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Posted: 15 years ago
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i rote smt on edward cullen..from bella's point of view...wat she thinks bout him...hope you all like it...

Never in your wildest dreams
Would you find
Someone so simple someone so serene
Who could bring a flashing smile on your face
Who'd listen to you…..being so keen

Every striking feature of him
Makes him more and more difficult to study
He is a thirst which cannot b quenched
And a theory which cannot be meant

Like the setting sun which spreads its rays
Before disappearing into the dark
He is so irresistible
That wherever he goes…he leaves a mark!

And yet these metaphors of love
Fail to describe his uniqueness
Anything on this earth
To face him that evolves
He needs no competition
He outdoes them all

The angels from heaven
Shower droplets of the views of cupid
That when they touch your skin
Soothe them and remind you of him

The rules of life though
Compels you to stay away from him
But you'd rather die than be apart
Coz his world is where you belong
Be the lights of the place no matter how dim

Forever seems so less for us to be
Together where it's just you and me
I am just a cup of brass with silence
But you fill the passion of your music as a wine
And once it has… reached its brim
The cup's no longer dull….it shines!!!!

It's said that god is always in need
Of the people who are one of a kind
I won't let him leave me though
Not because we are bound in an inseparable pact
But because I won't be able to survive for another minute
facing that unbearable fact!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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you wrote it?
If Yes,then its amazingg..loved it
you are very very talented!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg !!
thats a really lovely poem.
describes him completely...
lovely !!
:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW !!! Its just AWESOME !!!!
I agree with Mallika you are damn talented !!!! Keep it up !!!
And as Arushi said, it describes Edward completely !!!

luv Alina
shwetarath thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you people..i didnt hope u guys wud like it so much lol..coz i m just 15 and on top of it i hav been seeing lot more outstanding pieces of work..really grateful..thank you!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow........its superb amzing awsm its so touchy n purely bella's thought i just luv it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shwetarath

thank you people..i didnt hope u guys wud like it so much lol..coz i m just 15 and on top of it i hav been seeing lot more outstanding pieces of work..really grateful..thank you!

you are just 15??
omg... u really should take to writing seriously..u have a flair for it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey its fantastic...i luved it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank u soooo much..love u all!!

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