Santu Leaving M-Mansion Part 1

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Friends,
i really got irritated with this track and i want santu to leave that pagal khana as soon as possible to have her rest of the life in piece.
Please feel free to provide your comments (negative or positive) on this.
Santu Leaving M-Mansion – Part 1:

Santu was there in M-Mansion for almost 2 months and settle down all the things. During that period every body except Suraj insulted her a lot. Her heart was broken because of their behaviour but still she stays there to settle the thing. Actually she felt to leave that house the day one when DM insulted her infront of every body by saying that now she is not his wife. But suraj and Champu stops her by saying that because of you PAPA came out from that bad situation and rest of the family member's reunion just to send you out from this house. Suraj says that Maa I know you are not the real murderer and I missed you a lot. Please for my sake you stay here and keep every body straight. Santu heart again melts by listening maa from suraj mouth and tells him that ok, I will make every thing straight don't worry and places a kiss on his forehead.

She tells herself that, I did so much for others. But I never did any thing to suraj. Actually I did wrong with him. I left him when he needed my badly by taking that crime on my head to save that ungrateful birwa. Atleast now I got a chance to do some thing for him. I will make things clear as he asked and then I will leave this house for ever. And I am not going to tell any body about this decision. I will keep it as secret.

She works really hard to make the things straight. No body was there to support her in that house. Suraj is there but no body listens to him as he is younger to every body. And champu is also there but she is a made in that house. First she starts with

Moulik and Sandy. She takes help from shashank to follow them for 2 days. Shashank appoints a person for that. One day the person caught them red handedly when they were doing their business. The person immediately calls all the village people there first then he calls DM there. All the villagers gathers there before DM comes. Every body was starts throwing stones on them by scolding their family members. They don't know about them and their family members as it is not a part of Dharampur. DM comes there and sees every thing. They calls Police and hand overs both of them to Police infront of DM & Moti. Moti was totally shocked and she don't have any words to tell. Every she was not crying also. DM sees at Moulik and Sandy and just looks at Moti then comes back to the M-Mansion. When they were in Car DM remembers santu words about them and starts thinking about her positively.

He shouts on Moti and Kaddu like any thing for supporting them. He asks Moti that you don't know what your son is doing? You don't know what your husband is doing? What the hell you are doing in this world? When you are least bothered about your family members? He says only this much to Moti and turns towards Kaddu and says

You left a diamond for this stone. I don't want tell any thing to you. You are not deserved to be a wife for a diamond like Shashank. I really say thanks to god for making you people apart. He really deserves a nice person. By saying all these he starts moving towards his room. He saws suraj and santu who were standing in front of suraj room. Santu moves out from that place as soon as DM starts looking at her. Suraj follows her.

Then she starts dealing with Khemi, as now she became more irritating person than others. She always try to blame Kaddu and Moti for what Sandeep and Moulik did. She literally made them to work like a mades. She starts insulting them like any thing. Kaddu & Moti starts feeling bad for their position. No body was able to control Khemi as DM gave the keys to her.

Santu goes to jail and tells every thing to Moulik abt khemi behavior with Moti and Kaddu. Moulik got irritates and reveals the secret that Arjan is not DM long lost son. Moulik, Arjan and Khemi together made him as DM son so that they can get some money. Santu got shocked by knowing this truth. He asks santu to go and reveal the secret. But santu says that if she tells also no body will believe her. Then moulik says that don't worry. I have DNA report original copy in my room along with some letters and documents. Which proves that Arjan is not DM long lost son. Just take it and make sure that it will reach DM. He will take care of every thing

Santu was so happy and leaves the place. She asks suraj to get the papers, as she stopped entering into the house. After that day when every body came to know abt Moulik and Sandeep she decides her self that she is not going to enter into that house. She stopped eating food also there. She started doing some work to earn money for her own and she started cooking her self. Suraj and Champu feels bad for that but some how she makes them to convince. No body else know about that still.

Suraj gets the papers and shows to Santu. Santu gives it to shashank and asks him to courier those papers to DM office address. One fine day DM receives those papers and comes to home in a angry mood. He takes left and right of Khemi for what she did and he asks her to leave his place immediately. No body supports her. They even didn't try to stop DM from doing this. In fact every body feels happy for that. Moti and Kaddu feels really happy. DM takes the keys from her and gives it Toral. Moti gets little bit upset as she was expecting that DM will give the keys back to her. He asks toral to take care of the house as she is the elder (only One) daughter in law of that house. Baa and bapuji tries to tell DM that he can give that keys to Santu. DM just looks at them. But suraj tells that Santu maa is not going to take the keys as she stopped having the food which is cooked in this house. He also says that she started earning money on her own. By saying this he leaves the place by leaving rest of the family in shocking mode.

