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Posted: 15 years ago

Nafrat ki ek kahani!

It was my 4th year college and was i gald!. I was really glad and i'm not joking its just that me and studies justnever went together smoothly. I guess we had the love hate relationship becuase some parts i did like. I really art class and drama...well lets just say you say it i was there to act!. I was a normal everyday girl with simple dreams keeping reality in mind. I had 4 friends who were very close to me, and i loved them to death. My family consisted of my 3 brothers who very sweet but annoying most of the time while my parents they passed away when i was 6 from them my elder brother had been the father figure for me.Todya i was starting my fourth year of college expecting the same people and teachers to be there like they had always been.


I Nupur Bhushan walked inside with my four friends, tanya Shah, Charu shergill, Riya Qarin, and lastly Jenny hakih. Yepp these were my friends who had been there for me from the thickest to the thinest.The college seemed exactly the same maybe some furnishing done here and there but nothing to much.We walked to our favorite class room and sat down as we had arrived alittle earlier then expected. I guess we were excited to be together after a 4 months break. We took a seat in the classroom and started to discuss about what we did this summer. While talking something caught my eye, i saw someone walk through the hallway and i don't know it felt weird.I excused myself and went out.


I was looking here and there trying to figure if somewas here or not. i guess i had only imagined it because the hallways were silent as a pin drop.I turned around to walk back
and............BAM!!!
We crached to the floor holding our foreheads,
" ouch,can't you see where you are going?" i yelled instantly rubbing my forehead.
" uhmm.!" i heard him say, as he offered his hand so i could stand up. I refused and stood up on my own. As i stood up and smoothened my churidaar. I could feel his starring at me looking up, i got lost in his hazel brown eyes. He was not from here, because i would know if someone in this college had hazel brown eyes and trust me no on has eyes like his. They were so intense and captivating making it harder for me to look away.
" hi" he said breaking away from the eye contact

I smiled and replied, " your new aren't you?'
"I should apologize... but I won't." he said with a grin looking at me
While i was lost at words .." what?" i said trying to figure what is going on...
" are you always like this..."
" like what..." i asked wanting to know more
" like lost and not at all confused!"
i smirked " hmm ...sarcasm!??"
" hey i'm just saying the facts, you can think of it like anything you want!" he said with a grin that was some what starting to grow on me
" facts...how would you know anything about me?' i said alittle annoyed by that over smart attitude....

" i never said i knew and i just stated what i had learned!" he said back looking right into my eyes.

" in 2 minutes what can you learn about me?" i asked curiously

" what you can show me i learn alot from that!"

" and what i unknowinly showed you?"

" you nature and attitude!" he said

I opened my mouth to say something, but i heard myself being called...
" ayiii!" i yelled back and turned to leave but turning again, " welcome to my college" i said and left.

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I walked back to the classroom to see my friends looking at me, " whats going on?" expressions.
" Kya?" i said as i grabbed my bag
" kuch nahi!" jenny said with a grin
" good and there better be nothing!" i said annoyed,
" hume bata rahi hai, yan khud ko?" charu smirked as she munched on chips
" iska kya matlab hai?" i said angrily as i turned to face the four
" joh tu chahe!" tanaya said joining charu, " aur main kya chahti hoon?" i asked them, they shrugged their shoulders and looked at me,
" joh tera mann karta hai!" charu said plaicng her hand on my shoulder!
" aur mera mann kya karta hai!" i asked them again but before either could say anything the bell rang . We all hurried to grab our bags and head to our leactures.
I had the first lecture with charu and i was scared and not because of the teacher but more so. It was charu her quetsions and intense glares made you want to be scared of her.

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" Goodmorning class My name is Ms Simran . I would like to welcome all of you to Freedom and expressions class. Here you can express anything and everything keeping in mind about our limits and please na bashing anybody. The reason i love to teach this class is because i know how hard it can be express your feelings so this class will hopefull get rid of that fear"
Said ms simi as she sat down to take the attendence after she had called everyones name. She got up to talk but someone walked in, Hey it was that guy, the over smart mr I know it all. I was feeling a little angry at him but why? i had no idea.

