~*~Prida Romantic Scene Thread~*~ - Page 60

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Originally posted by: hapinezz13

@ ALL the scenes for the contest....just one thing 👏

@maham....beautifully written piece....but I hate it....it broke my heart and I just can't get over it.....wish it never happens.....each n every sentence had so much pain.....fab job....plz plz plz give us a romantic n happy on!!

everyone i am so envious these scenes were soo good.. u guys have some mad skillz. Mriddhu, rankanrock, adventuregirl, IVY , diya. (I hope I didn't forget anyone else).........excellent job guys and thanks for helping out throught the Prida drought. keep up the good work

You are welcome dear!

Writing by Kheerni (Nisha)

FICTION 6

Written for the PriDa scene contest

It was her birthday. And she looked lovelier than even his vision. He had given her his birthday gift earlier that day. It wasn't an expensive bauble or a fancy trinket. His modest budget hadn't afforded him many options. But he'd known as soon as he'd seen the pretty red chiffon sari...he could see her in it...and a smile had touched his lips. He had hoped she would like it. But he had not expected her to wear it tonight. The folds of soft ruby fabric draped around her pretty curves made him think thoughts he couldn't let himself. So he looked away hastily and left muttering something about the cake.

***

It was an intimate little party in the garden, with just family and a few close friends. She hadn't wanted to do anything, but he'd insisted. He knew that she needed some cheering up after the recent upheaval in their lives. He was grateful for Roshni's help with the arrangements. While Roshni teased him saying "there is nothing my Jeej can't do?!" he knew that party decorations were outside his area of expertise!

Damini looked happy and relaxed in the midst of the people she loved best. This is what he had wanted. Things had gotten a bit strained between them lately. Her annoyance was evident in her impatience with the household staff. He knew his unpredictable behavior around her was to blame. He hated the distance he had to maintain. But he had no choice. It was all he could to maintain his sanity and keep his limits.

***

She looked at him and couldn't understand. It had been a month since their wedding and they had yet to spend any time together. If they were not discussing Avni or Jai, they were around some one or the other. And the minute they found themselves alone he grew restless and remembered one or another thing he had to do. She couldn't understand it. She had sensed something between them from the moment they'd met - an undeniable spark. She smirked. It was more a live wire if she were to be entirely honest with herself. And now...after everything...he was hers. The very thought made her blush. Hadn't he felt it? And yet every time she tried to close the distance between them, he'd retreat. But today was different. He'd woken her up with a kiss on her forehead. Right then she knew this was one of the sweetest mornings of her life. Then he'd given her the most beautiful gift. But she would have loved anything he gave to her, because the idea that he had gone to look for something for her was beautiful, and she held that thought close to her heart the entire day.

She looked at the beaming faces of her mother and sisters. Prithvi touched her arm, smiled gently and nodded toward the cake. The world suddenly seemed a beautiful place.

A cheer went up as she cut the cake. Prithvi lifted a little piece and brought it to her mouth, wishing her a happy birthday. Roshni, standing beside him on the other side, pouted exaggeratedly saying "Jeej!! Won't you at least wish Damini di properly!!?

Her pout was quickly replaced by her trademark twinkling smile. A soft smile crossed Prithvi's lips, but not knowing how to react he kept his eyes off Damini.

"Roshni!" chided Damini, a blush creeping up her face.

Suddenly, a nudge at his back had him lose his footing and he stumbled forward into Damini. His arm wound itself around her to steady himself and he held on to keep them from crashing to the ground. Cruel fate, he thought...she was in his arms again...and she looked so lovely. If only...he thought, his eyes betraying him. He leaned in slightly, unable to take his eyes off her. Her heart beat an unsteady beat. He was so close. He filled her senses till she couldn't breathe. He turned his face a fraction and brushed a small kiss on her cheek, too close to the corners of her mouth. Her eyes closed a moment to capture it in her heart.

And then, as fast as he had held on, he let her go.

