FF-Aaye ho mere zindhagi mein..... part 16'pg 137' - Page 20

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Posted: 15 years ago


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Happy_pretty

that was awsome plzzz update soon and pm me when u do thanks



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Orion

gr8 update!

can't wait to find out the truth!
plz update soon!
thnx for the pm!



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sv06

Oh Heer..poor thing !
I think Prem is living in guilt due to something that happened in the past, maybe some issue with his ex-girlfriend or an accident, which is stopping him from getting close to Heer and he also seems to be getting treated by the Dr for the same.......and he married her as he had promised his mother in her death-bed to fulfil her last wish.....Well that's my guess =))

But he shouldn't make innocent Heer's life miserable for that...Whatever maybe the problem, hope they resolve it soon.

I'm eagerly waiting for them to fall in love and please don't make us wait for too long.....treat us with some romance soon 😃.






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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey great
loved premeer as usual
thanks for pm



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Additi...

Greeshma ki bachchiii ...............are you going to update Now or should i go...????



I WILL UPDATE AS SOON As possible
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Posted: 15 years ago
hai deshianz'''''
first of all sorry 4 the late update.
I had an unexpected tour with my friends for 5 days.
Even though I enjoyed a lot with my frnds, I missed u all''''.
Anyway I am back now with my new update.
Hope u all will enjoy it, so here it is'''''.

PART- 5

Heer took one rose from the flower vase kissed it and handed it to gungun. Gungun started to play with the rose and then again handed it to heer. Heer took it from her hands with a childish smile and kissed her both cheeks. Her smile is too nice to watch.

Unknowingly a smile appeared on prem's lips seeing heer's childishness. He felt that she is sweeter than the rose in her hands and more innocent than gungun. Suddenly the smile vanished from his face when he thought about the truth that he is hiding from heer.

No, he can't cheat her any more, he has to tell her the truth today itself.

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They all had some cute talking and chatting moment. Prem was continuously staring at heer when all of them were chatting. She looked too happy today. She was talking, smiling, laughing'''It was too nice to watch heer when she is unaware that someone is watching her, especially her smile. But prem don't know how long will that smile remain. It will surely vanish when she hear the truth.

Meher asked for gungun from heer when they were about to go. Heer handed gungun to meher's hand and asked them to wait for 2 minutes. Heer went to the kitchen and came back with two bowls of halwa. She handed one bowl to preet and other to prem.

" pehle meher ko dho'main baad main khaooga'" prem told heer when she handed the halwa to prem.

" aaj hum ladkiyaam nahi khaa sakthe, kyunki aaj karwa chouth hai. Jaise heer ne tumhareliye vrath rakhi hain naa main bhi apne husband keliye rakhi hain'.sanjhae'?" It was meher who replied to prem.

Prem felt ashamed as he came to know that heer has kept vrath for him. Even being her husband he didn't even know that his wife is keeping a vrath.
" heer is starving 4 you. So it's your duty to keep her happy" preet advised prem.
Prem just gave a fake smile as if he was sure that he can't do that. It's 100% sure that she can't stay happy with him after knowing the truth. But he has to tell it at any cost and he will'''. He can't cheat her anymore'''..

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Prem closed the door when preet and meher left the home. Prem stood for a while staring at heer who was standing at the corner arranging the flowers in the flower vase.

" heer, mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baath karna hai" at last he occupied some strength to speak out to her.

" ha.. bolo prem" heer answered turning towards him.
Prem slowly made his steps towards her. Will she be able to bear it? His heart is beating at record speed thinking about her reaction on knowing the truth. He stood in front of her and looked deep into her heart as if to check whether she can withstand after knowing the truth.

Heer too stared at him in confusion seeing her husband standing close to her and watching her closely. She was confused seeing the way he stared at her.
"aap kuch kehne wale thae naa?" heer asked prem with a questioning face.
Prem came to the senses when he heard her voice.

" haa, wo main, '."

