~^Tera He Pyaar^~ *Part 7 Pg 14* 2-7-10 PM'S sent - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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omgggggggggg hilarious part...first nikki's hindi movie makeup and honeymoon palnnings..loll she was sooo funnnyyyyyyyyy. and then our cutest RM..omggg they were just hilariousssssssssssssssssss🤣 muskaan is same has genelia from JTYJN..she just cracks me up yaaar😆 poor rahul, wonder how will he survive with her..lol 😆 and then AR..yaaar i feel soo bad for armaan..ridzi doesnt give any bhaav to him..poor guy..but i can't wait to read more..update sooon..and thank u for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
it was awwwwsem
pm me
want morrrrre rm..pleaaaaaaaase
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

nikki's makeup 🤣🤣muskaan was too gud.....she is the same stubborn muski....😆par jab pyaar ho jaye na saara stubborness uthar jayega.....😆 waiting for that!!!felt bad for armaan yaar......ridz toh usse bhav hi nahi dethi.....want to know how the story proceeds........cont soon

-prajna
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part!!
thanks for the pm!!
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
wow...That was sooo cuuutteeee.....
RM were so lively...i felt like i was actuaaly watching them do that way.....
I feel bad for Armaan...ridzi so busy in her work that she ha no time for Armaan.....
OMG!!! Nikki is sooooo filmy.........
Lovely....yaar the way u potrayed diff jodis differently is sooo cool....Thanks 4 pm....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
great part but RM part was small :(

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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
OMG!!! loving and completely enjoying this FF ....All the characters are very interesting ..nikkki is very cute..lol, its a lil hard to imagine armaan like 🤓..but poor one, kitney pyaar se he is doing things for his wife but woh hai ki ghass hi nahi dal rahi .ridzi is another diff n intresting character..gharwalo ka khayal rakhtey rakhtey gharwaley ko hi bhulgayi..bechara armaan 💔.but she is a good daughter in law for sure😛
for some reason the vedio isnt working for me 😒😒
your describtions are beautiful and i love all ur dialogues
lol lol loved AR phone convo ....hehehe specially the part where she says that TU-TU bulana mujhey pasand nahi and the ammaji stomach upset part 🤣🤣and maids PJs also😆😆
AN part was also funny ...she is soo innocently cute lol and she is satisfied with abhi liking her eye makeup atleast ...OMG this is lovely...i m enjoying every scene in every part

muskaan said "THARKI" 🤣..hahaha thats a funny word lolz what does that mean btw ?...muskaan ki galiyo ki express is awesome🤣🤣🤣
it was soo sweet of armaan to bring gajras for ridzi 😳and it was soo not sweet on her part to mistake it as a source of "rishwat" to "manaofy" abbaji 🥺

AMAZING FF imane ...loved all the parts so far. I really wanna see this FF on my tv screen.😍😍😍it will be soo much fun ⭐️

sorry for the late comments and plz plz plz plz add me to ur PM list 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwwww the third part was cute Imane!! Love Muskaan's wild mouth, itni gaaliya deti rehti hai 😆.

Rahul bechara trying to defend himself lol.

HAHA AR part was hilarous and a little sad for Armaan lol, he was trying to flirt with his wifey and she was busy talking about something else. lol. Esp the pet mai dard haha.

haha WOW trying to imagine Nikki's 60's make up lol, not sure if i want to haha. So cute how he tells her to fix herself, and she is like eye make up too?

Coming back to RM!! 😃 Loving their interactions here, soo many misunderstandings, and such cute cute scenes!! Lovee you for writing such awesome RM parts!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Reply Time!


@ibdt2004 (shilpa): your comments for parts 2 and 3 were Sooo Adorable and Sweet! Thanks Dear for paying such critical attention to the storyline. Really appreciate your Time and Efforts for actually reading my work! Love Ya and Love your Fanfiction…"Attracted to you" It's GOING GREAT and I can't hardly wait for it to progress!

@Radhika Shah: Thanks Draling! I will definitely keep you up to date as soon as I continue…!

