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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Hey Anu

Awwwsome update dear

chappals hmm............

agar next update tak sab theek nai hua tou zaroor padenge chappal

I feel very sad for Mayank

I hope soon Nupur realises her love for Mayank

plz do continue soon

luv
Nidzy

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anu123456

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: mayurarti
Hey Anu

Awwwsome update dear

chappals hmm............

agar next update tak sab theek nai hua tou zaroor padenge chappal

I feel very sad for Mayank

I hope soon Nupur realises her love for Mayank

plz do continue soon

luv
Nidzy

mxt update tho mayu gets really hurt.... i think u cn b ready wit chappals 😊

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anu123456

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Hi Anu,
Very nice and lovely update.
Loved ithe update so much
its describe the feelings of mayank beautifully.
it was too good
update next part soon
Plz try to add the link when u pm so its easy 4 us to access.
Take care

hey thnx a looooot

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anu123456

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Next day at college nupur waitin for mayank.. he s playin basketball... she s waitin for him sittin on de stairs as usual... ahiraaj is sittin beside... she shows him deir colony party s fotos.....
she introduces evryone her mom dad mayu s mom dad n den ruku n den finally she says here me n mayu de great at one foto...

adhiraaj doesn seem to lik it.....

den dey were talkin n suddenly mayu comes n sits dere n relaxes n says hey nupsi tumhe pata hain we ve got selected... n nupur: wow mayu its so great

mayu: aur tum he pata hain

dat time adhiraaj cuts in.. pls mayu.. its very rarely that i get nupur alone.. so pls if u cud...

mayank gets al sad n embarassed n he gets up... he says i m .. i m sorry.. i m such an idiot.. i . i shud hav thot bout it... nupsi i m in de canteen i m leavn .. n he goes off...

nupur s standin n she has tears in her eyes.. she turns and shouts at adhiraaj... hw dare you say lik that to him

adhiraaj:nupur i jus wanted to talk to u for some time

nupur: what the hell is it dat u want to say in private n not in frunt of him.. dont ever repeat it she takes her bag n storms off to the canteen..

dere she sees him sittin n she has tears in her eyes she sits beside him... im sorry mayu ..

hey koi baath nahin hain nupsi..

nahin mayu mujhe pata hain tumhe bahut bura laga...

arrey nahin yaar..

pucca(lik a kid she asks ) sittin beside him

den he says haan pucca baba..

den she puts her hand around him n says acha den buy for me a burger n shake n den dey both laugh.....

nxt day at coll...

mayu tum yahan pe ho.. mein tumhe kabse doond rahin hun

chalo .. movie dekhne chalthe hain...

mayu also gets xcited

haan chalthey hain

adhiraaj bhi hain..

mayu s lik tum log jao na.. mein aake kya karunga

kya mayu.. mein aaj thak kabhi tumhare bina gayi hun kya....

n she kind of pulls him n goes

wen she reaches dere adhiraaj : woh actually sirf do hi ticket hain

mayu: haan koi baath nahin hain tum dono jao.. mein isse kah raha tha ki i don wanna come

nupur: nahin mein nahin jaa rahi

mayu: cmon nupur tum jao na..

nahin tumhare bina bilkul nahin..

mayu says adhiraaj brot it so luvingly u hav to go .. lekin mayu.. lekin wekin kuch nahin .. nahin mayu.. tum jaa rahe ho.. bas .. lekin..nahin mayu .. mein nahin// but he doesn listen n he forces her n makes her sit inside de car.. n she keeps lukin thru de glass......

n mayu als has tears in his eyes

durin de movie.. nupur feels sumwat she sys she has a terrible head ache n she leaves in between....

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

wow Anu

loved the part

thanks for the quick updates dear

I'm in love with this FF

keep updating

I'll be waiting

luv
Nidzy

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maizis

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

hey loved it!!!!

its so light hearted and cute!!!
plz include me in ur pm list!!!!

thnx

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anu123456

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Nxt dy....

mayu... mayu.. coll nahin jaana hain kya mayus mom: woh tho subah hi gaya kisi practise ke liye.. tum he nahin bataya nupur: nahin.. mayu s : usne tumhe kyun nahin bataya ...strange....

nupur feels sad.. she goes to coll.. classes goin on .. n she doesn enter cos mayu s not dere in class....

