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Posted: 15 years ago
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LoL 😆 😆 😆 muski confusion is too funny and yet soo cute....
n abbaji talking to da plants.... LOL..... just brill!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow amazing part totally luved it
awww mithu is so innocent
want to know how she is going to meet rahul as sonia
plz cont soon, thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey imane...wat GREAT part....LOVED muski and rahul's fight..lol...mithu..who would think that her nickname would be mithu..lol...they were sooo cute to fight with him for that...and abbbaji my god kaisa admi hai? pooor nikki bholi bhali ladki ko dat diya..lol..but was sooo cuteeee..and then the sonia story omggggg...rahul with his EVIL laugh and muskkkii being a sweetheart making him feeel gooodd...that was justtt sooo sweetttttttt..LOVED it..please update next part soon yaaar i m dying to read moreeee

P.S i m realllyyyy sorrryyy for lateee replyyyyyyyyy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey sweety, im sooooooooo sorry for delayed comments😳 *holding ears* sorry😳

Part 1:
WOW WOW WOW😆😆😆 I totally loved it😊
Loved the garewals discussion at dining table😆😆 Abhi and armi are fed up of there dads decisions😆😆😆 loved how he decided there honeymoon and niks got excited😆😆 wow AN honeymoon
😳😳 cant wait😉 loved Rahul at the wedding, lolz and mithu with the joota chupai😆😆sumthing like HAHK but i guess better😉 Loved AN in the bedroom😆😆 nikki is sooo cute... loved her packing😆😆 and AR😆😆 and ridzi always favours him 🤣🤣 loved the night scene, the hisaab also his bad at🤣🤣 and i loved when he jst didnt say anything but slept with a smile😆😆 and her goodnight jaanu😳😳

Part 2:
Loved RM mithu scene😆😆😆 parakeet ko mithu bulaaya and she thought he was telling her😆 sooo cute... loved there arguement😉 Awww Rahul meeting a girl and his sad story😭😭😭 Poor rahul feel sorry for him😭😭 so now muski allso feels bad, thats good😃 loved armi calling abbaji from the back😆😆 and abbaji reminded me of atul😆😆 loved nikki sooo sweet😳 by the wats a JAGRA???😕😕 did u mean she wanted to make a GAJRA😆
loved how armi wanted a second honeymoon but ridzi kept reminding him of his faults and not good stuff🤣🤣🤣and he actually put the house on fire🤣🤣🤣 poor armi🤣Muskaans plan was sooo funny loved how rahul forced her in to cum and meet him as he knws its a silly prank😆😆 wow White sari😉

Loved the begining! it sounds like we gonna have great fun throughout this FF😃 Loved both the parts tooooo much:
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Update soon, luved it tooooooooooo much😳

luv u
Nadz😳

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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Part 3


Scene One

Armaan is in his office and is day dreaming about Riddhima, Smiling to himself. He picks up the phone and dials Ridzi's cell phone number wanting to make plans for tonight…On the other hand Ridzi is in the kitchen with the helper maid… she gets interrupted with Armaan's Call as she was instructing the maid with the following instruction…

Ridzi: Suno ajj please tum khana mat bana na, kal saaray loog kahnay ki table per say bhookay uth kar gaye hain, pata nahi kaisa kahna banaya tha, koi maaza he nahi hain tumharay haath mein…

Maid: (Starts to laugh) Arary bhabhiji maine apna haath thodi pakaya tha jo voh "mazay" ka hoga…

Ridzi: (gives her a stern look to make her stop laughing) Dekho meray saath yeh fazool maazaq mat kiya karo… samjhi… (her cell phone begins to ring and the maid continues to do the handy work) Hello..?

Armaan: Hellooo..(lovingly) Kya horaha hain?

Ridzi: Kuch nahi kahairiyaat? Kaise phone kar liya tumne…?

Armaan: Bus yunhi tumhari yaad rahi thi…

Ridzi: Hmm yaad… okay…(she pauses then starts to instruct the maid as she remembered something) Suno keema nikaal do…

Armaan: Keema?!

Ridzi: Nahi tumhay nahi kehrahi, maid se baat kar rahi hoon…

Armaan: (irritated) tum mujhay yeh "tum" kyun kehti hoon..?

