||Unfaitfull|| Pg.44 May.28.2010

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hii guys okay so before you all kill me for starting a new FF ' I want to let you know that my winter break had started so I will be active and update mostly everyday 'also I am working ong KKKG a lot since I want the second thread to be as good as 1st one. And also Twilight I am so glad you like it ' hoping the FF will rock.

Well here is the first part of this FF '

Part 1

As she walked out of the hall crying. Today everything had changed, she had nothing left. As she walked down the street crying it started to rain '. Prem ' "Heeer." He siad catching upto her. Heer ' "Ap?" she said wiping her tears. Prem - "Heer mujhe tumsey baath karni hai." Heer ' "Liken mujhe nahi karni ' wasay bii bariish ho rahi hai mujhe ghar jana chiye." She siad walking past him. Prem caught her by the arm and span her around. Prem ' "Nahi aaj tumhein meri baath suni hai ' or mein aj kah kay rahoon ghaa."

Heer ' "Ap mujhe force nahi kar saktay mujhe ghar jana hai." Prem ' "I don't care '" he siad pulling her under the roof. Heer ' "App kya'" Prem ' "Mujhe aj joo kahna hai mein kah kay rahoon ghaa ' or aaj mein tab tak nahi jayoon ghaa jab tak tum meray sawal ka jawab nahi deti." He siad gripping her arms in his hands.

Prem -" Mujhe nahi pata tum kyun meray kyaloon mein rahti hoo ' kyun meray dil sey nahi jati ' kyun tumsey door hokay mujhe kuch hota hai ' kyun '" He stopped as soon as he saw the ring on her finger. Her engagament scence played in his mind again. He let go of her. Prem ' "Sorry." He said letting her pass by him.

As she passed by their eyes met.

Kaise aankhein chaar kar loon

Kaise aitebaar kar loon

Apni dhadkanon ko kaise

Itna bekaraar kar loon

Kaise tujhko dil main de doon

Kaise tujhse pyaar kar loon

As she passed by him tears rolled down her cheek.

Prem wakled the other way as Heer took her own route. Both of them looked back from time to time but never at same time.

How could she love him ' how could he love her ' both of them were engaged and getting married soon ' how could they love eachother?

Looking forward to comments '. Sorry PM's will be late.

Do tell me what you think?

Ayysha


Index

Teaser Pg.1
Promos Pg.7
Chapter 1 Pg.10
Chapter 2 Pg.16
Chapter 3 Pg.22
Chapter 4 Pg.28
Chapter 5 Pg.33
Chapter 6 Pg.39
Chapter 7 Pg. 44
Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago

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-Fatima- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ayyshaaaaaaaaaaa one more ff great
it seems intresting
do continue soon
luv
fatima
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superb start Ayysha!!! 👏
seems interestingggggggggg
update soon.....
luking forward to it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Phabulous and Great start Ayysha👏👏👏...
Awesome, loved it...
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luved itt pls
pm me wen yu update next time
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Awesome. Continue soon. Happy Holidays.

A big hug for starting a new ff.

Edited by rit435 - 15 years ago
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awesome loved it update soon plzzz add me to your pm list thanks
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omg! i just read your 1st part and i luveddddd it!👏 awesome start........plz do continue soon!😃

Edited by sonali09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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okay so why did i not ever recieve a pm about this ff!?!?!?!?

ppplllllllllleaaaaaaaasssseeeeeee continue it!!!!!! i'd love to read it......ur title and storlyline are very very intresting.......as usual :P


loveee
Samra <33
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Posted: 15 years ago
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*reserved*

*unreserved*


great


thnx 4 the pm


Kamal
Edited by Kamal_23 - 15 years ago

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