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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
3rd!!!!!! What are you talking about! it is so great and awesome! i luved it! i just read the first and second updates! they are awesome! you are really good at writing! this ff rocks. continue soon! and get rid of sagars wife, she is a thorn between the future sv!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
o0o0oo00o 0o0o THAT WAS AWSUm!!!!!! i love Vidya..shes so cute!!! lolz
and Sagar...ugh i think he likes this sarah gurl too much...hopefully that will change..well anyways update soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
omg...I loveeeeeeeeeedddddd the updtaee..and I hate you for thinking that it is not goodddd...when it is FANTASTIC!!!!! 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Ankita for the detications and the bday wishes dear, love you loads and loved the UPD was totally cute...cant wait for their first MEET
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys thanks soo much for your awesome comments. I know the last update was extremely crappy (part 2) but I hope you like this update =) Thanks for reading =)

Part 3

Recap: Sagar has to go to India without Sarah, Vidya doesn't get in too much trouble from her dad but that doesn't mean chachi leaves her alone.


V: Bhauji main zara kuch kar ke aai [She turns around quickly] (Bauji I'm going to go do some work now)

Ch: Aah ha ha ha. Itni jaldi nahi Vidya. Tume kya laga? Ke bhauji ne kuch nai kaha toh mein be? [She puts an evil smile on her face.] (Ha ha, what did you think Vidya? That just because your bhauji didn't say anything I won't either?)

V: [She quickly turns around surprised] Kya?

Ch: Haan Vidya. Kal mere "unke" office ke baade saab ah rahe hai London se. Tume yahan par unke a ne se pahaley sara kuch thik karna pareh ga. Unke liyeh, yahan pe unke ghar ko saaf kar na hoga, unke kaney ka intazaam kar na hoga, lekin saab kuch unke ah ne se pehle. Kyun ki, baad mein tum unke pas bhi nahi jaogi, kya pata tum kya karogi. (ya Vidya. Tomorrow my husband's boss is coming from London. You have to do all the arrangements before he comes. You have to, clean his house, get the food ready, but all this has to be done before he comes, because when he does, you cannot go near him. Cuz I don't trust you. Who knows what you might do.)

V: Par chachi. (But Chachi)

Ch: Kyoi par vaar nahi. Tum unse door rahogi, bus. (No buts. You are going to stay away from him, that's it.)

[On that note, Chachi leaves and we see Vidya with a naughty smile on her face.]

V: Ab dekti hoon, keh ye chachi ki bachi kaise mujhe us ungrayzi babu door rakti hai. [She smirks.] (Now, I'll see how that chachi, will keep me away from this ungrayzi (English) babu.)

***scene switches over to Sagar***

[We see him on the phone with someone.]

S: But baby, dad said I have to go tomorrow. [He holds the phone a little away from his ear, cuz the person on the other end is yelling really loudly.]

S: Oh come on baby, I'll try to do something and somehow get you to come with me.

[We can hear the person on the other end of the phone.]

Voice: SAGAR,I DONT WANT TO HEAR ANYTHING, YOU BETTER TAKE ME WITH YOU OR ELSE WE'RE OVER!

S: Sarah? Honey? [He looks at his phone and see's that the call has ended.]

S: Sagar, you're dead meat. You better figure out something or else, you're going to be in a hell lot of trouble.


[He decides to call his friend Chinu.]

Ch: Hello?

S: Chinu. My house asap!

CH: Ok? I'm coming.

[Within about 10 minutes Chinu reaches Sagar's place.]

[He heads up to sagar's room]

CH: What's wrong Sagar?

S: Chinu. Oh good, you're here. [He explains the whole situation to Chinu]

[Chinu bursts out laughing.]

S: Chinu this is not funny. I need your help man.

CH: Sagar, I remember when you first started dating Sarah, your said she was just a time pass. What happened now?

S: Well yaar, I think she might be the one, so I need your help.

[Chinu tells Sagar something, we cannot hear anythiing because everything is in mute. While listening to it, Sagar's face lights up.]

[Next we see sagar on the phone with Chinu beside him.]

S: Dad, I'm ready to go to India. But I'm taking Sarah with me. You said she didn't know anything about our culture so I think this is the best time for her to learn thus I'm taking her with me. [He smiles as he hears his dad sigh and say...]

SD: Ok fine.

S: Thanks dad. I love you.

***Scene switches as we see Sagar on the plane with a white girl sitting next to him***

S: [thinks to himself] This trip should be interesting.

***Scene switches back to Vidya***

V: Ungrayzi babu, kash (hopefully) tumhe pata ho ke tum Vidya ke gaown mein ah rahe ho. [she smiles naughtily] (Ungrayzi (English) babu, hopefully you know that you are coming into Vidya's village.)

By the way, here's the link to my 1st FF:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=946179

Edited by Ankuu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
thx for updating. wow such an awesome update.. wonder what is vidz plan?? hehe.. he is bringing sarah.. good luck sagar 😉

Edited by shobbybee - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27

Amazing update...I really loved it. It was such a awesome, great update !! Keep it up with your wonderful work. You deserve all the great comments because you are doing a awesome, fantastic job.

I really love the storyline...Can't wait for the next update..Please continue soon when you have some time.
Take care and keep smiling
With love
Reena
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
shobbybee - aww thanks for your comment shobby, ur awesome =) and ya sagar needs the good luck.

Sonali di - thanks di =)

Reena - aww thanks soo much hun =) ur comment means a lot to me =) ur soo sweet, keep smiling and thanks for reading =)

Edited by anki4life - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
wow!! they're gnna meet!! i cant wate!! uhks i dont like sarah one bit!! loved it ankita update soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
Omg... so interesting!
Yaar Vidya tum to kamal ki ho! Itni Naughtiness... Hai hai!
Sagar and Vidya makes a perfect couple!
I hope the "white girlfriend"doesn't like this culture and failures the whole time. And she gets angry and starts yelling and Sagar slaps her! Muahahahaha! I hate that girl... Why can't she let Sagar go with his family? If she loves him she should trust him but I think she is only after his money...
Cont soon!
Love, Charri<3

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