Before prem can start anything they heard the phone ringing. Heer went to attend the call and found it's her maa.

" hello, maa' aap kaisi ho? Aur bauji? Uska thabiyat teek hai naa, main aap logon ko bohot miss karthi hoon'''.." heer was going on asking questions in the phone with out any stop.
Prem was watching her talking in the phone. She was looking enthusiastic while talking with her parents. Her words clearly showed that she missed all them a lot. He liked her body language and enthusiasm while she is with others.
But why she is not like that when she is with him?
Is she afraid of him?

Or did she understand that he can't love her?
Lots of questions arise in his mind at a time for which he couldn't find the answer.

" '.'haa maa, main bohot khush hoon. Wo mere bohot kyaal rakthaa hai'''."
Prem's got the answer for his doubts hearing her words. His heart was aching when he heard these words from her. Till now whatever he had done was hearting her and now she is telling that he is taking care of her. How can she be too good towards a man who is cheating her completely? Her each word was piercing his heart like sharp arrows.

"maa.. aap aashram gaye thaey? Mujhe maathaji se milne ka bohot mann kar ra hain. Jab aap aashram jaaoge naa, mathaji se kehana ki uski aashirwaad se main bohot khush hoon, prem meri bohot kyaal rakthaa hain''''"

Prem made his steps towards the bed room as heer continued her talking. He can't hear more than this. On one side he is playing with her life and on the other side she being unaware of the truth is praising about him to others. She is starving for him, for his wellbeing for his good health. And what he is doing to her? One thing is sure she loves him. She loves him deeply that she wants to think everything good about him. That's why she is praising him like this.

Prem sat on the bed lost in her thoughts about heer keeping his palms on his face. Prem was totally confused what to do? Even though he wanted to tell her everything the fear that whether she will bear it is stopping him from opening his heart towards her. Suddenly he heard the sound of the guitar.

He ran out of the room when he heard the sound of his guitar. He ran towards the place from where the sound came and at last she reached the dining hall where heer was playing with it. She had kept it on the dining table and just moved her fingers over the strings randomly which produced some random sounds. The way she handled it clearly indicated that she don't know to handle it.

Prem stopped at once near the door when he saw heer playing with the guitar. First he felt angry on her for using it without his permission. But the next moment he thought about the way he is behaving towards her changed his anger into guilt. Prem stood in the same position watching her closely.

" do you know to play guitar?" heer asked him when she saw him standing near the door.

" haa'" prem answered taking a deep breath.

He turned his face away from her unable to face her.

"Tho aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?" heer asked him with a questioning face.

" nahi, wo '..actually '.mauka hi nahi mila bata ne keliye'.." prem was struggling for words.

Heer just gave a cute smile at him hearing his words. She didn't feel anything suspicious in his words.

" accha wo sab chodo'.. kya aap mujhe'.. Guitar bajaana sikhaayegi?" heer asked him hesitatingly.

Prem could clearly find her voice trembling while she was asking him. Even though he hated any one touching his guitar, he didn't oppose her.

" nahi, agar aapko pasand nahi tho teek hai, main isse wapas rak dethi hoon" heer told prem as she noticed that he is not responding to her question.

Seeing his face Heer felt that he doesn't like her touching his guitar. Telling this heer took the guitar in her hands for replacing it back on its previous position in the store room. But before she can move more than two steps prem stopped her by catching her wrist.

Heer stood as such without even turning back. She was freezing at his touch. Prem took one more step towards her which closed the distance between them. He wrapped his both hands around her making her hold the guitar properly. He placed his right hand over her right hand and making her to hold the striker and the left hand made her to touch the string near the stick of the guitar. Even the slightest touch of his fingers is bringing goose bumps in her body.

He then held her right hand tightly which is holding the striker and made her to play each strings separately. His closeness is making her nervous. She watched him through the side of her eyes without his awareness. She was enjoying his closeness with her whole heart.

