki Singapore best jagah rahegi…….tera jaana pehchaana shehar hai…..apna ghar hai wahaan….aaram se rehna aur maze karna……

On hearing Singapore……..as if the floor went away below from his feet…….Singapore….the place where he and Dia met for first time……their beautiful memories…..he wanted to forget all this but now how can he go there ?

S: Par Mom……office mein bohot kaam hai……

SM: Main kuch nahin sunoongi……kuch din kaam se door rahega to tujhe thoda chaen milega….har waqt kaam kaam kaam……. Mujhe kuch nahin pata tum log kal jaa rahe ho and that is final………

Scene: Outside Doctor's Cabin

Receptionist: sir aap abhi yahaan wait kariye……abhi thodi der mein aapko call kar lenge…..

M: Theek hai…..

And they sit waiting outside the cabin…..

Mayank points out towards a calander on which there was a cute baby's poster…..

M: Ab na mujhe ek chota sa wo chahiye……

N: Kya calendar……tumhein apni birthday par pocket size calendar chahiye…….(making a face).

M: Nahin….usspar jo cute sa chota sa baby hai na wo…….

N (blushing): Hushh…… yahaan hospital main aisi baat nahin karte koi sun lega toh……

Then Receptionists calls Nupur Sharma……

Scene: Doctor's Cabin

M&N: Good evening doctor……..

D: Ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai Mrs. Sharma

N: Ab toh main bilkul theek hoon……

M: Ye reports hain…….aapne jo test kahe the wo subah karwa diye the……reports abhi counter se mili hain……..

He gives the envelope to the doctor………

After examining the reports…….

D: Jaisa mujhe lag raha tha………

M (very anxious): Sab theek toh hai na doctor……..

D: Oh oh…….no Mr. sharma darne ki koi baat nahin hai…….everything is fine……..but accha hua jo ye test samay par karwa liye gayye…….

N: Koi problem hai kya…….

D: Ji waise toh sab theek hai…….par aapki married life mein shaayad…….but you have a child…… I don't think ki koi problem honi chahiye……..

M&N: Ji aap saaf saaf kahiye…….

D: Dekhiye…… I want to say that……. Ki ye accha hoga ki aap ab koi baby plan na karein……mera matlab pehle bhi Nupur ki pregnancy mein bohot problem aayi theen……

Both Mayank and Nupur are hearing what the doctor is saying………..

D: Actually she is very weak internally……ek aur child…..it can be dangerous to her life……I hope you are understanding what I mean to say………

Both Mayank and Nupur are shocked to hear that…….they both could not believe their ears on what they heard right now………..It was shocking for them……They both stand up and leave…..

Outside Doctor's Cabin……

Both are walking out silently…….not looking at each other…….neither of them knows what happened…..how can it happen…..the only question in their mind was KYUN ?

Background Song: Chan Se Jo toote Koi Sapna (Om Shanti Om)

[Do listen to the song if you can it will help you to get that emotional feel]
Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Mayank drives the car back to home………both of them are sitting quietly not looking at each other……..remembering old memories……….

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

In the flat……….

Here also both are quiet……Mayank goes to the the bedroom…….sleeps on one side of the bed switches of the light……..Nupur too she sleeps on the other side……..

Roothi rothi sari raatein
Fikhe fikhe sare din
Virani si Virani hai
Tanhai si tanhai hai
Aur ek hum hai pyaar ke bin
Har Pal chin

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

But no one is sleeping………both are in their own thoughts……..whole room is quiet……

They don't know when they slept…….

In the morning……….

Patharo ki is nagari mein
Pathar chehre Pathar dil
Phirta hai mara mara
Kyun rahon mein tu awara
Yahan na hoga Kuch hasil

Mere dil
Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Mayank is standing by the window gazing outside at the sunrise………(still thinking about what the doctor said last night…..)

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage re

Nupur wakes up and sees that Mayank is standing by the window…..She gets up and quietly reaches nearby Mayank and whispers in his ears HAPPY BIRTHDAY……

He was so tensed that he didn't responded to her….he had not even heard what she said…….

Nupur understood that both of them need time and leaves from there……She was strong and was trying to show it since last night but she broke out……She was in the kitchen taking out the cake from refridgerator……tears rolling down her face……

She is putting the icing on the cake HAPPY BIRTHDAY…..M then A then Y……..her hands her trembling……she could not control her emotions and leaves from there to balcony banging the door……..

In the balcony she sat on the floor crying……crying hugging her knees close to her body…….

On hearing the banging of the door Mayank comes back to his senses…….he sees that Nupur is not there on the bed……..he moves out and looks for her in the kitchen…….he sees the cake placed at the slab…..beautifully decorated……but his eyes were searching for Nupur…….

Then he comes out and sees Nupur sitting and crying desperately in the balcony…….

He comes and puts his hand over her shoulders………..

Hey Guys thats it for now....... main samay se pehle aa gayi.........

Please iss part par comment zaroor karna.....iss par bohot mehnat ki hai......

Please zaroor bataao aur you can suggest also how the story should turn further.......Please

Love

Daksha

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ya......... wow amazing very nyc i wanted sum sajan scene.. anywayz hopefully next update main mil jayenga .......
but i seriuosly loved the bs. chalo i hope ab dia sam ka chap kahatam hojaye and sam accep[ts gun soon and yeh mayur ke saath ho gaya ...... i hope everythig will be back to normal soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update yaar
but plz samrat ko gunjan sa pyaa ho jaye i cant see them away from each other
and about update it was fabulas as usal
plz continue soonnnnnnnnnnn
and thanx for the pm
love
sana.
Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago

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