**Writing by Lifez-beautiful**

Imagine "ya rabba" song..or betr try playn it in B/g wile reading it... [ atleast even if wat i hv written is non sense .. u will hv da song 2 rejoice !! hehee..😉] n hey brace ur hrts............... it wud b da longest u hv evr read !!!!!! sowie 4 dat !!!😕 😕 😕

Alrdy was postd in a dfrnt thrd.. bt thot i shud put it up here tooo...😳

its continuation of dat days scene [2-12-2009] scene..... where he cms in n is floored by the beautifully set table .......its not merely da beauty of the table dat captured hm.. But the beauty of the heart .. Beauty of the love.....of the one who set the table wch made his hrt flutter.. Bounce in joy..but like they say nthng lasts 4eva.. N so the joy came crashn dwn.. Wen it shud hv been the face wch wud lite up his whole life.........here it seemed quite the contrary.. Dat face.. Dat smile.. Those gestures...... awwwww his hrt did melt...... But no......nvr.. He will nvr let his feelings rch her.......he cud nve let her realise hw madly he luvs her..dats da best kept secret .. He will always hide in his hrt'.......no 1 will evr knw' or so he thot'........

N thr he was sayn those hurtful wrds 2 her.......sayn dat he had had his food n cm.....'his hrt shouted.." liar !!" he was hungry as hell.. Yess ......he was hungry ..........hungry 4 love...... Her love.......n nthng really did matr abt dat fud wch was laid b4 hm xcpt da most imprtant fact dat' .....She made it..!! Dat was indeed music 2 his ears...... But no........nt .. Nt evr cud he accpt dat temptn offr'........ he wudnt hurt her.. Even though he knew he wud'..... he jus wantd her 2believe in luv.....he jus wantd her 2 thnk...mayb she had jus misundrstud hm.......he was nvr dat chivalrous guy whm she liked..dat guy 4 whm her safety was mre imprtant than life itslf' dat guy who was her pillar of support in all her endevours.. Who wantd her 2 succeed againsst all odds'........ who luvd her bravery...no perhaps he wasn't dat guy.. Who she had fallen iin luv' ..........

Well he was .. N we knw it'......... but noo.. He wil nvr let her knw dat'....... in this way' ......her hurt mite feel a little less pain.. Mayb'...... by knwng dat he was all fake........ not only his identity ..but his concern too...... he jus believes...... ' Hate makes u 4gt sorrow'.. U hate sm1 soooo much dat u wnt remembr the pain they gave us..atleast he believes in dat.......n thr ..his luv is makn hm do it 'MAKE HER HATE HM'..........

He seez her sit thr all brkn n dejected on the chair' tears falln out of her eye.. Nt dat he cud see it clearly.. As tears were cloudn his own.... but smthng hurt...... hurt like hell... he felt suffocated..... he jus cudnt bear 2 see her like dat.........he had 2 go out smwer' ..........no.. Nt far away..atleast tooo far away.. Aftrall this was his last nite wth her........ He dnt want to miss seeing her face once mre.. Wen she wud still be his MRS.SAXENA.......... so he went out' into d garden' were the air was cold.. As cold as the way he had behaved wth her tonite......... but nooo...... he was helpless...... caught up in a unknwn rvng ...... n nw unable to cope up wth guilt of perfrmn it......... he hated hmslf.. Bt he has no options......... n so there he sat in dat swing...........tears flowd freely............. he dnt cntrl them.. He jus thot they atleast mite b able to quench the burning sensation filling his hrt.. Dat breathn was difficult' he wantd 2 shout n cry .. Bt noo' even his throat wasn't on his side.. Jus like destiny'.......

There heavens shed its tears...... thundern at hm in angr.. But then weeping at his sorrow...... all were helpless.. To see hm soo helpless..

He then had dat sudden urge.. Dat sudden feeling dat tym is gng' the sand is draining out of the hour glass'he dnt hv mch tym ..2 even see his damnee.. God knws wat mite happen after she cms 2 knw the truth ? She mite nt even allow hm 2 see her face....... tht very thot brout shivers up his spine...... not being able 2 see her face ...... God'.. Dat was the last thing he cud evr imagine.. Infact he cudnt at al....

