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Guys, this is a oneshot which starts from the "throwing-out Akshara" track that is about to happen in the show.....................Dedicated to Ananya didi who gave me the idea..................

Akshara packed her things with memories rewinding in her head. She was a newly wedded bride until some day's back who was brought to the house by Daddaji himself who had promised to shower her with all the happiness in the world, who, ironically asked her to leave the place, breaking all his promises, some moments back. Akshara was left with mixed emotions. She didn't know how to react to this. When Daddaji asked her to leave the place, she only looked into Naitik's eyes. Her eyes asked many questions to him-question that were left unanswered. In fact she wanted to ask Naitik a lot of things. But he looked too indifferent for any questions. Nandini and Mohit were aghast. Naitik's silence meant that he was in favour of Daddaji's decision. Akshara wiped her tears and went up to their room. She began to take all her things out, one by one and the moments of unpacking them with the love of her life flashed in her mind. She smiled through her tears, as if someone just tickled her. She let herself be away from the current world when all the memories began to flash in her mind, one after the other. Yes, memories were all that she had, now-the one's that she would cherish for the rest of her life. A sense of reality struck her when she finished packing. She cried, as that all all that she could do now. Akshara had tried everything to make her in-laws happy. She adjusted with their environment, loved them like she did 2 her parents and tried to stand up to all their expectations. But, the only difference was that most of the time, she was either misunderstood or her efforts went in vain in one way or the other. She did not have anyone to blame for her present circumstance-neither Nandini, nor Mohit. She could understand their circumstance-of being in love, as she herself had gone through the same, some time, back. But how come Naitik did not understand it, just the same way? Wasn't he too in love? Or is it that his responsibilities towards his family blinded his off that vulnerable emotion?
Akshara took a final glance of the room, where she spent some of the most beautiful and happiest moments of her life, which she shared with her beloved. Slowly she walked down with her bag, when a servant offered to carry the bag for her. She did not listen to him, as she was lost in her thoughts. Her eyes were fixed somewhere in the empty space, and she felt a kind of vacuum in her life. She walked towards the drawing room, where the entire family had gathered. She did not say anything; neither did she look at anyone. Her guilt was overcome by a kind of emptiness in her. She bent to take the blessings of all the elders, but no one stretched their hands to bless her. Ironically she didn't expect it from them, either. Nandini looked resentful but did not utter a word. Naitik quickly moved out of the house to take the car, while Akshara followed him quietly. She didn't turn back this time, may be because she wanted to be strong, or may be because she didn't want to see anybody's sniffed faces. Naitik started the car, but Akhara walked past it. She moved out of the gate, when Naitik realizing this got out-but it was too late. She was already out of sight. A tear drop fell from his eyes…………………!


TO BE CONTINUED………………..
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VivaciousBhavya thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow
really loved it
very nice
do cont. soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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damn gud yaar..............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superb............!!!!!!!!
luved it a lottttt.......!!!!!
the way u hv portrayed akshu's feelings is awesome.............!!!!!!!!
i could actually feel it........tears in my eyes.........!! can't believed it i felt like crying!!!!!!!
wonderful work.........
continue soon................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was very emotional i m speachless!!!!!
it was damn beautiful
every single word brought out the emotions of akshara very beautifully
i m just praying one thing now that if they really have to show this track then they should at least once read your oneshot coz it brings out the pain of sepration very beautifully
hope they show it in the same manner
continue soon
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😊😊 continue soon.. very nicely written😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aparna putri, tussi great ho!! like mother, like daughter.. lol
really yaar, it was fabulous!!! waiting for the next part, tik tok tik tok......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2112ization

Aparna putri, tussi great ho!! like mother, like daughter.. lol
really yaar, it was fabulous!!! waiting for the next part, tik tok tik tok......



haan ma...............aapke aashirwaad ki wajah se hi toh mein likh paayi hoon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg ya ....i m in tears ...speechless....very emotional

well written one
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome part really...very emotional,waiting for the next part😊
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It was very good.😊Just loved it.😃Keep Up The Good Work!!!👏

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