Main Gunjan Aur Woh updated!!!:) page 29!!!!

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Hi Guys! I have been reading SaJan SS's from a long time and it has really inspired me to write one of my own.

I'm not going to go into the character sketch ( they are the same as the show). The only other character I am including is She-eena. She is slightly nicer in my story though. Anyway, I'm writing a small intro paragraph. I will only continue to write if you like it. So pls reply and comment on it. I promise I will keep u ppl interested!!

INTRO:

Gunjan's P.O.V:

Hi! Main hoon Gunjan. Mere baareme to aap jaante hi honge! Aur agar nahi jaante hain, tho main apne baareme thoda bata deti hoon.

Main Morena se hoon. Ek saal pehle, main aur meri Di dono Mumbai aaye the... Padhai ke liye. Excell College. Hmmm. Excell ke baareme kya bataon? Kuch kehne ko hai hi nahi. Baaki saare colleges ki tarha hai. Wohi teachers, wohi books aur wohi log. Haan... Ek insaan hai jo excell ko special banata hai. Buhot special. Uska naam hai Samrat. College main sab se achcha hai woh. Ussne mere dill main ek spl jagaa bana liya hai jo koi nahi le sakta. Main usse buhot pyaar karti hoon. Par woh? Woh mujhe sirf dost samajhta hai. Woh Sheena naam ki ek ladki se pyaar karta hai.

Lagta hai mere kismat main pyaar hai hi nahi.

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This is it for now guys! Pls feel free to write ur comments ( gud or bad)!! Thx for reading!

THE NEW UPDATE IS ON PAGE 2!!!!!!!!
Edited by dreamer2305 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi!!!
that was really good intro!!!
UGH i really hate SHEEE-NAH!!!!
plzzz continue soon
and also add me to ur PM list
THANKS!!!!!
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y chaddi-aunty ? i mean shee---na??....i jus hate her!....well lovely post but no sheee---na!!
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Hey really nice intro....continue soon....and add me to PM list
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hi dear, nice intro.is lukin forward to read more plz continue soon
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lovelyyyyyyyyyy concept dear

plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

i really want to read futher

it sounds interseting

love

sana

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nice concept.. do continue..
n plz add me in ur PM LIST..!!! 😊
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Thx a lot guys! I will update the new part very soon! Pls enjoy, comment and continue to read!
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I told u I'd update soon! Here is Main Gunjan Aur Woh part 1:

In College, Samrat is hanging with Sheena when he sees his best friend Gunjan walk by:

S: Chashmish! Yahaan aao na!

Gunjan smiled at him halfheartedly and shook her head.

G: Nahi. Woh... Um... Principal sir ne mujhe office me bulaya hai. Tum Sheena ke saat raho.

She waved and walked away leaving Samrat worried and distressed.

Gunjan's heart thudded in her chest. Her first lie. She had told her first lie. She had to. How could she face seeing Samrat with another girl when she loved him so strongly? She struggled to hold her tears back and walked away to the cafe.

SamNa: ( samrat+Shee-ena)

Sheena sees him worried and places a hand on his shoulder.

Sh: kya his Samrat? Tum itne pareshaan kyun lag rahe ho?

S: woh... Gunjan ke waja se.

Sh: Kya?? Gunjan ke waja se? Kyun??

S: kyunki usne mujhse jhoot bola.

Sh: samrat...? Woh tumse jhoot kyun bolegi?

S: pata nahi. Main bad itna jaanta hoon ke principal sir ne usse nahi bulaya.

Sh: Tumhe kaise pata?

S: woh iss liye kyunki aaj principal college aaye hi nahi.

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This is the update guys! Plz comment and write ur views!!

PART 2 UPDATED!
Edited by dreamer2305 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was so good
do continue soon

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