Santu thinks her self that now I have left out with only one work. I need to disclose about Birwa truth. But what I will get? She thinks that whether I am going to get any thing or not different issue. But I should disclose this also. Then she remembers moulik words when she was in jail. She thinks that moulik knows some thing about this murder so I should make him to tell DM that I am not the actual murderer.

She goes to moulik place and starts telling that she is feeling very bad for moulik position. He got surprised and asks why? She says that you know how selfish DM is? (For the first time in her life she says some thing bad about others. She feels really bad for that. But she do that as she knows that there is not other option left out for her to prove Birwa as killer) Moulik asks what are you telling? She says that you know right? I was not the real killer? He says yes. She asks you know the real killer name? he asks who? She says it's birwa. She continues by saying, you should be in birwa position and should run the business, as you know much about diamonds and also you are more experienced than birwa. She starts putting some jealous on Moulik mind. Moulik feels jealous easily and tells that I will tell DM about this. Santu asks him that but how? We don't have any proof right? He says that I will tell him that I saw when she is killing him. I will tell that these many days I kept quite by thinking her as my sister and DM as my PAPA. But I broken all my relations with that family, when he him self sent me to jail. Inside santu feels happy but tells him that be careful while talking to DM. Moulik says that now I will see what Dharamraj Mahiyavamshi will do? Whether he will try to save his daughter or he will punish her. He write a letter to DM by putting every thing (what ever he did till now) and finally he says that Santu is not the real killer. Birwa is the culprit how murdered Arjan and santu took blame on her head to save birwa. He finish his letter by saying that, if he don't have faith on his words, he can check with birwa and sends it to DM

DM got totally became panic by knowing this fact. He will force birwa to accept the truth in his own way. God knows what kind of situation Birwa needs to face when every body comes to know about this truth. I am not in the position to imaging any thing about this now. So I am leaving this part here it self only.

Suraj and champu comes to Santu and tells that now every body came to know about the truth. Mean while all the family members comes to santu place and starts telling some thing (u ppl can expect what they will tell right?). santu tells them that now I am happy that you ppl came to know abt the truth. Actually I only did the mistake by talking that on my head. You ppl no need to say sorry to me and she goes into the store room and close the door by leaving all the family members there only.

DM listens every thing by staying in living room. He feels shame to show his face to his wife. He remembers all what she did for him and what he did with her. He also remembers how rudely he and his family members behaved with her. Just he goes to his room by feeling bad for his behavior.

After some time suddenly hears suraj words and comes out from the room. He sees suraj, who is crying like a baby. He didn't get what exactly was going on there. He comes down to living room and founds every body there only. And he also founds that every body was in sad mood. He asks what happened? No body was able to answer them, but champu says that Maalik, maalkin is leaving the house. DM got shocked, as he never expected that. He asks what? Mean while suraj g face and starts shouting on him for the first time in his life.

He starts asking why u r so shocked? You your self wants her to leave the house right? You know what all she did to get the truth in front of you? Mean while shashank comes there and asks suraj what happened? Why he called him and asked him to come there ASAP? He just turns round and have a look at all the family members faces. Suddenly he remembers santu and asks suraj about her. Suraj hugs him tightly and tells "Jiju, Maa left the house" with crying. Shashank got shocked he asks what? Suraj repeats the same and says that Maa told me that she is leaving the house and going some where as she done with her work. Shashank understood where she has gone and asks Suraj to come with him by saying that don't worry I know where your mother and my friend gone. I will take you there. They both leaves the place by leaving the DM and other family members shocked

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sanrajlover thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Cool!..I like the idea that Santu leaves the house...at least she can re-enter the house with some respect n honour...when the family members go 2 collect her themselves out of their own free will...knowing that she is innocent and pure.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow vidya di.........you are too good.........I liked this part becuase it shows that santu had to put up with lot of things and hence decided to live her life according to her diginity and pride...........amazing di..............looking forward to read more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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viduyudiii,

u makes this amazing by doing correct justice to Santu & giving punishment to other family member by Santu living them.

i really love ur this post the most.
waiting for ur next part.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww - vidya you did justice with santo - thats gd - this way DM will bring her back i hope !!!!!!

i actaully think some of this will happen in real life xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Vidya ji,👏 I feel it like a real episode really,👍🏼
just love it, and speechless🤗
Waiting for ur part 2😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr8 episode,Vidya!👏🤗👏
I'm happy dat she decided 2 leave M-mansion.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice One Vidya,

Truly no one deserves santu and santu should leave the mad hell hole ASAP
Edited by anna44 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Good idea and I am sure Ekta Mai will steal some of your ideas.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thx every body for liking it.
Tmrw i will update this thread with second part

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