Yearning ........ a short episode (2) - Page 2

Your kind of writing is one of the reasons I am returning to this forum regularly-a forum which I have hit from a Google search for PR on net and first visited out of curiosity. Then I have read your perspective on Manav and pleasantly surprised at the depth. Subsequently I came across talented analysis which was definitely a level above mediocrity in actual serial [though along with flashes of genius].

Thanks again for such entertainment.

Originally posted by: Tanyaz

👍🏼 👏 👏 👍🏼

BRILLIANT, FANTASTIC.

Thank you so much .

May you find th the best looking and the most wonderful guy ever and may he treat you like a princess , always . Hahahahaha

This was wonderful . You know skep, this is what I want to see , manav realising what he has done . Archana's love , her beauty , her innocense , her dignified behaviour almost haunting him .

Him being unable to sleep and just dying to touch her .

Thank you so much baby , you are a special girl . thanks again ....love you loads .......👍🏼

Originally posted by: Tanyaz

I am so happy she didn't let him touch , she stopped him.👍🏼

Very good .

I have this very strong feeling that the CVs of PR also read your writings . If they do then please this one will increase the adrenalin level of all the viewers.

Very romantic and very passionate .

Nickita is goimg to love this too . I am sure of it .

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Absolutely right Tanyaz... I want something of this sort to happen... Manav slowly realizing Archu's goodness... coming to know the truth... feeling sad and ashamed... and finally deciding that it is easier to die than live without Archu.

Everyone makes mistakes, Manav made a mistake too... indirectly and unintentionally his decisions and anger caused a lot of hurt to Archana... but not everyone has the courage to stand up and accept their mistake in the open and rectify it. I want Manav to prove to be such a person.

Bas I want one more thing... after coming to know the truth about Aai, I want Manav to shout at her. Waiting eagerly for that day.

Originally posted by: Tanyaz

I knew you would like it . Brilliant isn't she . Thanks both of you

I hope the show itself can match up these brilliant little scripts .

Skep I used to tell you to write books . Dump the idea . Hahahaha......anything y'say ma'am. 😉

Girl , you should go script writing for movies . You have the talent for it .

Originally posted by: tasnime

ohhh wow skep !!! that was just beautiful, amazing, priceless ! u should send ur writings to the creatives .. I so wish sthg like ths happens in the show too .. nd I completely agree wid wat Tanya nd Nikita said ..