Ridzi: Kyunki "tu tu" karna mujhay pasand nahi hain…

Armaan: Riddhima, pata hain Nikkita Abhi ko "aap" "suniyay" aur "ji" kar kay bulati hain…

Ridzi: (still on the phone but not really listening as she is still ordering the maid around) Arey haan, Abhi aaj kahna bahir kahaye ga airport jaatey huye, toh tum chawal rehnay do, vohi kahta hain shawq se…

Armaan: (makes a face as she not listening to him) Acha suno…hum bhi aaj raat ko dinner kay liye bahir chalay? (he said excitedly but the response from Ridzi caused him disappointment)

Ridzi: Khabardaar jo tumnay Abbaji ki kahnay mein corn oil ki jagah doosra koi aur oil daala…(she instructed the maid once again listening to Armaan but not paying attention)

Armaan: Main..Mian kuch keh raha hoon Riddhima..(he said in a pleading tone which finally grabbed Ridzi's undivided attention)

Ridzi: Nahi, aaj raat nahi, main nahi ja saakti…

Armaan: Kyun?!

Ridzi: Voh stomach kuch upset hain…

Armaan: Arey yaar aisi ki taisi kardi achay bhalay mood ki…

Ridzi: Kya kaha?!

Armaan: nahi Kuch nahi…Kub upset hua stomach…?

Ridzi: Ammaji bata rahi thi kay dard oh kal se tha par…

ARmaan: (confused) Ammaji bata rahi thi?

Ridzi: Haan, unka stomach upset hain na…

Armaan: (rolls his eyes)

Ridzi: Abb dekho voh meray haath se he dava layti hain aur mujhay he unka kahna pakana hain, issi liye main nahi ja saakti dinner kay liye… phir kabhi sahi…

Armaan: per Ridd…

Ridzi: Bye Jaanu, abhi mujahy kaam hain aut tum bhi office main kaam karo…baad mein baat kartey hain…(she hangs up and smiles before getting back to work in the kitchen)


Scene Two

~Abhi and Nikki in Shimla for honeymoon~

Abhi: Nikita aur kitni dair…(he asked as he paced around the hotel room for the 50th time)

Nikki: Agaye Abhi…app do minute intezaar nahi kar saktay…. (she called out form inside the bathroom)

Abhi: Do minute nahi do ghantay hogaye hain tumhay tayaar hotey huye…

Nikki: uff oh, achay se tayaar honay mein time toh lagta hain na…! (she finally stepped out the bathroom and as Abhi turned to see her, he was completely horrified as to what she was wearing in the freezing cold temperature. A sleeveless bright red chiffon sari, with her hair done like an old hindi film acteress, Loads of eye make up, and the red lipstick that totally made her look like someone from the 60's)

Abhi: AHHH!

NiKKI: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Abhi: (stops screaming) Tum kyun cheekh rahi hoon?

Nikki: Aap bhi toh cheekh rahay thay…

Abhi: tumharai shakal dekh kar cheekh raha hoon…Yeh kya hain Nikki?!

Nikki: (makes a face) Kyun aap ko acha nahi laga? Maine aik dum hema malini jaisa make up kiya hain, Shimla mein he toh unki subse famous film shoot huyi thi, baraf mein..issi color ki sari mein… (she spins around like a model in front of abhi who rolls his eyes)

Abhi: Dekho Nikki agar tumhay meray saath bahir jana hain toh sahi kay kapray pehno aur chalo varna yahi per raho aur main ja raha hoon…

Nikki: per..

Abhi: Miane kaha na kapray badlo ya phir main jar aha hoon…

Nikki: Lakin jub tak main apnay dosray kapray nikal loon ge raat hojaye gee…phir app kahay gay kay meri vajah se late…

Abhi: (sighs) Oh God! Chalo phir yeh jacket pehno aur tissue se apna face safa karo, itna makeup toh koi holloween per bhi nahi karta hoga..

Nikki: (takes the full cover coat from his hand and obediently puts in on, she was sad that her beautiful chiffon sari was all covered up by the long black coat) Abb theek hain?

