Terrorists hold Adhiraj Hostage at Excel!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene The atmosphere around excel is tense. Episode opens with the camera on the Excel college signboard...camera slowly moves over to focus on helmeted figures crouching...guns trained in the direction of the roof...students huddled in clusters...whispering...
Police (over loudspeaker): aatankvadiyon!! dyan se suno...humne tumhein charon taraf se gher liya hai....tumhari balayee isi mein hai ki apne aap ko hamare havale kar do...
Terrorists (over loudspeaker (Dont ask me how the terrorists got a loudspeaker...ask the CVs)
Ha...ha..ha....(wicked laugh)
Dyan se TUM suno! Excel ka principal aur BB coach hamare kabje mein hai! Agar hamari mangein puri nahin hui to donon ko hum shoot kar denge!
Nupur2 Nahinnnnnn!! Gunjan comes forward to hold her...
Gunjan Suhani...tum chinta mat karo...Samrat koi na koi plan banakar Adhiraj ko bacha lega
Samrat (appears from nowhere) Samrat kisko bacha lega Chasmish?
Nupur2 Samrat...Adhiraj ko terrorists ne kabje mein le liya hai...please usey bachalo..
Samrat Smirks....meri kya zaroorat hai...woh toh best player hai na (Gunjan shakes her head in frustration)
Gunjan Samrat, Nupur2 adhiraj se pyar karti hai!
Samrat To ???
Gunjan Agar tumhari behan kisi se pyar karti, to tum uske pyar ko nahin bachate?
Samrat: Kya?? Main samjha nahin
Terrorists voice: Ab tak koi jawab nahin?...shayad tum log believe nahin karte ki adhiraj hamare kabje mein hai....to lo! suno uski awaaz!
Adhiraj's voice (Nishant tries to make his voice tremble with fear and is not very successful at it )...Hi! Adhiraj! Coach! Mujhe bachao..nahin to BB team se bahar ho jaoge!
Police (over loudspeaker) Aatankvadiyon! Hum atankwad ko panapne nahin denge...par phihal hum log tum se baat karne andar aa rahein hain!
Terrorists (over loudspeaker) : Nahin, tum log nahin aaogey...hum log sirf ek aadmi se baat karengey...
Police (over loudspeaker) Kis aadmi se?
Nupur 2 (to the camera) muje apne pyar ko bachane phir ek bar spiderwoman banna hi padega...ab raat nahin hui ..phir bhi muje Spiderwoman banna hi padega!
Terrorists (over loudspeaker): Hum log sirf Sadhu Vijayanand se baat karenge
Police: (in an undertone to one of the students) yeh sadhu Vijayanand kaun hai ?
A student: Woh RV ka naam hai...woh raha RV..(they point to RV in the crowd)
FREEZE
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Promo shows a figue jumpimg on to the excel roof...as usual the figure pauses mid air to stare seductively nto the camera....RV is also shown entering the room where the terrorists are holding Adhiraj hostage...Voiceover: Kya Sadhu RV ki terrorsits se baat hogi? Ya usse pahele Suhani urf Nupur2,,urf Spiderwoman Adhiraj ko bacha legi? Somwar se shukrawar raat 9 baje dekhiye...MJHT sirf Star One par!
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LoveLaughLive thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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you did a good job! nice countinue!
MohitSanayaFan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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this line cracked me up the most 🤣🤣 esp the smirking and shaking head in frustration...


Samrat Smirks....meri kya zaroorat hai...woh toh best player hai na (Gunjan shakes her head in frustration)

Edited by MohitSanayaFan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haha....I like the part where Samrat thinks he(Adhiraj) is too good to play basketball...LMAO....there is a lot of emotional atyachaar going...LMAO
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Did u write this or is this for real 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is amazing
Lol if this happens MJHT would rock 🤣
Very nice written 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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by god lov u lov u lov u
kash yeh sab sach ho jaye
pls continue

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