Prem moved even more close to her to teach her more comfortably. Now he is that much close that she can feel his heart beats at her back. She closed her eyes to enjoy rhythm of his heart beat. His warm breath is falling on her neck which produced chillness in her spine. Prem made her to play simple notes holding her hands tightly.

Heer turned her face towards him to see his face which was busy in teaching her. Her eyes are filled with love and passion. She looked at him expecting the same passion back from him. she wanted him to kiss her. But prem let go her hands as soon as he noticed her watching him with passion filled eyes.

Prem took two steps backwards without turning back and then suddenly turned to go to his room. Heer is very happy, even though she didn't get what she wanted she was happy that she could spend some cute moment with him. The thoughts about their closeness brought an everlasting smile on her lips. she strongly believed that she can soon change his attitude. She is 100% confident about her love. She will make him love her as much as she loves him.

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It's night. Heer is waiting for the chand in the balcony. She is wearing a pink anarkali with the dupatta covering her head. She has kept everything ready for the pooja. She just wanted chand to come so that she can start the pooja of her 'PRINCE'.

She cupped her both palms and watched the mehandhi in which his name is written.

'PREM',

The most beautiful name in this world. And now that name is the part of her life. His name looked more beautiful when it is written in her hands. She wanted to show her mehandi to him. she was sure that he will love it when he see it.
'How nice it will be if he took her hands in his hands and smell it?' heer thought in mind.

Today she is going to watch his pretty face through the net, she will do his pooja, later he will feed her sweets' and at last the gift''.A naughty smile appeared on her face as she thought about his gift. What gift he would have selected for her?

She felt a mild white light falling on her face. Heer looked up and saw the moon coming out of the clouds. Her heart was jumping with joy at the sight. Today the moon is looking more beautiful than ever she had seen in her life. She ran to the bed room to bring prem.

When she reached the bed room she found prem standing near the window lost in his thoughts. He was too deep in his thoughts that he didn't even see heer who was standing beside him.

"prem ' chand aagaya'''" heer told him while taking deep breath.
Prem turned her face to look at heer. her face didn't show any indications of tiredness even though she didn't ate or drink anything right from the morning. She was looking very enthusiastic and energetic as if she is passing through her happiest moments of her life.

" prem dekh kya rahe ho? Chalo mere saath'''" telling this heer caught his wrist and pulled him towards the balcony.

Prem was surprised by her act. He didn't expect that she will mingle with him so easily. He followed her silently watching her till they reach the destination.

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Heer took the filter in her hands and watched the moon through it's net. She then looked at prem who was standing in front of her. heer watched his face which was glowing in the moon light through the net. Her eyes filled with tears on seeing her 'PRINCE' through the net, she didn't want to take her eyes from him.

She pulled the net down when the tear drop fall from her eyes. She took the pooja ki thaali in her hands and did his pooja. Later prem made her drink water and fed her some sweets. Her heart is rejoicing at the close moments with him.

After completing all the rasams she bent down to touch his feet. But before she could touch prem stopped her by holding her shoulders with both hands. Prem made her stand straight and looked deep into her eyes. His hands are still holding her shoulders. Both of them stood a few minutes lost in their eyes. Her eyes got wet, she doesn't mind if she dies at this moment. The most beautiful eyes of this world is seen lost in her eyes.

Prem slowly removed his hands from her shoulders and turned to go away from her without uttering a single word. Heer stood watching him who was going away from her. for one moment she thought that she is the happiest girl and the next moment once again she found him going away from her'''.

But prem came back soon with a gift in his hand. It was wrapped in silver paper. He stood in front of her and handed it to her. heer took it from his hands with hopeful eyes. Prem went back again after handing the gift in her hands. she read the line written at the top of the gift.

"This is the only thing I can offer you"

Heer didn't understand anything after reading the line. She then untied the ribbon over the gift and then removed the silver paper covering it. It was an old diary on which his name was written.

