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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi iam also an ardent fan of bidaai and i wanted to make some thing we have been grieving to see for the past few days. I apologize if i make any mistakes cause this is my first time writing....😊😊😊.
PART-1

The scene starts with ranvir coming back from his usual jog and he is all sweaty and very handsome as usual😊. He sneaks into the room and ragini is ironing ranvir's blazer then ranvir hugs her from behind and tells her how much he loves her and hates to part from her. Ragini blushes😳😳😳 and says ranvir i have work leave me alone but he holds her and tells her " sweetheart iam telling you how much i love you and you just say u have work " how sad!!!! and tells her in his usual romeo style that he is going then ragini runs and hugs ranvir and tells him that she also loves him too much . Then they look into eachother's eyes. Here a servant knocks and says he bought chai . Ranvir tells him to leave and go . Then he tells that he wants to make chai for his beautiful wife.

PART-2
This story starts with alekh getting dressed and sadhana cleaning the room. Then when she is wiping the cupboards she comes across a gift . She turns around to ask alekh but he disappears then she gives a sad glance and when she was about to turn around alekh appears and he pulls her towards him and tells her that he bought it only for her and asks her to open it. when she opens it she finds a ring with two hearts on it . He tells sadhana that these are their hearts beating together forever and ever. sadhana is will so happy with joy that she gets tears . Then alekh hugs her and kisses her on the forehead and tells her that he can't see anymore tears in her eyes. Then he tells the three MAGICAL WORDS every girl wants to hear I LOVE YOU 😊. sadhana blushes and tries to turn away then alekh again pulls her closer and asks her for reply she tells him that she is in love with him too muchhh. Then they hug eachother. Here ragini arrives at the door and knocks calling for sadhana then sadhana tries to run towards the door but alekh reaches first and hides behind the door holding sadhana's hand . sadhana then opens the door ,ragini asks her why it took her so long to open the door then she just tells her that she was busy cleaning and ragini asks her why is not allowing her inside she says nothing jiji you go i will come in a minute then alekh pulls her hand then ragini blushes😳😳😳 and tells her that she is leaving and tells alekh sorry jijaji. Then alekh closes the door and pulls sadhana towards him and says no more disturbances from now on .............


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Posted: 15 years ago
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this is my first time writing so please tell me the drawbacks and plus points of my writing. i was longing to see such scenes atleast in the coming episodes. i would like to dedicate my writing to all the bidaai fans and members of this forum. thanks i need ur support to continue to write my ideas,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya98

Hi iam also an ardent fan of bidaai and i wanted to make some thing we have been grieving to see for the past few days. I apologize if i make any mistakes cause this is my first time writing....😊😊😊.
PART-1

The scene starts with ranvir coming back from his usual jog and he is all sweaty and very handsome as usual😊. He sneaks into the room and ragini is ironing ranvir's blazer then ranvir hugs her from behind and tells her how much he loves her and hates to part from her. Ragini blushes😳😳😳 and says ranvir i have work leave me alone but he holds her and tells her " sweetheart iam telling you how much i love you and you just say u have work " how sad!!!! and tells her in his usual romeo style that he is going then ragini runs and hugs ranvir and tells him that she also loves him too much . Then they look into eachother's eyes. Here a servant knocks and says he bought chai . Ranvir tells him to leave and go . Then he tells that he wants to make chai for his beautiful wife.

PART-2
This story starts with alekh getting dressed and sadhana cleaning the room. Then when she is wiping the cupboards she comes across a gift . She turns around to ask alekh but he disappears then she gives a sad glance and when she was about to turn around alekh appears and he pulls her towards him and tells her that he bought it only for her and asks her to open it. when she opens it she finds a ring with two hearts on it . He tells sadhana that these are their hearts beating together forever and ever. sadhana is will so happy with joy that she gets tears . Then alekh hugs her and kisses her on the forehead and tells her that he can't see anymore tears in her eyes. Then he tells the three MAGICAL WORDS every girl wants to hear I LOVE YOU 😊. sadhana blushes and tries to turn away then alekh again pulls her closer and asks her for reply she tells him that she is in love with him too muchhh. Then they hug eachother. Here ragini arrives at the door and knocks calling for sadhana then sadhana tries to run towards the door but alekh reaches first and hides behind the door holding sadhana's hand . sadhana then opens the door ,ragini asks her why it took her so long to open the door then she just tells her that she was busy cleaning and ragini asks her why is not allowing her inside she says nothing jiji you go i will come in a minute then alekh pulls her hand then ragini blushes😳😳😳 and tells her that she is leaving and tells alekh sorry jijaji. Then alekh closes the door and pulls sadhana towards him and says no more disturbances from now on .............


wow awsome scene ho god hume aisa saalekh scene toh dekhne mila hi nahi u knw i was also thinking tht allu shud gvie her a ring wwowo it is really sooo nice and romantic sceneeeeeeeeeeeee👏😳👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya98

Hi iam also an ardent fan of bidaai and i wanted to make some thing we have been grieving to see for the past few days. I apologize if i make any mistakes cause this is my first time writing....😊😊😊.
PART-1

The scene starts with ranvir coming back from his usual jog and he is all sweaty and very handsome as usual😊. He sneaks into the room and ragini is ironing ranvir's blazer then ranvir hugs her from behind and tells her how much he loves her and hates to part from her. Ragini blushes😳😳😳 and says ranvir i have work leave me alone but he holds her and tells her " sweetheart iam telling you how much i love you and you just say u have work " how sad!!!! and tells her in his usual romeo style that he is going then ragini runs and hugs ranvir and tells him that she also loves him too much . Then they look into eachother's eyes. Here a servant knocks and says he bought chai . Ranvir tells him to leave and go . Then he tells that he wants to make chai for his beautiful wife.

PART-2
This story starts with alekh getting dressed and sadhana cleaning the room. Then when she is wiping the cupboards she comes across a gift . She turns around to ask alekh but he disappears then she gives a sad glance and when she was about to turn around alekh appears and he pulls her towards him and tells her that he bought it only for her and asks her to open it. when she opens it she finds a ring with two hearts on it . He tells sadhana that these are their hearts beating together forever and ever. sadhana is will so happy with joy that she gets tears . Then alekh hugs her and kisses her on the forehead and tells her that he can't see anymore tears in her eyes. Then he tells the three MAGICAL WORDS every girl wants to hear I LOVE YOU 😊. sadhana blushes and tries to turn away then alekh again pulls her closer and asks her for reply she tells him that she is in love with him too muchhh. Then they hug eachother. Here ragini arrives at the door and knocks calling for sadhana then sadhana tries to run towards the door but alekh reaches first and hides behind the door holding sadhana's hand . sadhana then opens the door ,ragini asks her why it took her so long to open the door then she just tells her that she was busy cleaning and ragini asks her why is not allowing her inside she says nothing jiji you go i will come in a minute then alekh pulls her hand then ragini blushes😳😳😳 and tells her that she is leaving and tells alekh sorry jijaji. Then alekh closes the door and pulls sadhana towards him and says no more disturbances from now on .............



Nice story about Alekh and Sadhna. I loved the story. Problem remains, that all this behaviour of Alekh Sahab cant go unnoticed. He will have to pay some price....only then...it will look realy romantic!

But your writing had no problem. You created a very good scenario. I loved the setting =). Carry on my friend!

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