Abhi: (hands he rthe tissue) Wipe karo cheray ko…

Nikki: Eye make up bhi…? (She asked innocently)

Abhi: Filhaal toh lipstick he wipe karlo, eye make up phir bhi chalay ga…

Nikki: (smiles as she finally felt that Abhi atleast liked her eye makeup if not anything else)

Abhi: (after two minutes) Chalo ready?

Nikki: (throwing away the tissue paper, she smiles) Hmmm chalay…

Scene Three

~ Rahul is waiting for "SONIA" in his friend's lawn at night; he can't wait to reveal this made up ghost so that he can finally get this creepy stalker to stop stalking him. He is pacing around talking to himself as he is coming up with ideas to expose the person behind this prank.~

Rahul: Hmm abb mazza aye ga…maine bhi toh dekho yeh "Sonia" hain kuan…(he notices someone behind him in a white sari and long curly hair, he starts to walk goes towards her.)

Muskaan: (hears his footstep approaching, she changes her voice in to a ghostly tone) Rukh Jao Rahul..! Dur rukh kay baat karo…

Rahul: (halts his step for a moment) Main…Main vahi karo ga jo tum kaho ge Sonia…(he is still walking towards her by being very cautious in not making any noise)

Muskaan: (not realizing Rahul is headed in her direction as her back is facing Rahul, she continues) Tumne mujhse vaada kiya tha kay tum mujhay bhool jaao gay…?

Rahul: Tum yeh kyun chahti ho kay main Son.. I mean tumko bhool jao… (There were only few steps left between the two, Rahul inched closer quitely)

Muskaan: Kyun ki main tumhay khush dekhna chahti hoon, hameesha…hameesha…(she smiled thinking her plan is working as she didn't hear anything for a moment)

Rahul: (he could now clearly see her profile view and it didn't take him long to recognize who this troublemaker was. He proceeded with an angry expression and squinted eyes towards Muskaan and turned her around by grabbing her arm tightly)

Muskaan: (shrieks) Ah..ow!

Rahul: Acha toh yeh tum thi! Mujhay pehlay he shakq tha kay yeh tum toh!

Muskaan: Ooo Ho… shaq?! tumhay shaq tha toh aaye kyun huh?! Itni asaani se ulloo ban gaye! Hmmph! (she tries to free her hand but his grip was too tight)

Rahul: Ulloo ho ge tum! Main sirf yeh dekhna chahta tha kay tumhara maqsaad kay hain iss sub kay peechay?!

Muskaan: Acha..haath..haath choro mera!

Rahul: (Holding on tighter) Haath toh main uss waqt nahi choro ga jub tak tum saach nahi batao ge, kya maqsaad hain tumharaha huh?! Problem kya hain?!

Muskaan: (Gasps while struggling with his grip but justifes herself anyways) Issay kehtay hain nayki kar aur dariya mein daal! Main toh tumhara bhala karna charahi thi…

Rahul: Baqwaas band karo! Tum jaisi larki aur kissi ka bhala karay ge..hmmph! Dossroon kay jazbaat se khelna jis ki aadat ho voh kabhi kuch acha nahi kar sakti! Tumne Zindagi ko khel bana kay rakhawa hain!

Muskaan: Aur tumnay mujhay kya samjha hua hain! Choro mera haath!!! Varna main bahut shoor machao gee! (she said pointing her finger at him)

Rahul: Acha! Ulta choor police waloon ko daatey!

Muskaan: Kya…Kya..KYA! tumne mujhay choor Kaha?! Abhi kahray kharay tumhay pitva na diya toh mera naam bhi "Mithu" nahi!

Rahul: (smirks still gripping her hand) Voh Kaise?

Muskaan: (fakely smiles back) Yeh jis tarah se tumnay mera haath pakrava hain na, agar shoor macha kay sub ko bula liya na toh teri aisi ki taisi ho jaye ge!