N so he went inside.. Srchn 4 her in their bdrm.. But alas ..she wasn't 2 b found thr.. His hrt raced' noo.. Nt nw.. Nt b4 2mrw.. Has he alrdy missed his chance 2 see her ?.. Sm unxplained fear crept inside hm.........n he walked fast all ovr d hos srchn 4 her........

N thr she was 4 his relief...... n 4 his sadness..she had falln asleep on the dining tabl itslf'...........it was soo evident she had cried hrslf 2 sleep.. Still few drops hadnt dried on the table' dat beautiful face.. Shwd lines of agony on it.. Tears had stained dat flawless face........... he cudnt bear it anymre.. He had 2 hug her.. 2 kiss her.. To make her his 4eva.. 3 tell her hw much he LIVED her in evry moment.. Not merely love.. But live her'

PART -2

He did gv in to his temptation.. He went near her n bent 2 gv a delicate peck on her head..a tear or 2 must have fallen on her.. Dat she stirred' he dnt realise........ 4 his emotins were uncntrolable nw.. But noo.. He cud nvr distrb his swt hrts sleep.. Wud he..? Nvr.. So he went n sat nxt 2 her puln the chair in almst silence.. The silence seemed like melody 2 his ears nw.. He dint want 2 brk this thread.. He jus wantd 2 watch her away 2 glory.. Wantd 2 stay like that 4 eternity..

N sit he did..but nt 4 long.. His eyes.. Graced her beauty' he was mesmerised' bt suddenly he rememberred smdng..da shine 4m those beautiful glasses were disturbn hm n wen he turned he found the bowl of her love.. Yess.. It wasn't mere fud kpt there.. It was her luv.. He then fondly caressed the bowl.. B4 slwly opening it' it was cold' but yet warm wth love' he had to taste it.. Taste her luv' wat if.. He dint get anodr chance ???... Nooo.. He dint even want 2 go thr' he jus tuk a spoonful n tasted'again tears flowed.. Bt no.. This tym it was tears of joy' after all.. It was his WIFE's love he was eating' wat can be more delicious than dat ?... His damnee had made it.. Da main ingredient was her love.. So all othr shrt cmgs dint even matr' nly god knew dat it was too salty' to hm.. It was elexir.. Nothng less than dat.. He tasted both da dish' jus a spoonful.. He cudnt get hmslf 2 eat mre.. His tears .. His tears of joy.. Of love.. Of desperation.. Wudnt let hm anyfrthr' n worse.. D feeling dat his jaan was lyng thr empty stmached jus bcz he had denyed ' was jus killing hm'

Pri was too engrossed in his feelings dat he hadnt noticed damz watchn hm' she had stirred.. Or shall I say felt his presence'? A hrt knws.. Wen a hrt calls it wth all its luv' but she dnt wake up.. She 1st thot it's a dream.. It cant b pri.. Or can it ? He caant b sittn here n eatn the stuff I cukd n relishn it..? But even if I can accpt dat.. I jus cant accpt.. His tears' her hrt ached' the last thng in da wrld she wantd 2 see was see her knight in shining armor brk dwn in 4nt of her' n da worst part was.. She dint knw why !.. It was bcmg 2 mch 4 her 2 bear all this.. She jus had 2 get up n hug hm' but dreaded.. Wat if he mite run away again.. Avoid her again' perhaps it really was a dream, she thot.. But a relly hrt brkn 1.. Worse than reality.. Her wrst nightmare..n so thnkn she tried 2 fall asleep again..

