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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi frnds this is my first FF plzz give ur suggestions n do comment---

Characters

Damini

Avni

Roshni

Prithvi

Sameer

Varun

Ye kahani hain teen best frnds ki(damini avni aur roshni)

Jo ek dusre se bilkul alg hain par ek doosre ke bahut kareeb bhi hain

In teeno ke paas ek common nishaani thi ?unka chain .teeeno ke paas same type ka chain hota tha

Damini apne higher studies ke liye canada jaathi hain

Ye uske college ka pehla din hain

Usse ladko ke upar bahut bura impression tha

College ka pehla din tha aur usse prince se milna tha isliye vo kuch ladko se prince ke office ka raadtha poochthi hain

Ladke mazaak ke iraade se usse gents loo ka rastha batha dethe hain

Damini bine kuch pade gents loo main guss bhi jati hain

Jab tak vo realize kar pati ki uske saath kya hua bahut der ho gayyi yhi darwaza bandh

Kar diya tha kisine

Hain tho vo bahut brave par aise situation main??..

Vo bahut ghabra gayyi aur rone laggi

India main thi hamesha uske frnds the par ab yaha??

Tab hi entry hoti hain prithvi ki

Vo damini ka senior tha aur bahut nek dil ladka tha

Jad usne kissi ladki ki awaaz suni tho usne immediately darwaza khol diya

Damini uske upar girne hi wali thi par usne apne aap ko sambhal liyya

Uska chehra nahi dekh paaya prithvi par usne uska chain dekha

Damini itni dari hui thi ki usne usse thanx bhi nahi kaha aur vaha se chali gayyi

Prithvi-excuse me?.

iss samay prithvi ko pehli baar ek ajeeb sa feeling mehsoos hua

Agle din English period tha aur iss period main seniors aur juniors ka class saath main hota tha

Damini vaha bait gayyi thi par uske baju wala seat vacant tha

Tab hi prithvi aake uske paas bait gayya

Thodi der bad lecture shuru hua

Suddenly prithvi ne damini ki taraf dekha aur vo chain notice kiya aur this was the first time jad pritvi ne damini ko dekha

Prithvi-tum vohi ladki ho na jo kal gents??

Damini gusse se dekhthi hui

Damini-tum??

Prithvi-main prithvi kal maine hi.......

Damini-oh tho tum bhi un ladko ke saath mile ho tumhe jara sib hi sharam nahi hain??

Prithvi shocked hain ki ek tho usne usse help kiya aur upar se vo usse hi dant rahi hain!

Prithvi-suniye?

Damini-aur kya sunne abhi aur kuch baki hain??

Tab hi lecturer damini ko dekhtha hain aur usko khade hine ko kehtha hain

Lecturer-can i know wht is making u disturb the whole class

Damini-sir actually??

lecturer-see u have no reason its cause of students like u ???bla bla

damini bahut dukhi ho jati hain par vo apne aanun ko control kar lethi hain

tab hi bell bajtha hain

damini-bas hogayya na abhi kuch aur baki hain?

Prithvi-(shock hoke)suniye main ??.

Damini-bas karo tum sab ladke aise hi ho

Vo vaha se chali jaati hain

Prithvi-suniye main tab se yehi kehne ki koshish kar raha hoo ki

Damini ruk kar palat thi hain aur uske paas jaathi hain

Damini guse se-kaho kya kehna chahthe ho?

Prithvi-yehi ki kal maine hi darwaza khola tha

Damini shock ho jaati hain aur thodi embarrassed bhi

Damini-ehh? im so sorry actually,vo main? I mean..im sorry!!

Prithvi-ji nahi sorry tho mujhe tumse kehni chahiye vo hi do-2 sorry

Damini confused look

Damini-matlab

Prithvi-matlab ek tho jo kal hua uske liyye dusra aaj mere wajay s aapko ??

Damini-no its ok even im sorry!

Prithvi-im prithvi (awkwardness ke saath )frnds??

Damini-damini(nods her head)

Damini-main yahan nayi hoon so im being extra carefull!!bas isliye?

Prithvi-(smiles n tells)tumhe kabhi bhi koi problem ho bas yeh yaad rakhna ki yahan koi aisa hain jo hamesha tumhara saath dega!

Prithvi slow motion main jaata rehtha hainaur damini smile karke usse dekhthi hain

Prithvi palat kar usse dekhtha hain aur smile karhtha hain??..

plzz tell me if i shld continue
Edited by luv07prida - 15 years ago

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Rach. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow dear ! I liked it !
Do continue...reminded me of old MayUr days !! * sigh *
Please unke beeche itni takraar mat peda karna...i would like to see them as best friends for a change.....if you dont mind !
Rach
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ya no takraar in this story i promise
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow great start pl continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really like waise i read only those FF which includes only prida but it it is looking good especially first meeting
Edited by pridafan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey lovly starting
hatke ff hai
@rach- yaah mayur scenes were sumwat same
lovely
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice start....do continue😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Excellent start 👏

Interesting story - moved it overseas 😃 and PriDa meet in college - nice touch 😳. I am also intrigued Dam-Avni-Rosh being friends and having the same chain. 😳.

I liked this FF. Please continue. ⭐️

Jhan
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Posted: 15 years ago
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messa like it. do continue.

Eh !! ( Eh, as in Prithvi's xpressions wen Damini asks him...jaldi kyu aaye !! in da scene wer he is cleaning Toofan n pours water on her who is standing on other side of the stall in her jogging attire)

Ab PriDa canada me milte hai.
da love saga going International now. 👍🏼
skorpion
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW awsm... i felt as if i was watchn a muvi ! 👍🏼

really gud start... plzz do cntinue ! 😃

-luv niki..😳

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