Rahul: (lets go of her hand at once and stands at a safe distance of 2 feet from her)

Muskaan: Hmmph?! Itna he dum kham tha na! saala ullu ka phatta! Tharki! (she fixes her sari and hair while cursing Rahul who was still standing there listening to her foul mouth)

Rahul: tune..tune yeh kya bola?! Mera ghussa bahut khatarnaak hain…

Muskaan: hey…eyy eey…(warns him with her hand as he was once again coming close to her, he maintains his distance on her gesture) kya… kya? Kya kar layga tu? Huh? Bol… Darti hoon main tujh se, Abbey ja ja…bahut dekhay hain tujh jaise, larkiyoon kay phasanay kay bahanay hain saaray, main nahi samajhti! Masoom se shakal bana kay phirta hain aur harkateein dekho!

Rahul: (shocked at all the false allegations that "Mithu express" blamed him with, he interferes as Muskaan continues) Zubaan sambhaal kay baat karo…! Dekho…

Muskaan: Kya! Kya karlo gay! Ullo! Tharki! Ghaday! (she grabs his shirt collar starts to hit him while cursing, Rahul is trying his best to get rid of her and luckily Sanajay, Naina, and Tania come running as they heard the commotion in the garden)

Sanjay: (breaks them apart) Araam se…hey..hey, yeh kay kar rahi hain Mithu..chor…chor ussay!

Rahul: (straightens his shirt and clothes as Muskaan finally backs off) Dekh Sanjay samjhalay issay…kal se demaa ko tang kar kay rakha hua hain…!

Muskaan: (comes forward once again as she heard Rahul's request to Sanjay) Kya kaha? Maine tang kiya hain tujhay! Huh…(Rahul stomps off before Muskaan completed another speech of Rahul's disgrace) Ja..jaa…dafa ho! Tera pura khaandan ho ga tang! Tu KHUD tang! teri shakal tang! tera demaag tang!!

Sanjay: ( Ignores Muskaan and calls out after Rahul as he walked away) Ra..Rahul!

Tania: Mithu tu…tu pagal toh nahi hogaye hain!

Naina: Kya ho gaya hain tujhay!

Muskaan: Arrey choro saala! Tharki…! Pagal..! ullo..! Ghada! (she walks off as Tania and Naina shake their head at their friend who was too stubborn to listen to anyone else)

~Scene Four~

Armaan comes back from Office with Gajras for Ridzi in his hands, Ridzi is outside reading the newspaper in the garden. He looks around to make sure there is no one else then goes outside to his beloved wife to surprise her.

Ridzi: (look up from her paper as she heard footsteps) hellooo!

Armaan: (smiles widely) Hi..!

Ridzi: (noticing his wide smile, she puts down the paper and looks at him) Tum bara muskara rahay hoon? Kya baat hain?

Armaan: (hiding the gajras behind his back) Guess karo main kya laya hoon?

Ridzi: (smiles and thinks) Ummm…mmm…haan! Tum aama ji kay liye stomach upset waali dava lay kay aaye ho? Right? (she answered excitedly)

Armaan: (rolls his eyes) Nahi jaan..main gajray…gajray laya hoon tumharay liye…(he puts them infront of her and Ridzi just looks on)

Ridzi: Gajray! (surprised) Lakin yeh maine kub mangvaye…?

Armaan: Arrey tumhay kub fursat hoti hain kuch bhi mangvanay kay liye…main khud laaya tumharay liye, mohabbat se… (he comes close to Ridzi lovingly)

Ridzi: (Sarcastically) Mohabbat se? okay…saach saach bata do chakkar kya hain?

Armaan: Chakkar? (surprised)

Ridzi: Zahir hain, tum bagair kissi matlab ya bagir kissi chakkat kay itni dair toh muskara nahi saktay, aur meri kissi bhi baat ka mazaaq uratay huye itni dair baat bhi nahi kar saktey, infact meray liye kuch la bhi nahi saktay…zaroor tumnay Abbaji se koi baat manvani ho ge…

Armaan: Nahi jaan…

Ridzi: Dekho saach saach bata do baat kya hain…please…

Armaan: Aray, aray…main kissi courthouse men khara ho kya..? (be backs off Ridzi and protests like a child who is being blamed for no reason)

Ridzi: Armaan! Jis kay dil mein choor hota hain na voh tumhari tarah behave karta hain. Mujhay saach saach bata do kya baat manvani hain I swear main tumhay kuch nahi bolo ge otherwise maine aabaji se baat karni paray gee…

Armaan: (irritated by her behavior, he picks up the Gajras and his bag) dhamkati (threat) kyun de rahi ho baar baar?! Huh?! Samajhti kya ho apnay aap ko...hmmph! (he gets up and leaves quickly before Ridzi had a chance to actually call out Abbaji from inside)

Ridzi: (thinks to herself after he leaves) Zaroor koi na koi chakkar toh hain…hmm…!