Heer opened the diary and found his photo in the first page. A cute smile appeared on her face by seeing her prince's old photo. He was looking damn handsome in it. He was looking totally different with his hair style and get up. She trailed her fingers over his photo and turned to the next page.

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FLASH BACK - five years back

Prem Juneja is the final year management student. He is the dream boy of all girls in the college and is considered to be the gentle man of the campus. . He is also the chair person of the whole college. Even though he has a gentle man image he loved to be to be with his friends and to have fun with them. The only thing he hates is chatting with girls without any reason.

Prem was sitting alone in his class room. All his friends including preet have gone to have an eye at their juniors who are going to have their class started today. Actually their aim is not juniors, but the girls. Even though he too wanted to see them his self esteem didn't allowed him to do that. He is the chair person of their whole college, so at any cost he has to keep his good name at any cost. After all he is 'PREM JUNEJA' for whom the girls are standing in a quae to get a smile from him. even if he avoid them they will run behind him.

Prem can't understand why these boys are always roaming around the girls. In his whole life there is not even a single girl for whom he felt any feelings, but 99% of girls who had seen him have fall for him. he just hates the saying 'LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT'. How can that happen?

But in his inner heart he always longed for a girl friend, especially when he sees preet and meher together. He loved to see their love as well as their cute fight. Meher always used to fight with him saying that 'you looked this girl' you talked with that girl etc etc''..

His heart always longed for a girl friend whenever he sees the fight between preet and meher. When will he find his dream girl'''.

"prem'tum yaha khade ho ''''patha hai main kub se tumhe doont raha hoon?" preet asked him while coming inside the class room.
Prem turned and gave an angry look at him.

" arre yaar, come and see'..hai rabba main marr jaavaa''..kya figures hai yaar''tum zaraa aake tho dekh'.." telling this preet pulled his hands and took him towards the fresher's class room.

Even though prem was not interested he followed preet. They stopped near the window of the fresher's class room and as soon as they reached preet peeped through it. Just for a time pass prem also looked inside the class room. Preet was right, there was lot of figures inside, but no one is attractive.

The first thing that caught his eyes was an opened pack of 'DAIRY MILK' as he was very much fond of chocolates. He loved chocolates. Later his eyes fall on the 'LIPS' on which the dairy milk reached. It was the sweetest lips he had ever seen in his life. His heart ached to taste those luscious lips more than the chocolates. He felt losing his controls when saw a soft tongue coming out of the mouth and licked out the chocolate sticking on the lips.

Prem looked up to see the face of the owner of those lips, there he found his dream girl. Her skin was like ice cream, and she was having caramel eyes with magnetic attraction. She looked like an angel in that pink frock. Her loose hair which was flying in the air added her beauty. Prem Juneja who hated the theory of love at first sight fall for that girl even in a half sight of her.

He was watching her each and every features without taking his eyes from her. he wanted to know her name badly. It was then he heard her answering to another girl about herself.

" hai I am addithi '. ADDITHI GUPTHA''"


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Once again sorry for the late update.
Next time I will try to give quick and long update
Now start comments''..
ADVANCED NEW YEAR WISHES TO ALL''..
Love
greeshma
Edited by p.ggreeshma - 15 years ago
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Hy Mere Rabzzzzz again first spot...You should be proud of me
Greeshma 😉


Nice update...worth waiting.......Likin yeh........Ab yeh additi gupta
ka kiya chakkar hai 😕😕😕 I hope Premeer ki beech koi
Misunderstanding na ho....😕


Aur agar huwa.....trust me ...YOU ARE GONNA BE DEAD...😲😲

Waiting for the next update.....

Love Neha
Edited by Additi... - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi!!!!!!!!!
awesomeeeeeeeee update !!
really nice....
but feels sad after reading the flashback..
waiting eagerly 4 next part..
continue soon & thnx 4 ur PM.
A very HAPPY and PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR to u......😃
Edited by annwesha kayal - 15 years ago

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