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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Guys.

A while back Soni announced a contest where you guys were supposed to come up with an A-K romance story or sequence.

Here are the entries we got.. plz vote for your favorite.

Entry # 1

The sun rises and the romance of Angad Khanna and Kripa starts.

Angad and Kripa Khanna are both two famous rock stars who were in love with each other. They faced many misunderstandings.Angad and Kripa spent one night together which made Kripa pregnant. At that same time, Angad was told by his family that Kripa cheated on him with Prithvi Bose. Prithvi stood by Kripa through all those times when Kripa was away from Angad. Prithvi loved Kripa but Kripa never loved him back. By the time Angad realized his mistake, Kripa already had a miscarriage. She blamed Angad for it. She hated him a lot. Angad sacrificed a lot for Kripa to get to be a successful rock star. Angad's friend, Josh got Angad and Kripa back together. Prithvi caused many problems for the couple and he killed Josh. He made Kripa think that Angad cheated with her and killed Josh. Angad went to jail. Kripa married Prithvi due to support. Angad came back as Zaib and ruined Kripa's married life. Kripa then married Angad for revenge. Now this is the story so far. Let's see if Angad and Kripa's hatred turns into love or stays the same.

A glance of the Khanna House is shown and then we see are shown Naina Khanna and Dilip Khanna talking about how their niece Anitah married Raj, Angad's friend instead of Manek.

Naina: Dilip, mein abhi tak yain nahi samajati huin kaisa Kripa ne Anitah ko samjhaya ke woh Raj se shaadi kare na ke us dhokebaaz Manek se.

Dilip: Humara Angad ne hein use itna hosla diya tha

We see a room in which Angad and Kripa are sleeping. Angad gets up and just stares at Kripa who is sleeping next to him,and makes a naughty expression.

He thinks that Kripa is in hell because Angad will not let her live in one minute of peace or comfort. Then Kripa gets up and they both fight for the bathroom.

Kripa: Angad mujhe phele nahana hai

Angad: nahin mujhe

Kripa: Angad stop it

Angad: no u stop it

Kripa: kitna ziddhi ho tum

Angad: tumse to seekha hai na

Kripa makes an annoyed face and just lets him go first. Angad forgot to take his towel and kept on screaming for Kripa to give him his towel.

Angad: Krrriiiiiiiippppppppppaaaaaaaaaaaaa, mujhe mera towel doooooooooooo

Kripa laughs and replies: Nahin, Nahin, Nahin tum khud kyun nahin aatain

Angad: Baby, I know you wan tme but not that desperately

Kripa gets mad and throws the towel at the bathroom door and yells: Happy

Angad gets out with only a towel and gives a naughty smile to Kripa

Kripa just stares at him and sighs

Angad: Kripa give me my clothes, they are on the bed

Kripa: Mein kya tumhari nokrani huin

Angad: Haaaaaaaa abh doooooo

Kripa goes to give him the clothes but slips and falls on top of Angad like their first meeting.

They just stare at eachother and their faces are only few centimeters away.

Then they hear Naina saying: Chalo, nasta taiyaar hai

Kripa quickly gets up and they both leave the room without even uttering one word.

At the breakfast table, there is orange juice, aloo parathas, dhai, fruits, and achaar.

Angad and Kripa quietly serve themselves and Angad's other cousin Aliyah spots this sudden silence at the table and says: Angad bhaiyya aapko Kripa bhabhi ko bahar lena chahiyain

Naina: Aliyah sahi kairahi hain, tum logo ko weekend ke liya Goa jana chahiyain

Angad and Kripa are shocked and mad. But secretly in their minds they are happy that they get to spend more time together.

Angad: Par mama mujhe bohat kaam hai

Dilip: no ifs or buts Angad beta tumhara sara kaam tumhara bada bhai Karthik kar lega

Karthik just make a face and thinks: Mein kahan phas gaya

Angad: Agar Kripa ko koi aitraaz nahiin hain to theekhain

Kripa: Fine, hum jaayega

Naina: Great, tum logoin abhi hi pack karlo kyunki kal Saturday hain so tum logon aaj raat hi nikaljao mein tumhari tickets book karleti hoon

Angad and Kripa just simply nodded and went to their room to pack their clothes.