*************End of Part Three*************

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Comments for Part 2:

Rahul wanting to talk to Muskaan and hiding out near the door, soo cute!! The whole parakeet thing too! WOW Muskaan is a gussa-wali for sure 😆
ROFL at Rahul and his "Sonia" story, and Muskaan hearing it and feeling all bad 😆.

Nikki is way too tubelight brain-ish here huh 😆😆 i share the feeling.. it sometimes takes me a minute or two lol.

Uh oh.. Muskaan's white sari plan seems like it is not heading for a cute moment 😆😆

Lovely Part!! Thanks for continuing! 😳
Edited by ibdt2004 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great part!!
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG🤣

Imane this was just toooooooooooooo Goooood😆😆😆 I totally loved it, loved it and LOVED IT👏
👏

RM:
I totally loved Muski's plan😆😆 to make him feel better but he was gonna make her feel better😆😆 he already knew it was a silly prank😆😆😆 I totally loved how muski came in a sari and tried her best😆😆
but rahul caught her and she got so irritated by that😆😆 loved how she kept blaming him etc, and was like she wud scream and he wud be in trouble😆😆😆 totally loved there whole interaction etc, rahul was too good😆😆
🤣 Loved it as usual😉

AR:
Oh god i just cudnt stop laughing at them🤣🤣🤣 Bechaara armi😆😆 He was misshin his shona😳😳 I loved how ridzi always cuts him off, though i reli feel bad for him
but funny too😆 ridzi is sooo cute but mean... loved there telephone convo when miss ridzi jst kept talking to the maid that was like too good 🤣🤣🤣and maid bhi😆😆 lolz loved how ridzi told her i dont like mazaak😆😆😆 and loved how armi was so annoyed but he asked her for dinner😳😳 and she was like stomach pain🤣🤣🤣 ammaji ko hai🤣 she cares about everyone but him shame 🤣🤣 I loved how armi brought gajras for her and she was like theres definitely something he wants😆😆😆 and he went to sleep and she was still thinking koi chakkar hai😆😆 he jst brought it with love😳😳

AN:
🤣🤣🤣 Toooo goooooood! i was smiling the whole time🤣🤣🤣 nikki is sooo bholi bhaali and Abhi😆😆 she actually dressed like hema🤣🤣🤣 and he made her wear a jacket🤣🤣
but she was happy that he liked her make up😳😳 soooo cute!


I totally loved the WHOLE Part it was toooooooo cute😳😳

Do update soon and sorry for the late comments on the previous two parts😳😳

Luv u
Nadz😳

Ps: jst one question... i thought muski was from ladki waale how cum she is living in ladke ka ghar😆😆 i mean that sanjays how right so how can the girls side live there😆😆
Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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ROFL!!! Dost I love you!

I feel bad for Armaan yaar. His wife doesn't give him any importance it seems. Keema! ROFL! Pet kharaab hai?! LOL! I was cracking up!

Abhi-Nikki toh... what do I say to Hema Malini Jr. I had a feeling she would do something... ODD. I totally imagined one of the 60s heroines... *shudders*

RM was HILARIOUS! That's all I'm going to say. They KILLED me! rofl! Muskaan's mummy needed to wash that child's mouth out with soap! Allah! Kitni gaaliyaan deti hai. I don't even say that many. So stubborn! Poor rahul. lolz!

UPDATE SOON!!!

love ya dost!

Komzie
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Imane that was another amazing part.
Awww poor ammy ridz didn't agree to go out to dinner with him,
actually that part was funny, how ridz jst ignored ammy and was talking to the maid,
and poor armaan tho pura confused hogaya tha😆😆
OMG loved the RM part, it was so funny, the way mithu told rahul that she will call everyone and
rahul jst moved bck keeping a safe distance😆😆😆 mithu gets what she wants
Looking forward to their story
thanx for the pm, plz cont soon

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