PART -3

He then noticed her unrest.. Bt then thot mite b she is feel cold n thot.. Hw his dalng.. Who has nvr slpt anywer bt on her bed.. Lying here.. Ooo.. He jus wantd 2 curse hmslf 4 dat !... Bt then he thot.. Enuf is enuf.. N then wat he did ...brout her 2 her senses... he slowly picked her up 4m da chair..he almst in a trance.. Dnt even notice dat she had opened her eyes n was staring rite at hm'but yess.. Nly 4 a moment.. 4 she still thot it's a dream.. Most beautiful dream.. So dnt want 2 cm out of it.. N she jus closed her eyes to capture that DREAM 4 eternity..

N thr he was holding her as he was holding his life in these very hands.. N true it was.. She was his life artr al.. He tuk her n gently placed her on their bed'n then suddenly she again jrkd back 2 life.. A fear crept in her eyes.. Was he ..gng 2 leave her'. here .. Was this beautiful dream gng 2 end.. 4 it was too beautiful 2 b real.. Or so she thot..she had dat desperate urge in her to hold on to hm.. Tightly' orelse wat if he went away.. Vanish ?...no she cudnt let dat happen.. Not even in her dream.. N she caut his arms as he laid her dwn on d bed carefully as if she was a feather..n he was jerked out of his trance by her sudden action.. Or shall I say shocked out of his own dream... he was in his own wrld.. In his own dream.. Wer he was allowed to stare at her endlessly...hold her 4 eons 2 cm.. Feel her till he 4got wat anythng else in da wrld feels like in 4nt of her love..Hug her till their souls get lost like the rivers get lost in da sea of origin.. yes it started as rains n ended up again in da same place jus like if he was born wth his destiny 2 love her..n only her..n thr he was holdn her..

But reality struck.. And a hard one at dat..tears wer filling his eyes.. Bt no.. He cudnt let dwn his veil of hatred.. hw can he..? .. He loved her sooo much mre than his own pains.. His heart want to bend n hug her.. 2 sleep wth her .. To hold her n 2 reamin like dat 4eva...n most importantly 2 wipe away those dreadful tears off her eyes.. He jus cudnt bear 2 see it there anymre' but''..

But he resisted' he simply pushed her hands away n went off 4m thr.. Dnt bothr 2 turn back' no nt dat he dnt want to.. Bt bcz he dint want her 2 c his tears..

Smdng stung.. A terrible pain cropped up'.

It was her hrt... it pained.. She closed her eyes unable to bear it.. n her face became wet again.. Perhaps.. This was a bad dream aftral' she thot' why was dream n reality so much alike ?.. Why ' dint she atleast desrve 2 hv hm atleast in her dreams...n then tossed to her side.. Still wth closed eyes'n wet.. Suddenly she felt cold... she wasn't cvrd in her blanket.. she had hastened to hold hm b4 he was gng 2 tuck her in...n he had 2 run away.. Run away 4m his feelings.. His responsibilities 2wrds her mid-way...N so she suddenly bcm AWAKE... fully AWAKE .. Cold .. Like cold indifference can make many a ppl awake to their surroundings... n she stared 2wrds wer a slight lite was drizzling in... her mind was blank... but smdng wat she saw brought her 2 peace... there near da wndw... der stood a figure whm she can recognise even if her eyes were closed..n thr he stood wth his face facing da moonlight' she cud see nly his back... but she cud imagine hw his face wud be glowing in dat beautiful moonlight.......xceedingly handsome indeed... a smile crept up to her face.......even in these tyms of srw.. The mere thot of his face seemz 2 lite up her face.......love..ufff!!

But she dnt knw his face wasn't as peaceful as she had imagined it 2 be..... It was filled wth srw.. Grief.. Love.. N its pain...tears were the most common wrd 2nite.. It was written evrywer..

PART - 4 [last part... i knw.. nw u can leave a *sigh* of relief !! hehe ]

N suddenly he felt her smile.. Her warmth' he cudnt see her but cud sense her radiant smile.. He turned.. Unknwn dat a pair of searchful eyes were tryn 2 read his face.. 2 make sm sense out of this chaos... n all she cud see was his face' wth tears in them.... Oo.. It killed her...but wait there was smdng elz in them, wch she had longed 2 see.. 4 a long long tym nw... as if she was waitn her whole lyf 4 this moment..HIS LOVE ' HIS LOVE 4 HER' its was ovrwhelming....too overwhelming...