When they reached their room Angad said: tumhne kyun jaane ke liye raazi kyun hogayi

Kripa:kyunki mein mummyji ka dil nahin dukhana chaathi

Angad and Kripa pack their clothes and walk to the living room. Everybody is waiting for them there.

Naina brings a bowl of dhai and feeds it to Angad and Kripa.

Then they leave for the airport.

In the car ride and flight they hardly talked.

When the reached the hotel in Goa, they both were shocked to see which hotel it was. It was the same hotel where they had come to when they were shooting their music video together.They had spent many romantic moments here.

Angad: Yeh to wohi hotel hain jaha hum......

Kripa: pehle aaye thain

They both go sadly to their hotel room.

When they reached to the room they both were crying because of old memories.

Angad: Kripa, tumhe aaj kya karna hai

Kripa: mujhe beach pe jaana hai

Angad: theekain

They leave to the beach.

When they reach they see a gola wala.

gola wala: aap to wohi ho jisko maine kuch saal pehle saath yahaan pe dekha tha.

Angad and Kripa both smily forcefully.

Angad: ji haan

Kripa: tumhe gola chahiya

Before Angad says anything, the gola wala gives them one for free.

They both share the gola and walk along the beach shoreline.

When they reach to the hotel room, Kripa's dupatta gets stuck with Angad's watch.

They both look at eachother and then suddenly just hug.

Angad: Kripa, I still love you.

Kripa: I love you too

They then decide to forgive each other mistakes and lead a good life together,

Few months later on Valentines Day

Angad and Kripa are supposed to meet at a restaurant but Angad was late.

Kripa was fuming. Then Angad finally comes.

Angad: Sry

Kripa: Kahan thein tum??? Mein ek ghantain se tumhara intezaar karahi thi.

Angad: Kyunki mein tunharain liya yain teddy bear, pack of red roses, aur card lehne gaya tha.

Kripa just smiles and hugs him: Thank You I love you.

Angad: Me too, abh mera gift kahan hai.

Kripa smiles and says: Angad, merain paas khushkaabharin hai

Angad: Kya

Kripa: Tum papa banain waala ho, Im pregnant

Angad is jumping with joy: Kripa Im so happy

They have a romantic dinner and leave to go home and tell everyone.

After few months:

Kripa was 7months pregnant and Angad was taking care of Kripa.

He forced her to drink milk and take her medicines.

Soon Kripa got into labor. Angad and Kripa had two twin babies, a boy and girl who they named Josh and Bhoomi.

They all lived happily ever after.

Entry # 2

-- Angad vs. Prithvi case is on with full swing. Prithvi has a look on his face that can only say 'I wish I would melt and vanish', when he finally shouts out "YES it was me who killed Josh... I murdered him! stabbed him!" then looks maniacally at Angad and says "he thought he could keep you two together! he thought he could double cross ME!" and starts laughing hysterically, and then suddenly sobers up his face and stares towards Kripa, but starts laughing again.

In the corner Kripa looks like a stunning spell has been put on her (Heartbeat music playing in the background). She dares not look at anyone. She just gets up turns around and walks out of the court room with all the faces staring at her's. Back at the podium Angad is also staring at the floor deep in thought. Somewhere inside him he feels pain for the humiliation Kripa has just felt.

--The officials release Angad and he is free to go

Angad talks to no one, and looks at no one. Instead, he goes straight home.

-- Kripa is packing her bags when Angad reaches their bedroom door.

Angad- "What do you think you are doing Kripa"

Kripa realizes Angad has just walked in and then trying to control her emotions that are about to burst she says, " This place is not for me Angad. This city, its people... there is no peace here. I wish I had never come here, and I wish I had never met you. Neither would I have hurt you then, nor would I have hurt myself. Today, I lost my relations, my dadi, my best friend,and... and my life. I lost you today. I am going Angad... going for good... back to Nainital."

