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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice precap.....Raj's sweet proposal n Naina's jealousy....wid a bit of fear of losing....interesting!!! Pls post the part soon.



thanks sweet heart mujhe pata hai ki ab tum sab aur jyada nahi ruk sakte.
So update is coming soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Can't wait to read the next part

please update soon



It's coming in sometime dear 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: springsign29

hey very nice precap as well romantic precap......plz ud soon



thanks dear 😛 😛 😛
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

oh waiting for update egerly plzzz do it ASAP.




thanks Namita dear 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

wonderful precap .update soon dear.



thanks a lot Rakhi 😃 😃 😃
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

hiiiiiiiiiii...........
the ud was.......
awesooooome..........
superb.........
excellent...........
do cont.soon.........



thank u Preeti jee,
take care
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Bus yaar tu precap post karegi, pata nahi kab update aayega?

Vaise nice one.
I am sure Raj is teasing Naina by taking name of Ritu.



Thanks aur jaldi hi aayega............
Vo to hai, sab ko jalan hoti hai na. 😉 😉 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

sweeto precap,👏 Raj to full romantic mode me lag raha hai na. Mast lag raha hai yaar jaldi se continue karo na plssssssssssssssssssssssss 😛



Bus darling wait khatam, update is coming. 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09

hiiii..........this is the first time m replying here
but i really liked ur story
Thanks for replying, thanks 4 likeness. 😉 😉 😉
😉
the way u have expressed all the feelings was just amazing
thank u again sweety 😃 😃 😃

i feel short of words to explain what u have done
it is very nicely written
are yaar chane k jhaad pe mat chada itna accha mai nahi likhti hoon. 😳 😳 😳

plz continue as soon as possible
luv preet



thanks a lot Preeti darling, 😊 😊 😊
Love u and take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 17

"Kya hua kya soch rahe ho?" she asked him.

"No, nothing." He said n smiled at Naina.

Raj bent on his knees and like a teenage boy he asked Naina, "Naina I love u, would u be my wife?" in a dramatic tone.

Naina smiled n blushed, "Vo to mai vaise bhi hoon."

"Nahi aise nahi poori tarah se." he winked her.

Naina blushed hard, "Dekhoongi, sochoongi kal parson kuch kahoongi." In a filmy tone Naina said.

"Theek hai to mai fir Ritu se hi kaam chalata hoon." He teased her.

"Kya kaha tum ne?" she asked shocked.

"Are kya kaha maine? Maine to bus yahi kaha na ki vahan KMA me ek female doc hain jo bahut hi smart, hot aur sexy hain n u know Naina vo mujhe bahut pasand bhi karti hain." He said in a dreaming tone.

Naina was fuming on Raj for being so rude.

"Naina tum jaanti ho har waqt vo mere aas paas hi rehti hain aur mujh se bus yahi kehti hain ki call me Ritu, aap mujhe jab Dr. Mishra bulate hain na to mujhe thoda bhi accha nahi lagta hai." He said to tease her more.

Ab Naina ka gussa bahut bad raha tha dheere dheere. "Tabhi mai sochoon ki tum ek ek hafte call kyoun nahi kar paate the mujhe."

Raj samajh gaya ki Naina se I love u kehalwana hai to ye game thoda aur pull karna hoga. "Haan Naina u know na ek saath itne saari cheejon ko handel karna kitna mushkil hai."

"Bus theek hai jaoo us se time paas karo mai chali." She said n went towards washroom taking her nighty in her hands.

Raj smiled at her n changing his dress he came to his bed n picking his cell he started talking someone. Jab Naina bahar aayi to us ne suna........

"Oh Ritu I miss u so much tum jaanti ho abhi mai bus tumahre baare me hi soch raha tha." Raj was saying.

Naina ka gussa ab apne control se bahar ho raha tha us ne apna pillow aur sheet uthayi aur bahar jaane lagi tab Raj ne dekha to us ne fauran phone rakha.

"Naina suno ruko to kahan jaa rahi ho tum?" He asked.

"Mai guest room me jaa rahi hoon, mujhe yahan nahi sona hai." She said n was about to leave when Raj jumped n closed the door quickly.

"Tum kahin nahi jaaogi ." he said.

"Kyoun nahi mai jaaongi, jaaongi aur jaroor jaaongi."she said fuming.

"Dekho Naina tum yahan se kahin nahi jaaogi maine kaha na." Raj said strictly.

"Maine kaha na mai jaaongi aur tum kuch nahi kar paaoge mujhe rokne k liye." She said firmly.

And now a snatching of pillow has started. Kabhi Raj pillow apne taraf keechta kabhi Naina. They passed 15 minutes in it n finally the pillow torned.

Pillow me se cotton k pieces poore room me udne lage. Naina aur Raj bhi poori tarah se cotton me naha chuke the.

"Dekho tum ne kya kiya?" she showed him.

"Haan sab maine hi to kiya tum to karti nahi na kuch." He teased her.

"Maine abhi kuch nahi kiya hai aur vaise bhi nahi karti hoon." She showed him her thumb.

"Haan tum ko itne acchi ho ki bolti bhi kahan ho?"

"Tum jaante ho ye baat, vow Raj." She teased him but gussa abhi bhi kam nahi hua tha.

"Kitna jhagda karti ho."

"Haan mai to sab karti hoon, tum to dhoodh k dhule ho na tabhi chup chup k Ritu se affair kar rahe ho." She shot.

" Dhoodh ka nahi cotton ka." He smiled saying that "Ab mai aise hi khada rahoonga ya is ko saaf karogi." He made a puppy face n requested her.

"Khade raho mai chali." She went to bed n dozed off.

"Ajeeb ladki hai ye bhi." Raj thought n started removing it from his hair n dress.