den seh goes to library..

hey sanju tum ne mayu ko kahin dekha..

no nupur.. i din see him wat happened.. siamese twins fought huh..

nupur: no nuthin lik dat..

eve after class she sees mayu n she screams out to him mayu mayu..

meanwhile mayank goes fast n reaches suhaani s car n asks her if she cud giv him a lift...

neverthless to say she ws really happy .. den after gettin inside car.. she asks if dey cud go to an ice cream parlour...

nupur soon takes her scooty n follows dem.. n she sees both of dem in de ice cream parlor n gets upset n leaves..

suhaani: i cn see dat nupur is avoidin u dese dys after she s been wit adhiraaj

mayank: no .. nuthin lik dat..

suhaani: newys which ice cream do u want to order.. mayu remembers hsi moments wit nupur wehr dey xchange deir ice creams..

he s snapped out of his thots by suhaani. he says butterscotch..

de waiter brings ice cream.. suhaani asks .. cn i do sumting.. n she s bout to xchange.. mayu stops her in between n says please.. ( he s overcome wit emotion ) n he leaves from dere......

after 2dys in de evening colony park.. mayu s parents n nupur s parents r sittin n mayu n nupur sittin down beside de chair

mayu s dad: yeh bachoon ko kya hua aaj..

nupur s dad: tum dono itne chup chap kyo ho

mayu s mom : usually cos of dese 2 people we cant evn talk properly cos of deir shaittani..aaj kya hua

den myu s dad gets up n asks kya hua nupur beta

nupur gets up n lik a small kid.. patha hain uncle.. do din hue mayu ne mujhse baat thak nahin ki

mayu s dad: kya hua mera beta bol nahin saktha kya

mayu: chup raho papa

mayus dad: to tum bol sakthey ho.. to tum meri beti se baat kyun nahin kar rahe..

mayu: mein nahin.. yeh mujshe baat nahin kar rahe...

nupur: isine muje zabardasti adhiraaj ke saath movie jaane ke liye kahan.. mujhe bin bataaye coll chala gaya .. aur to aur us suhaani ke saath ice cream bhi kaane gaya..

mayu s dad: ab yeh suhaani koun hain

nupur: his admirer( she says in a sarcastic manner)

mayank: oh ho .. tum hi tho humesha se kahthi thi ki suhaani se pyaar karo.. suhaani se pyaar karo..ab mein usse pyaar karke hi rahunga

nupur: tum pyaar karo ... mujhe kya hain.. jisse chahe pyaar karo

den mayu s dad interferes...

agar tum log jagda bandh nahin karenge to iss papa ko aur us papa ko bahuth dukh hoga.. agar tum log frens nahin bane to dono mummyyaan bhi rone lagegi.... tum dono jaise aur koi nahin hain.. tum bahuth special ho... hey bhushan mujhe rona kyun aa raha hain .. mein ne drinks bhi nahin ki.. den all laugh

n dey bcome frens by shakin hands

n den dey bring chicken lollipop... dey both take n den xchange.... smile...

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nanchie sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

great part
i hope mayur will be together soon
continue soon

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Hey Anu

lovely part dear

Wow Nupur missing Mayank

And Mayank avoiding Nupur

I hope Nupur realises Mayanks love for her

do continue soon

luv
Nidzy

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anu123456

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

nupur asks mayank to meet suhaani as her dad has come.... n she wanted her dad to meet him..

suhaani n her dad wait for mayu in de hotel to hav lunch

suhaani calls nupur.. mayank kahan hain

nupur: he got out long back he s supposed to reach dere .. hw come he hasn reached til nw...

suhaani: its ok nupur.. mayank se kehna mujhe koi shikayath nahin hain aur papa ko bhi.. she cries

her papa says no problem.. woh kisi kaam me phas gaya hoga...

mayank returnin to his house in his bike .. whil ehe s parking

nupur: tho kaissa tha ur meeting with future father in law

mayank: woh.. unhe bathuth ghamand tha

nupur: acha...

mayank: haa woh business ke baare mein singapore .austalia aise bade bade baathein kar rahe they

nupur:enuf.. wen hav u started lyin to me mayu.... suhaani ne mujhe fone kiya bechaari ro rahi thi.. wen hav u stared bein so cruel....hum dono ke beech kya hua .. we hav nevr lied to each other ....