" class we have a new student please welcome Mayank Sharma he has just transfered here" ms simi said as she told arjun to take a seat.
" okay so class since it is the first day, i thought we should start with something easy and fun. We will have a face off between two people any two people doesn't matter. But the trick is you have to use shahyri to reply back to each other" I guess that pretty easy but something i was not fond of was shahyri i knew many but they just seemed to make me feel werid and vunerable. Have no idea why? though!

" ahhhh.........hmm Nupur please stand up!" ms simi said pointing over to me. I guess today was just not my day first that guy and now this. " and...hmmm someone new...ofcourse Mayank he is totally new!"

This was not good me against Mr' know it all godd!!. I smirked and looked at him though this time i notice something different the eyes weren't the same. i thought while he just smiled.

" okay so nupur will start" ms simi said as she sat down.

"Hatho ki lakiro me jeene ke ishare nahi hote
Kismat par jeene walo ko sahare nahi hote
Lehero se darkar kaha jaoge….
Bich sagar kinare nahi hote..
"
I said reciting one of my most intense and recently new shayari as arjun looked back at me.
"Tumhari iss ada ka kya jawab dun,
Apne dost ko kya uphar dun,
Koi acha sa phool hota to mali se mangwate,
Jo khud gulab hai usko kya gulab dun…"


did he just call me a gulab or what? no wait he is those sarcastic ones even in his compliments there are some insults hidden.

"Ek gulab hoon jo khila nahi

Meri chahat ka koi sila nahi
Phir bhi yeh dil dua de tumhe
Tumhe zindagi mein woh sukh mile,
Jo mujhe kabhi mila hi nahi."

he said i'm a gulab toh bas mein use gulab banke dihka rahi hoon. Look him that cocky smile and that stress free attitude which i wanted to break so badly

"Khud ko khud ki khabar na lage,

Koi accha bhi is kadar na lage
Aap ko dekha hai bas uss nazar se,
Jis nazar se aap ko nazar na lage….
"

I had enough no more. I sat down " miss simran don't feel well!" I said trying to excuse myself out of this stupid game. Ms. simiran nodded giving me permission to back out of the game. I sat down only to be interigated by charus intense gaze which was giving me the creeps.

The bell rang before charu could say anything, i quickly grabbed my purse and headed out to our usually table in the cafe where tanya, jenny and riya were already sitting while charu was trailing behind me. I threw my bag on the table and sat down with a angry face,

" kya hua?" jenny asked looking at charu to give her some type of hint

" main batati hoon!" charu said loudly for the whole cafe to hear " i think nupur likes someone!" she said with a big smile. I opened my mouth in shock as my friends smiled and grinned in happiness. I do not like anyone and most certainly not that MR' Know it all.

" kya yeh kab hua???" tanya screamed in my ear, while trying to control her smile.

" kuch bhi nahi hua guys, charu is just exaggerating!" i said moppily nibbling on a sandwhich.

" matlab kuch toh hua hai!" riya asked raising her eyebrow

" haan!" i said angrily putting my sandwhich down on the plate

" kya????????//" my friends said in chorus!!

" NAFRAT!!" i yelled, as i grabbed my bag and headed towards the cafe line.

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guys there is part 2 to this and this is also a true story actual this my very close friends real life story!!

I hope you like it

i will try to finish part 2 soon! i promise i hope you like it!

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
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homework so busy!
EDIT
okay, I just read it
I would complain that it was short
but since I'm busy
it worked
but I know that
people will argue about it
anyways continue soon!
Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Really nice sanam,....:))
I liked reading it!
Update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
sanu..........*hugs*............gr8 start hun....lovd d shayaris.......nw plz post the next part soooooon........n no sam n gunji here kya?
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update.loved it.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hizzz hru its really nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
so u updated!

how i missed u.......

i loved their first meeting.......

i wont say it wierd coz many people.....no.....many intelligent or rather stupid people can tell abt me by my eyes.....i told u that my eyes speak volumes........damn them!

hey i loved this class........

i mean one should have this everytime...........i remember once we had this type of class named "open house" and we got many unexpected khulase........

yaar i loved shayari.......

what a beautiful one!

i loved all the answers.......

i think nupur loves him but she isnt wanting to confess that.........

lovely update............

simply awesome........

do continue soon..............

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part.
update next part soon
take care

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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing OS!!
just loved it!! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sanam,
wow that was so much fun to read, i loved nupur, i was always the one picked upon by the teachers hehe.
Fanttastic, do update this soon sanam.
keep it up!

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