Angad, with tears in his eyes, but a smile on his face, moves close to a confused Kripa and whispers " Lost me huh... Nainital... and what if I say that I wish that a thunder would occur so you couldnt leave ever... even if you wanted to... away from me." Kripa looks up shocked at first, then her face softens up and she dips herself into Angad hugging him, so that they look like they can never be seperated.

"I love you Kripa... I luv you more than the thing I luv the most"

~The End~

Entry # 3

Title: Milan Ki Raat

Aaj har dukh sey nijaat key baat woh din aagaya tha jiska Angad aur Kripa ko intezaar tha.

Kripa haseen sey burgundy color key shaadi key jodey mein bed pur baithi Angad ka intaizaar kur rahi hai. Angad bedroom mien aata hai aur darwazey ko khamoshi sey bund kurdeyta. Angad Kripa key khareeb jata aur uska ghongat uthat aur kehta.

Angad with his naughty look: Kripa tum bohut khubsurat lag rahi ho, kya mujhey marna chahti ho.

Kripa shy and twisting her hands says, "Acha tumko aisa lag raha hai."
Angad says, "Haan, acha chalo ab mujhey apna haath do. Kripa usko apna haath deyti hai" Angad uski kalai mein diamond bracelet pehnata hai."
Kripa says, "Wow Angad yeh tu bohut Khubsurat hai."

Angad apney dono haatho sey uska chehra ko apni taraf (towards himself) kurta hai aur uski aankho mein aankhey daal kur kehta hai.

Angad says, "Pur tumsey zyada nahin."
Kripa says, "Acha jhootey."

Angad uski aankho mein bohut pyaar sey daikhta hai. Dono ki nigahey ek dosrey sey milti hai aur sara waqt thum sa jata hai. Angad Kripa key itney khareeb hota hai key Kripa ko hur taraf (everywhere)aag si mahsoos (feel) hoti hai.

Kripa says, "Plz Angad"
Angad says, "Kirpa aaj kuch na kaho aur uskey lips pur apni ungli (finger) rakh deyta hai. "
Kripa says, "Pur Angad"
Angad, "Kirpa is din key liey humney kitna intaizaar kiya tha aur jub aaj yeh din aaya hai to tum rok rahi ho."

Kripa phir kuch kehna chati hai laikeen Angad uskey gaal (cheek) pur apney lips rukh deyta hai. Kripa ki dil ki dhadkan aur taiz honey lagti hai, uskey gaal laal honey lagtey hain. Angad uskey kaan (ear) pur hulkey sey katta hai.

Kripa apney dhadktey dil key saath hulkey sey kehti hai, "Angad."

Itney madhoosh waqt mein uski apni awaaz uska saath nahin dey rahi hoti. Aur Angad ka pyaar apney deewanepan pur hai.

Kripa: Angad Plz
Angad: Acha jao ( aur usko chod deyta)
Kripa: Jaooo (uski aankho mein daikhtey hovey).
Angad narazgi sey: Haan jao
Kripa: Acha main ja rahi hoon. Yeh keh kur Kirpa jaaney lagti hain.

Angad uska haath pakad kur apni taraf kheechta hai aur Kripa zor sey aakur uski bahoon mein girti hai. Angad phir usey apney sey dur janey ka maukha nahin deyta. Aur shayed Kirpa bhi ussey dur nahin jana chah rahi thi. Aaj unka din tha unka waqt tha. Yeh raat bhi do rooh aur jism key milaap sey aanth hoiee.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2

Nice post Selu...I give my vote to the first entry!!!Great Job! 👏 👏 👏

Sony 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3

Yea.. they are!!!

Everyone did an amazing job!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
gr8 entries guys. Amazing.

Cheers,
Mrs. Khanna/Bhatter 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
wowwwwwwwwwww
great entries guys
too good!!!
great job 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
all are great but will go for #1 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
i liked the first one , but the second one was more realistic and that could happen !!!!
Edited by 123abc - 19 years ago

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