MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139

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Doyel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#691

wow daksha!!! this is amazing!!! tumhari mehnat sach mein bohot fruitful hai!!!!!!!
very nicely presented and the expression of the emotions and the use of words is very nice!!!!
keep it up!! 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

#692

Hey Dakhsa

what a part dear

I feel so sad for Nupur

Mujhe issi baat ka darr tha

Hope they both get over it

On the whole Awsome update

do continue soon

Luv
Nidzy~

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Ijya

@ijya

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#693

First of all congo for completing 100 pages.........⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Congo Dakshu..........👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Aur OMG sach mein itna acche se express kiya hai sab kuch superb but I am feeling sad for MayUr............

And the song suits the situation a lot...........really awesome job 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#694

awesome update!!!
but....please show mayur happy in the next part
cant see them sad 😭 😭
waiting 4 sajan's honeymoon
thanks 4 the PM
continue soon

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#695

oh gosh daksha..😲.
feelin very sad 4 mayur....cryin very badly😭....
waitin desperately 4 d next update .. curious abt mayur & sajan both.😔..
pls continue soon...👏
👍🏼luv u..🤗
-supriya

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@thejazzgal

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#696

hey

feeling sad on the story of mayur!!

waiting to read nxt update eagerly!!
do cont soon
muuah!!
me waiting..

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#697

woww yaar u updated but it was a sad part 4 mayur na.........

but u wrote it verrry welll

d song was apt 4 da situation.........

continue soon...............................

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Aisha

@theaisha

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#698

Perfect update Dodi,

Mayur make me CRY:D

OMG! I feel very sad for them:)

Ohhh! Shocking!

Nupur life in dangerous!

Ufff!

Jaag soona lage '' It was very SAD part '' ,

OMG! The hug was beautiful:P

Mayur are made for each other:)

Keep updating,

You rock meri jaan:P

With love<3

Aisho

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#699

hey daksha.

i am sooo sowie,. i am so pressed for time so can't give a detailed comment man but saw your pm came soooo way back so just had to read it before i leave, i am sooo sad to see them sad, i hope things get better for them, pleaseeeeeee don't make it really depressing na, well written man, keep it up!