Kuch der baad Raj bhi aa kar Naina k paas late gaya aur us ka chehra us ne dhyan se dekha. She was looking like a beautiful angle while sleeping so pure n so innocent. He gave a short peck at her lips and slept soon.

At midnight:-

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO", Naina screamed which made Raj awoke.

"Kya hua Naina tum is tarah se chillayi kyoun?" he asked her looking at her.

She was looking pale n sweating profusely. She looked him n clutched to him tightly, "Veer kahin mat jaana pls Veer. Maine bahut bura khawab dekha ki koi tum ko mujh se alag kar raha hai. Mai jee nahi paaongi tumhare bina pls Veer. Mujhe ek pal k liye bhi chod kar mat jaana." She was trembling with fear.

"Relax, just relax Naina mai kahin nahi jaa raha hoon . Mai bus tumhare paas hoon." He consoled her.

"Nahi Veer mai bhaiya k baad ab tum ko khona nahi chahti hoon. I love u Veer, mai tumhare bina jee nahi paaongi pls." she started sobbing.

Raj was happy finally that she said so. "Naina look at me." he made her look in his eyes "Dekho Naina tum ko mujh par bharosa hai na bus yakeen karo mai kahin nahi jaaonga tum ko chod kar aur mai bus tumhara hoon." He said.

But she was restless and she self doesn't know the reason.

"Naina ab chalo so jaao." He tried to make her sleep.

"Tum ne mujh se jhooth bola tha na." she asked.

This statement frowned Raj, "jhooth kaisa jhooth?" he asked with trembling voice.

"Yahi ki tum Ritu se......" she couldn't continue and gave a faint look to him.

"Oh to tum ye soch rahi thi." He relaxed and thanked god. "Mai bus ye chahta tha ki meri biwi bhi mujhe vo three magical words kahe jo maine kahein hai us ko." He winked her.

Naina smiled at him n looked down. They both sat for sometime there like this. Jab Naina ne najrein upper uthayein tab bhi Raj us ko aise hi dekh raha tha. She blushed more.

"Kya dekh rahe ho aise?" she asked slowly.

"I love u Naina", and he pulled her into his embrace. He kissed her forehead which made Naina shiver. Than he kissed her eyes to her nose than her cheeks n at last her chin. He left her n looked her face. Naina was waiting for his next move and it was obvious. Raj smiled at her and he pasted his lips on hers lightly but they couldn't understood when it became passionate n more demanding.

Here in Neha's room:-

Somebody jumped in her room from window. Neha was sleeping peacefully so she was not aware of it. He moved closer to her bed n looked at her face. She was looking extremely sexy in her night outfit n the guy was unable to take her eyes off from her. He bent over her n looked at her smiling.

Next day morning:-

Naina was very happy and it was clearly visible from her face even in sleep she was looking gorgeous. When she got up she found Raj sitting near her and looking her lovingly.

"Good morning Veer." She said n dozed off.

"Uffo Naina good morning kehti ho par uthi nahi, chalo utho." He said.

"Tum kab uthe?" she asked him lamming.

"Bus ek ghanta pehle jab aap so rahi thi." He said smiling.

"Par itne jaldi kyoun?" she asked still closing her eyes.

"Kyounki Mrs. Shekhawat Academy me itne der tak sona mana hai na aur meri morning classes bhi hoti hain na." Raj told.

"Uff Veer bus thodi der aur." She requested.

"No", he denied.

Naina ne kuch nahi kaha aur soti rahi. Kuch der tak dekhne k baad jab Raj ka patience khatam ho gaya tab Raj ne socha kyoun na koi sharat ki jaaye jis se Naina fauran jag jaaye.

"Naina tum uthogi ya mai apne tareeke se uthaoon." He warned.

She didn't reply.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
a grt rn fic....continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj proposed to Naina like and she blushed and said woh toh woh waise bhi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj teased her further and said aise nahi poori tarah se making Naina blush hard!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Magar Naina ne phir bhi I love you nahi kaha and answered in a filmy tone!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

The Raj teased her by taking Ritu's name and Naina became furious!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Akhir pyaar hai toh jalan toh hoga hi na!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Waise Raj ne Ritu ke baare mein galat nahi kaha kyunki Ritu wakai har waqt Raj ke peeche padhi rehti hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj even pretended to talk on the phone with Ritu aur yeh dekh ke toh Naina ka gussa control se bahar ho gaya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina room chhodke guest room mein jaane lagi toh Raj ne usse rok liya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The pillow fight was very cute and both of them ended up getting covered with cotton!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina is still angry at Raj and quarrelling with him!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj's witty answer ke dhoondh ka nahi cotton ka dhula is too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj kept staring at Naina while she was sleeping and gave her a peck and went to sleep!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍How cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina had a nightmare ke koi uske Veer ko usse alag kar raha hai!!!!!

She was trembling with fear and said she could not live without him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj is consoling her and assured her that he is not going anywhere!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Naina ne Raj ko I love keh hi diya and Raj was very happy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ne pakad liya that Raj was lying about Ritu and Raj admitted that he did that to make her say the three magical words!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Jhooth ke naam se Raj darr gaya as he is afraid that Naina will hate him when she finds out he killed Navin and he will lose her forever!!!!!!!

Naina blushed at the way Raj was looking at her and Raj said I love you to her!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj and Naina are so romantic and passionate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Yeh Neha ke kamre mein kaun aa gaya??😛 😛 😛 😛I am sure its Kunal!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is very happy and its clearly visible from her face even in sleep!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj Naina ko kitne pyaar se utha raha hai par Naina uth hi nahi rahi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab Raj kya karne waala hai jisse Naina fauran jaag jayega??😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Dekhte hai Raj ka tareeka kya hai Naina ko jagane ka!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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