mayu: sorry nupsi ... tears in his eyes... but pls i cannot see her in dat way.. yeh tum use bhi samjhaana ... mujhse nahin hoga .. i m sorry....

nxt day mayu meeting suhaani...

suhaani: mujhe pehle hi samajhna chaahiya tah.. lekin mein yeh nahin samajh paa rahin hun ki tum nupur se kuch kyun nahin kehthe

mayu feels uncomfy.: he says kya kehna hain .. kuch bhi tho nahin hain

suhaani: kuch bhi nahin hain.. tum uss e

mayu: ha ..ha mein usse pyaar kartha hun..(he shouts). bachpan se leke aaj thak kabhi bhi usse jhoot nahin bola.. aur jab kal usne mujhse kahan i felt so low.. lekin promise me suhaani.. u will nvr tell this to anyone.... and i jus hope nupur will never get to know about this....

suhaani nods.... n promises

the last day of college

nupur with adhiraaj all r teasin me yeh kahke ki i ws de one who said i will nvr go in for campus luv n nw see....

ahiraaj: vaise mein ne dadi ko bathaya n woh tumhe dekhna chaahthi hain...

nupur:oh god ... mujhe .. mein nervous ho rahin hun

scene splits to mayank n suhaani... suhaani: aaj mein delhi jaa rahi hun papa ke saath.. jab mein choti thi i alwys wanted to go to delhi.. i nvr wanted to stay here with mom ... n nw wen i don want to go i m goin.. i feel i m losing many tings mayank... wat ever i give i never get in return thats y everyone calls me world bank... hain na... n she gives him autograph book mayank writes :"sorry for all the pain that i hav given u" they part from there..... after two days adhiraaj comes with his daadi to nupur s house mayank is also dere...his daadhi kind of doesn lik mayank .. wen adhiraaj introduces.. nupurs parents n adhiraaj and his daadi.....

daadi: tum log yehan par hi settled ho?

nupur s dad: haan .. pichle thees saal se.. meri beti nupur ko tho aap jaanthi hi hain aur yeh mayank hain mera dostha ka beta

daadi: haan baahar mili thi main.. ahiraaj ke papa aur mama states mein hain.. mein humesha kahthi hun un logon se yehan aake rehne ke liye .. lekin meri kaun suntha hain...

daadi: to ab padayi tho puri hui .. tho ab aage aapne shaadi ka socha hain

nuupr s dad: agar nupur aagey padna chahthi hain tho woh pad sakthi hain..

daadhi:yeh ladkiyan zyaada pad lik khar kya karegi...

( nupur s mom bout to get up to make coffee mayank makes her sit n he n nupur goes to make coffee)

mayu:hey nupsi mujhe laghta hain yeh daadi baaraat leke aaj hi aa jayegi..

nupur: hey mayu .. mein kya karungi.. papa aur mamma ko hum ne abhi thak bataya bhi nahin... i jus hope daadi doesn say neting..

they bring de cofee

daadi : ab jab bachon ne sab thay hi kiya hain to hum bade kya kar sakthe hain...(nupur s parents r havin a surprised look) mayank n nupur has a we are gonna be dead kind of a look....

adhiraaj urges his daadhi: daadhi hum chaley

baath tho karney do ..

nahin humein abhi jaan ahain .. teek hain uncle aunt namasthey

from outside.. dadi kitni baar mein ne kahan aapse wahan jaake kuch math kehna....

tum chuup raho.. agar abhi nahin kahenge tho kab kahenge

menawhile here nupur n mayank bout to run upstairs.. wehr nupur s dad stops dem

ek minute... mayu mein ne nupur ko tumhare saath har jagah bheja movies shoppin aur tum ne usse kabhi roka nahin pyaar karne se.. mein ne tumhe bodyguard kie tharah samja aur tum .. tum ne ek baar bhi nahin roka use(he s jus join)

mayank dramatically: uncle.. ek baar kya sau baar nahin balke hazaar baar mein ne usse kahan nupur yeh pyaar vyaar ki chakkar mein math pado...

nuur: jhoote she shouts at him... papa isine mujhe green signal diya .. tab jaake mein ne haa ki...

nupur s father laughs.. vaise ladka bura bhi nahin hain

nupur: sachi paapa.. u r de greatest.. n nupur mayank n her dad hug.......