FF: A Grain of Sand, EPI,pg-36

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hearme21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#271

Just read this story from start to end. Loved it! JB relation was so beautiful, despite the fact that it started of as mere physical attraction, it went on to be something so unconditional. I guess thats what sets this story apart.
Beautiful ff. Although I wasnt too happy with Lakshmi forgiving Tarun, cant believe the rascal really could ever reform. But hey, miracles do happen!
Lovely story again.

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sumera syed

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Posted: 17 years ago

#272

i thought your ff was really gd

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

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Posted: 17 years ago

#273

Wonderful FF Dhani....loved the epilogue to the bits....hope you are going to start a new one soon.......thanks 👏

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 17 years ago

#274

hey dhani
wonder ending n epilogue...

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tropa

@moonlitnight

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Posted: 17 years ago

#275

great FF Dhani 👏
looking for more from you 😛

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 17 years ago

#276

Dhani,

you are truly an gifted writer, the way you etched out all the characters in this story and made an beautiful story around is just amazing.loved the epilogue, brought a huge smile on my face.loved the progression of Jai and Bani's relationship and ofcourse Tarun relzing his mistake. I will be eagerly waiting for your ff.do continue soon. 👏

preet 😳

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lovelyyrose

@lovelyyrose

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Posted: 17 years ago

#277

the shortest, sweetest ,bitterest ff
truly showcasing the feelings of woman .the two roles bani and lakshmi are amazing and lively.enjoyed reading
thankx for the wonderful ff

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melonie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#278

Hai Dhani,

Loved all the chapters in this story 👏 , though a little sad that it came to an end 😭 ...beautiful progression in JB's relationship 😳 😳 , loved the name you gave their baby...arth...very unique 👍🏼 👏 😳
Tarun realised his mistake, that's a good sign 😛 😃
Waiting for your next FF 😃 😊