ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-RN fic-[imp note-pg 149]24/05 - Page 96

Originally posted by: nisha1984

Yay finally you are back

Awesome update as usual thanks dear😊😊

God Raj kitna shamata hai lekin Naina bhi kuch kam nahi....... ab raj sharmaayega nahin to vo raj thode na rahega😆😆

Drunk haal main bhi Raj ka haal bigad diya......... Biwi ho to aisi...... yup naina abse full biwi mode par hai😉😉😉

Anyway this update was more romantic and we would like to see more updates like these.......... thanks dear...i m glad that u liked this update😃😃

Please keep updating...... thankyou soooooo much for commenting...keep reading😊

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Tumhe ye bakwas aur mindless part lagi??? Well then dear......tum na aise hi mindless updates karti jao....padhna to hamein hai na....we'll gladly oblige dear!!😃😃 Aur phir tumhe to pata hona chahiye tumhare kitne saare readers DIMAGLESS hai...😆😆 hehehehehe....ab pata chal gaya mujhe ki aap sab ko mindless updates pasand hai to aage se koshish karungi ki update likhte waqt apne dimaag ko side par hi rakhun😆😆

Anyways....abhi main part pe ati hu...

It was definitely veryyyyyyyyyyyy nice n cute!! The very first dialogue of Raj...."ghooma nahi raha tha....wapas laa raha tha"....that was really funny....maine bhi yehi socha tha ki wo ghooma thodi raha tha....but then Naina to drunk hai na...😆😆...lekin phir bhi ye ladki baaz nahi ayi....Raj ne sahi kaha...drunk ho ya na ho....Raj ko kaabu karna inhe achhese ata hai....pehle chikhke aur phir roke...jaise bhi ho...Raj ko apni baat manwa hi leti hai...😆😆

yup naina kabhi bhiraj se kuch bhi karwaa sakti hai aur usse ye baat peene ke baad bhi nhn bhooli😆😆😆and i guess naina ka ye ghoomaane waala dialogue iss baar sab ka common favourite raha....and i guess i cant be more happy😃😃

Mera....hamara wali logic mast thi...and Raj must hav looked super cute wid closed eyes that tym...😳😳😳....and then button kholne-lagane wali baat....and uspe Raj ka expression...🤣....it was all sooooo funny. hehehhee...i m soooo happy that u liked all these dialogues....well mera personal fav hai vo mera-hamara waala dialogue😉

But at the end....Raj didnt kiss her bak...may be bcoz she was not in her senses...but is that all or there is sumthing more to it? Anyways....Naina is now hurt...and I hope Raj soon gives in...😉😉 hmmmm ab ye part to next update mein aayega.....and all i can say iss zyada mat socha my fic not that complicated..it has only light moments just for fun and masti....ahh abhi tak to aisi hi fic hai in future i cant say anything kyunki uske baare mein abhi socha nhn😆vaise bhi dimaagless logon ko sochna mana hai😆😆

Dekho dear.....mujhe to ye update bhi har update ki tarah mast lagi....tumhe kyun nahi lagi tum hi jano...😕...anyways...abhi mujhe next part ka besabhri se intezaar hai....try to continue soon pls.😃😃 thankyou soooo much for commenting and keep reading😊😊

Originally posted by: guglu088

Tumko ye update mindless, incomplete aur dimagless lagi???😲 main kuch nahin boloongi nahin to sab maarenge😛😛

Well, tumhari jaankari ke liye bata dun ki mujhe ye update bahut hi cute laga. Naina ne kya mast kaha god me lekar ghum rahe the.😆 hehehehe naina ko sachi chadi hui hai 😆😆Aur bechara Raj, har maamle me Naina usse do kadam aage nikli. Aur wo button kholne aur button karne wali baat, aur Naina ka change karte wakt Raj ka aankhen band karna, fir Naina ka usse rokna aur Raj ka reaction, it was all too nice. thankyou soooo much for liking all these parts....i'll try to write better in the future😊 Par Raj ne khud ko rok liya aur Naina is hurt.😭 Kyun kia Raj ne aisa. next update mein pata chal jaayega.....soooo wait dear

M waiting for the next update. thankyou sooo much for commenting and keep reading..... and i'll try to update soon😊

Please continue soon.

Love
Guglu.

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Soooo cute....!!!!

Arey nice part ko bekaar kehti ho...??? I think you have lost touch with fics.....so you better keep updating fast and brush up your reading skills, as i think your writing skills are still the same...!!!!! 😉 hehehehehe....thanks for praising my writing skills😊😊😊 and i do read many fics and i love themm all😊😊

The whole update was very funny....drunk Naina is much more funnier than sober Naina....at leasst she fights less with Raj and kisses him more....!!! 😆😆😆 hehehhehee..i love this observation ofurs... i didn't think this way....but goood work dear..😊

Update soon....waiting to know why Raj didnt kiss his wife back...??? wait for next update dear...

thanks for commenting and keep reading😊😊

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

cuteeeee...!!!!

tumhe yeh bekaar lagta hai?? 😲 well...lagta hai tumhare 'taste' mein kuch gadbadi hai...😆 😆 😆 hehehhehe...sabhi yahi bol rahe hain😆😆😆 well all i can say is majority wins!!!!!!!!!😆

Bhaai humein toh jaha RN ho...wahi achcha lagta hai...aur phir tumhara 'brand name' 😆 😆 shukriya mohatarama....😆😆

AND sabse IMPORTANT....SUCH A SUPERIOR PRODUCT !!! 😆 😆 😆hehehehhehehehe.....😊😊

toh tassalli hogayi ki humein UD achcha laga??? 😛 ya aur proof chahiye???na ji bilkul vishwaas ho gaya😆😆

Well coming to UD...

Update was supercute !! thanksss dear😊😊

Yeh Naina drunk hoke hi Raj ki bolti barabar bandh kardeti hai ! 😆 😆ab vo naina hai yaar!!!!!!!!! bhoolgaye lrl????jab wahan jaan nhn chodi raj ki to ab to shaadi ho gayi😆😆😆

All the RN scenes were very nice and funny too ! 😆 😆

But....

why did he hurt Naina like that?

Did he stopped himself just because Naina is drunk or there is something else??? next update ka wait to karna hi padega😆

Now please Update soon...😊 with longer update...

YEH BAHOT CHOTA THA.....SHURU HONESE PEHLE HI KHATAM HOGAYA !!! 😆 😆 😆 hehehehhehe....mujhe bhi aisa hi lagaaa😆😆par kya karun kuch aur samjh hi nhn aa raha tha but i'll try to update soon and yes a longer one this time😊😊..

thanks for commenting and keep reading😊😊😊

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Thanks a lot for updating.Waiting for ur update very eagerly.

now come to update, it's superb, brilliant part. thanks dear...i m glad that u liked this update

loved the way naina ne raj ki baat bandh kara deti hain,and upar se oh drunk hain.loved it. hehehehe ab se naina ko drunk hi rakhne ka soch rahi hun😆

loved the conversation between raj and naina and their cute and funny scenes. i'll try to include scenes lie these in the coming updates too😊😊😊

but lasst mein iye smajh mein nehi aaya, raj didn't kiss naina drunk hain or something else. next update mein clear ho jaayega dear...tilll then wait karo😉😉

now pls pls update soon.

thanks for commenting and keep reading😊😊