@nadz_J: I am LOVING your colorful PINK COMMENTS! They totally make me SMILE! You are soo SWEET and I am always feeling like I am the BEST writer ever after I read your comments. LOL. The way you take the tiem to point out exactly what you liked is really NICE and I appreciate all of it!

@AshiYuvi4life (KOMAL a.k.a DOST) THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously this fiction is meant to make you ROFL because RM are best suited to do just that. I love everything ABOUT your comment as always. SERIOUSLY you are the REASON behind me writing this fiction because your comments are worth the time and effort I take to write and ENTERTAIN you…Hope EVERYTHING is going GREAT for you…Still waiting on your "Rishta" fiction to be UPDATED! Love ya- Imane

@ pari_smile: Keep looking forward as there is a lot of MASTI AND FUN waiting for you! I am EXTREAMELY glad you are enjoying this… Abhi-Niks and Armi-Ridzi are meant to make you laugh out loud and judging by your LOVELY comment I think they are doing their job right! Will PM you soon upon the next UPDATE!

@i-love-dr.rahul: HMMM…interesting connection of Muski to Genilia from JTYJN, but I SWEAR this was not intentional, I actually just based her off of her original character in Dil Milll Gaye. And yes RAHUL will need to really FALL for her so that he could put up with who she is and what she is. LOL! Thanks for the comment will update you about the NEXT UPDATE!

@RM_lover: Heyyy thanks so much for the comment and I assure you that there is so much MORE stored for you and for RM LOVERS! Keep Reading!

@cezzuprerna: HAHHHA! Hopefully "Jub Pyaar Hojaye ga" tub hi Muskaan ka nature kuch soft hoga. LOL. Your comment was so SWEET and I REALLy appreciate you taking the time to read my work and comment back so SWEETLY! Keep reading as the FUN continues! Will UPDATE soon!

@ lovebapu18: THANKS for the comment…SHORT AND SWEET! Love you Profile Pic, It's cute…RM look adorable…Will let you know whenever I UPDATE next!

@Love_RM_MAYUR: Oh Thanks Hon! AND I wsih I could turn this into a REAL SHOW! We would have our Mayank and Drahsti back…! I am glad you are enjoying this and I appreciate you taking the time to comment back with your viewpoints. Will update and LET YOU KNOW!

@ cute gauri: Thank YOU! I am GLAD you like this new concept! Will look forward to any suggestions you might have! Have Fun.

@sweetsugar: THANK YOU! THANKOOOOOOOOOOOOO SOOOO MUCH!!! Seriously i am so AWED by your lover and HEARTFELT comment…I am SPEECHLESS….Really it MEANS so much to me, and I am honored to have you as a regular reader…there will be delays in UPDATES but I assure you they will be done…and I hope you continue to ENJOY and make me SMILE ear to ear with your SWEETEST AND MOST AMAZING feedback on this FICTION…and TRUST ME sometimes I really do wanna see my writing being portrayed on screen…if only Mayank Ananad and Drashti would agree…LOL! Thanks Again and I'll let you know when I UPDATE the next PART!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE

COMMENTS!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: imane568

@AshiYuvi4life (KOMAL a.k.a DOST) THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously this fiction is meant to make you ROFL because RM are best suited to do just that. I love everything ABOUT your comment as always. SERIOUSLY you are the REASON behind me writing this fiction because your comments are worth the time and effort I take to write and ENTERTAIN you'Hope EVERYTHING is going GREAT for you'Still waiting on your "Rishta" fiction to be UPDATED! Love ya- Imane



All's well jaan! Well... my semester is almost over thankfully and then off I go to Punjab for one month. Much needed vacation after all that anatomy! I'll update Rishta before leaving. Pakka. You, on the other hand, need to take little behind to the Collections thread and finish reading Suno Sasurjee which u were waiting for me to complete. You're the only one I haven't gotten a reply from on that. And you also need to read Saawariya. I have a feeling you're going to like it. 😉 Cuz of the style it's written in. i'm just typing up the last part to that right now. Love you more!

-Komz

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