Yearning ........ a short episode (2)

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: lotus1963
I am sure the creatives read them.
Skep yes if not publish books at least get started with screenplays!!

PLS Skep.

Padma

Paddy, ❤️

Read abt yr post in my last thread.................at the end of the day we are such escapists. Well we are, 😉 and a bit of day dreaming don't hurt nobody...................... 😳 😳 😳

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mitts
Well Again a beautiful one!!!!! I love ur words yaar awesome!!!!!!!!!!

Well Mitsy............. since Tanya specially asked for this epi, it increases the number in the series to 5. I hope you dont mind. Hopefully, we can now see a regretful Mr Deshmukh........ in my story at least.

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: samarth_050

Your kind of writing is one of the reasons I am returning to this forum regularly-a forum which I have hit from a Google search for PR on net and first visited out of curiosity. Then I have read your perspective on Manav and pleasantly surprised at the depth. Subsequently I came across talented analysis which was definitely a level above mediocrity in actual serial [though along with flashes of genius].

Thanks again for such entertainment.

Thank you for the words of appreciation. Believe me they mean a lot. ❤️

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: FunLuvingGirl
wow skep. that was so beautiful.
luved it, specially the third last para beautifully described.
really creative, plz do write more. 😊

-soma

Hello Soma................... we're interacting for the first time. I have been watching your VMs and I must say they are fab. I don't see PR regularly and often ask Resh to fill in the blanks for me which she does promptly. The rest of the nuances I get from yr VMs. Thanks .

Keep on reading my stuff as I shall keep on viewing yr stuff. Hopefully in the next 3 epis you will come across more paragraphs like the one you've liked here!!

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grofers

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

U are simply awesome in writing thank so much for this wonderful post...I had such a bad day but ur post made me feel good:)
Thank u so much 😃
I can't wait for tom post

Edited by nishr - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Those simple things that you have put here like he waits so she would serve him, he keeps half the food for her, the way they meet on the staircase and the fact that he is already regretting his decision...everything is so beautifully put together.Without watching the show you caught the essence of Archana-Manav's love story. You proved that you know Archana-Manav more than CV's who created them.I just hope those dumbstructives there at BT have at least an iota of talent you have. It would make it so easier for us to love this show more and more skepi...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

aah! once again skeppo 😍 u r such an awesome story-teller......luvd every line of it......u hve quite a vivid imagination.....cld almost see the ep enfold bfore my eyes...... thats the power of quality writing 😊

Manav's yearning seems to find its true outlet thru yr words......nd u hve made him cme alive more than the visual medium cld ever achieve....there ws intense passion in Manav's thoughts & action......he alwys knew wat he wanted......who he wanted....bt his destiny & circumtances hve never been kind to him.......such a tragic soul.......hope Bappa wll give him the courage & tenacity to fight thru this........nd cme triumps.