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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5

***Scene switches as we see Sagar on the plane with a white girl sitting next to him***

S: [thinks to himself] This trip should be interesting.

***Scene switches back to Vidya***

V: Ungrayzi babu, kash (hopefully) tumhe pata ho ke tum Vidya ke gaown mein ah rahe ho. [she smiles naughtily] (Ungrayzi (English) babu, hopefully you know that you are coming into Vidya's village.)

***Sagar and Sarah have now gotten off at the Delhi airport*** G=girlfriend aka Sarah

G: Omg sagar! Ahhh I'm soo excited for this J I finally get to see your homeland, your culture... *sigh*

Babe thank you sooo much for bringing me here :) [With that remark she pecked him on the lips]

S: You know I wouldn't come here without you :) But still, you're welcome [he smiled] Okay now let's see who's here to pick us up.

***Back to the Village***

Ch: VIdyaaaaa! Jaldi Kar, woh log a ne lagye hai. (Vidya! Hurry up, they're about to come.)

V: [We see Vidya smile mischievously.] A rahi hoon chachi. Aap fikar maat karo, maine saab kuch theek se ready kar diya. (I'm coming chachi and don't worry I've made sure that everything is ready.]

Ch: Chal vidya, woh log a gaye. (We hear a car approaching the house.) [Let's go Vidya, they're here.]

V: [thinks] Time to have some fun :) finally. Welcome ungrayzi babu :)

[We see vidya run out the back door and climb a tree at the side of the house, where Shalu was already hiding.]

Sh: Vidya, tu ne saab kuch thik se to kar diya na? (Vidya, have you done everything you needed to?)

V: Aur nahi to kya? Vidya kabhi kuch galat kar sakti hai? Tu bas dektija Vidya ka kamal :) (Ofcourse. Vidya, never does anything wrong. Now watch, Vidya's magic.)

Sh: Vidya Vidya, woh dek ungrayzi babu... (Shhh Vidya, Look the English man...)

V: [She quickly turns her head in the direction that shalu is pointing out to her.] Kya hai? Uska chara toh dik nahi ra. [We see Sagar in front of the house with his back to vidya.] [She kept moving to see him more clearly.] (What the hell? I can't see his face.)

Sh: Arre Vidya, tu gir jayegi. [Shalu held her arm firmly.] (Urg Vidya, you'll fall.)

S: Yes yes Mr. Sinha, we will come and see the site in the morning. Everything's.... OWW! [We now see him turn to face the house. He is holding the back of his head.]

Mr.Singh: Oh my god, sir? What happened?

[We see Vidya and Shalu sitting in the tree dieing of laughter. We also see a slingshot in Vidya's hand and a rock in Shalu's rock.]

S: I felt something hit my head. A rock or something, perhaps. [He looks around to see where it could've came from.]

[Back in the tree we see Shalu trying to shush Vidya down, while Vidya is still dieing of laughter.]

V: De Shalu, doosra pathar bhi deh deh, usko...woh kya kahate hai?..oh haan bhaste(waste) kyun kare? (Shalu, give me the other rock as well, why should we waste it?)

Sh: Yehle. [Shalu hands her the rock in her hand as they both giggle.] (Here.)


S: So as I was saying Mr.Sinha, Everything's ready right?

Mr. Sinha: Yes Sir. Everything is ready. Come sir, the house is ready for you.

[As Sagar turns around, another rock flings at his forehead.]

S: Owwwwww!

[Now we hear Vidya's laughter more clearly. She is laughing so hard that Sagar look in the direction of the tree. Then as he looks up, his eyes meet Vidya's. Vidya's eyes widen as she sees his gaze. She let's go off the tree and just as she was covering her mouth...]

V: Ahhhhh!!! [Vidya falls out of the tree. Shalu bursts out into laughter. We see Sagar rush to Vidya's side.]

S: Uh are you ok? Tum...theek... toh ho..na? [You see Sagar struggles with Hindi so it takes him a while to translate his English into Hindi.]

Mr. Sinha: Vidya!?! Shalu, niche utroh! Yeh saab kya hai? [Vidya gets up and has a guilty expression on her face. Shalu gets down from the tree and quickly stands next to Vidya. She quietly giggles as Vidya gives her a glare.] Tum dono ko toh main ghar aake bathata hoon. Pehle Sagarji se Sorry bolo! (Vidya!?! Shalu, get down! What is all this? I'll see to both of you at home. First, say Sorry to Sagarji.)

V: Par Chacha! (But Chacha!)

Mr.Sinha: Vidya! [He glares at her now.]

V: Theek hai! Sorry. [She quickly says that while giving Sagar a glare and quickly walks away from there but as she walks past Sagar, she brushes his shoulder. Shalu quickly apologizes politely and quickly runs after Vidya.] (Fine! Sorry.) Pagal ungrayze a jhate hai. [She mutters under breathe.] (Stupid English people come here.)

[Just as Vidya was about to leave the property, she is stopped by Sarah.]

G: How dare you hit my Sagar? Don't mess with him again or else. [She glares at Vidya and holds up her fist.]

V: Ah ha ha ha. Gori! [Vidya now says, as she holds on to Sarah's fist.] Tu nahi janti Vidya ko. Abhi to yeh suruwaat hai. [She glares back at her.] (Ah ha ha ha. Gori! You don't know Vidya. This is only the beginning.)


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Ok guys, this was sooo boring. Honestly it took me soo long to write this :( I think I'm losing my touch at writing. I have a lot more exciting stuff planned for the next few updates so hmm i unno this was like the introduction to Vidya's mischievousness and Sarah & Vidya's battle. Hope it wasn't a pain to read :$

Do leave comments :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Wow! This update was so hilarous! I loved it!
Seriously yaar you haven't lost ur touch.. dun worry I felt that way when i updated after a while but it's marvelous yaar...
It made my day reading it.. I love the battle going on..
Plz do continue soon =]
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
Muhi :$ Thank you hun.
Honestly you're too kind. :$
I honestly felt so meh after writing the update because I re-read it and I was like i should've have written it at all. I feel like it's so badly written but your comment made my smile :$
I'll try to update as soon as I can but for now it's you're turn :) Sooo someone update na? :(
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LMAOO..they r so funny yaar🤣 am so glad u r writing again..loved ur previous FF too....Vidya is too much..i know this is goin to be so intersting now..i want Vidya to torment Sarah😆 do continue soon SV<3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this update made my day, it made me laugh, im serious it waas funny. continue soon please, it was lovely written :))
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omgggggg my hands are like trembling with excitement as i write this. omggtgggg, pleaseee pleaseee pleaseee updateeeeeeee! I CAN'T WAITT. I'M SO FREAKING EXCITED FOR THIS STORY. IT WAS HILARIOUS. I LOVE SAGARR..KASH I COULD HAVE SOMONE LIKE HIM...he just seems so hotttt. anyway...it was justt frickin amazinggggggg! come on, please update now, now, noow! i can;t waitt. pleaseee. omggg. i'm seriously gonna die if you dont update. i need to know what happens i need to see it. please. come on. fjsdlkdjfhfgh.lfghj;lgfjhklfgjjhgj JALDI JALDI JALDII! do you live in the US? if you do i;m coming to whereever you are here, and i'll make you update. UPDATEE NOW!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Wowiiee!! You've updated!! 😃

Well...what do I say...I absolutely loved it!! Vidya's so mischievious....and woah...lookign forward to Vidya and Sarah's war...hehe....please continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaar Ankita...awesome update...just love Vidya's character...when are you going to continue yaar? It's been 2 months.... :(

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