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manalee

@manalee

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#791

amazing update skep 👏 liked the way kranti stood for herself and gave mamiji 😡😡😡a lecture👏👏 ,,one part which we never got to see in real mrd😊 and also the last part

"He – he," laughed the man. "Sometimes it's really very difficult to please your wife."
😳Kranti almost choked.
Raj smiled wickedly and raised an eyebrow. "Wife?😳 The man is out of his mind."😆😆😆
He snaked out his hand and went for Kranti's throat☺️☺️. "I'd like to wring your pretty neck." He was surprised that his hand almost encircled her slim neck. He felt a pulse beating at the base of her throat. He looked at her and slowly removed his hand.
"You are the most hateful man that I have met." She cursed beneath her breath. But her words only drew laughter…….uncaring laughter.😆

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#792

OMG ............ my beautiful dreamers!!!!

All Gone cases 😉

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pennu

@pennu

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#793

Originally posted by: skeptical

OMG ............ my beautiful dreamers!!!!

All Gone cases 😉

Gone cases.....😆

Dreaming and waiting for the next updates

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#794

Awesome part Skep ..........

I honestly thot that after a gap of so many days I would have lost the connection with the story .....

But .....

I didn't take into account who was narrating the story ..... the MASTER story teller herself !!!!

Hats off dear .... beautifully written !!!!!

I was entranced all over again !!!!

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#795

A very good update, weaving all the parts together, which makes it seem as if all the characters are moving together along with the happenings in the story.

I am enjoying particularly the development of Raj and Kranti's relationship (which is kabhi neem neem, kabhie shahad shahad ...) as perceived by Awasthi, an acute and astute observation. Awasthi comes across as a caring and understanding individual, who is surveying the situation with a hawk's eye view, taking into account the changed equations.

Mami is as terrible as ever and there are hardly any other fell words to describe her. Mama is a character caught in a predicament, wish he wasn't so spineless and had actually stood up for his niece. But most of such people, caught in such situations, behave in this fashion, so I would say it's again a realistic character

Now coming to Raj, well, it's all but apparent that he cares for Kranti (in whatever guise it may be) and wants her safety and well being. Though I am sure he enjoys the nokh-jhokhs that always occur between them. And he sure knows how to handle the firebrand. It's mainly because he has started realising Kranti's insecurities and apprehensions, and also that her basic character wouldn't let her do anything derogatory. And that she genuinely cared for people she loved. Like her mama's family, whom she considered to be her own. Becos it gave her a sense of belonging.

Now Kranti. Though she is utterly likeable over here, as well as brave, I am waiting to see more of her here. At least in this area, I can say, 'yeh dil maange more...'

Poet

Edited by poetic - 15 years ago

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#796

Right now there is no competition for Kranti. Her thoughts are trained on the freedom struggle and her family but not Raj. He is at the back of her head somewhere.......even though she always wants him there subconsciuosly.

Wait for the entry of Preet when one more struggle lands on Kudi's lap. This time she will have to fight for her heart, her head and her final happiness. Then I hope you will not say , "yeh dil mange more..." 😉

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pennu

@pennu

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: skeptical
Right now there is no competition for Kranti. Her thoughts are trained on the freedom struggle and her family but not Raj. He is at the back of her head somewhere.......even though she always wants him there subconsciuosly.

Wait for the entry of Preet when one more struggle lands on Kudi's lap. This time she will have to fight for her heart, her head and her final happiness. Then I hope you will not say , "yeh dil mange more..." 😉

Ahaa.... manpreet is going to come.....

Ohhh I am trilled....😛

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#798

Of course Preet will come........the way I see her. Not in a vampish way. Remember Pen you made such a beautiful VM on her? I had downloaded it but its not working anymore. Dyu still have it?

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#799

Yeh dil maange more

Hamari maange puri karo

Arre besharmo, kitne naare lagaoge. 😉

Jitna bhi main deti jaoon utna aapko kam hi lagta hai...........😕

toh main kya karoon? 😡

Mamiji ke shabdo mein dialogue maroo kya? 😆

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LOST SOUL

@chimuli

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: skeptical
Yeh dil maange more

Hamari maange puri karo

Arre besharmo, kitne naare lagaoge. 😉 ........ab to hum pied piper ban jaate hai aapke rat ko bhaga le jaungi...........whooosh!!!!!!

Jitna bhi main deti jaoon utna aapko kam hi lagta hai...........😕

toh main kya karoon? 😡
😆Skep hum toh hai hi aise...aapne hi aadate bigaadi hai...........😆

Mamiji ke shabdo mein dialogue maroo kya? 😆...........😲 *sab kaan band karo*😆

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