He then slowly came near her.. Hw cud he leave anythng incmplete...hw cud he leave his luv cold.. Even if he cudnt gv her the warmth of his love.. Atleast he cud tuck her in properly nw.. Assuming dat she is sleepn.... N so he cm 2 tuck her in' while she jus kept her eyes closed.. Sensing he mite leave her again if he finds her awake.. She dint knw why' but 4 da moment she dnt care.. All she wantd was 2 hv hm near her... if dat meant she had 2 lay still thr.. 4 nw.. Or 4evr.. She jus wantd hm nearby.. Dats all..

He then tucked her in gently.. N gv a swt peck on her 4head.. N then sat nxt 2 her a minute or two.. Registering evry inch of her face in his mind..making her potrait in his mind.. 4 future.. The thot aches.. Bt he cudnt waste these precious moments thnkn dat n he cntd consuming her visually.. N then wen vision was getn wrse as it was getn clouded.. Went bk 2 soak away his tears in da moonlight... it was rainin outside... he cud relate 2 dat... its was raining inside his hrt too...

But he dint knw.. His simple gesture might have jus gvn hm a hope 4 a better 2mrw.. Dint knw dat his love was like the swt scent of jasmine.. Wud cm out even if hidden beneath many layers of mist..

She had noticed hm... she had noticed his love.. His true love 4 her.. His true feelings... she had seen dat prithvi who was hidn behind dat mask... but she sensed smdng was wrng.. Gravely wrng... othrwise her prithvi'.....her one n only pri cud nvr behave dat way.. N yaa she knew it.. N she was right abt hm.. He cud nvr b so rude 2 her.. She jusssssss knew it... but nw'... dat she knew she had been right abt smdng botheren hm.. She dint knw wat.. Bt she knew ..atleast knew dat he loved her.. But was hiding his love behind a mist of lies.. She wudnt pull hm out of it.. 4 the fear of loosing hm.. But she wnt let hm do this 2 hmslf any longer too... she made a resolution.. A strng one at dat' "no matr wat happens.. i she will be wth hm'... even if he doesnt say it aloud 2 me.. The mere fact n the nly fact wch mattered was he luvd me 4m da bottom ofhis hrt'... I will find a way out of it.. I will b thr 4 hm till da last breath of ma life.. I will b thr 4 u prithvi'"

Well.. It was gud.... it was da silver lining of the dark clouds wch had caut their life up... there was still hope....hope dat prithvi's damnee wud perhaps.... not soon... but aleast in the future wud 4gv hm 4 all his wrng doings... she afteral did see the turmoil he is gng thru... he did try his best to cntrol his feelings 4 her... he did try his best 2 stay away 4m her... he did try his best 2 make her hate hm.. He did try his best 2 avoid her seeing his tears.... Da wrd was he did TRY HIS BEST..FOR HER .....FOR HER HAPPINESS...ALL THAT HE CUD'.... Afterall HE DID LOVE HER MORE THAN LIFE ITSELF............. may be this was his redeming moment'........... Heaven did hv some mercy left'............. 4 even Gods cudnt bear their tears....................................................................

So heres hoping 4 a brighter sunshine 2mrw.. 4 better day 2mrw......... 4 happiness was nt far behind' we can see it in da horizon.. As da sun rises.............. For a happier .. More joyful PRIDA.....................

Lets hope wth them..........

a NEW begining...........😃

ps : i dnt like endings...😳

sry ....😕.hv added nxt part 2 da previous post..😳

sowie ...😕 has re-postd this part along wth da is one...😳
-luv niki..

sowie.. has re -postd this part along wth da 1st one..😳
- luv niki..😊

a few verses which i thought were pretty apt for Prithvi and his love for Damini: