'Chori-Chori' (AK,SK,AR,KA,MP)..Pt 29/pg134,Jan13 - Page 49

Originally posted by: kripa12345

Oh my god is Arman going to cenfess finaly?

i cant wait.

and kripa she should have come, she is just too stuborn as allways😡

poor angad 😭

cont soon

can u send the suggestions for ur new ff pls 😛

Thanks kripa! 😊
do u think Armaan will confess so easily? Hes quite clueless, he needs a bigger push! 😆
Kripa's painful past has made her tough and resistant!
I will post new FF plotlines soon!

QUOTE=spvd] wow very nice part.....................i loved sujal n kashish's roka scene.................n sujal has a very sharp n super memory...............he remembers the date, time, day n place..................n kashish is very exact with the time......................i loved that very much n sujal's reply abt the time being stopped after seeing her was nice...............n really this time he didnt make mistakes n i really hope he gets to know abt kumud's real intentions sooner....................<br>feel very sorry for angad..................n kripa too has some feelings but shes afraid abt rejection n also her criminal work..............cant she just give up?????????hope dadi will make her understand n clear her confusions soon..........but glad to know she knows abt prithvi n his jealousies...............<br>kavya is gonna taste his own medicine soon.............anjali might dump him but seeing anjali's reaction to his touch is making me to wonder whether she will manage or not......................<br>milind is working till 1 in the morning n also his female assitants..........for the first time prachi questioned him.................i really wonder what milind is up to??????????makes me feel like hes cheating on prachi................<br>jealous armaan is on his mission to protect ridz from the nri according to him................but ridz should have patience to get armaan's love as armaan is an empty headed person who needs more shocks n surprises to realise his feelings for ridz..................<br>cont soon dear...............<br>

Thanks Deepa!
Sujal didnt give away much info to Kumud but enuf to make Sasha change his MO, it will be a game henceforth between the 2, a game of wits, of Chor Police.
Kripa has her own issues abt men, she cant trust anyone!
Kavya and Anjali both trying to seduce each other. Lets see who wins... 😆
Is Milind unfaithful or workaholic?
Armaan needs a bigger shock before he realizes his feelings.

pallavi

Originally posted by: AKForever

hey pallavi another great part... continue soon..

Thanks Dear! Im glad u liked it! 😊

Originally posted by: ShelDev

hey Pallavi;

great roka scene.....Kashish must have looked beautiful.....Kumud is pretty clever getting all that info from Sujal.....he better be careful......

Awww....my poor Angad baby......Kripa's deewana is totally in love....I feel so bad for him....waiting for her & she didn't even show up.....pls come Kripa......soon.......our hero is waiting.......😆😳.......

There is definitely something going on with Milind.....he sounds very fishy.....a meeting at 1:00 in the morning & his assistant with him...doesn't sound too good....Prachi dear better do something soon.....teach him a lesson....he is taking advantage of her......Poor Prachi being embarrased by her husband.....😭....

Ridz "dil ki dhadkan" is pretty loud...haila Armaan took her in the room....obivously he is not going to tell her what she wants to hear...I am sure he is going to 'advice" her to be careful about the other guy.....idiot....he is too confused right now to say anything about his feelings.....

Pls continue soon.........eagerly awaiting next update......

Thanks Shel! 😳
Kripa has trust issues and also reluctant becuz shes a thief by profession.
Milind is a bad husband, is he a cheater too? We will find out soon...
Armaan is one of those guys who need a lot of pushing before they admit their feelings even to themselves. Hes quite immature... 😆

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

<FONT color=#9900cc>hey di awesome and wonderful part

finally u continued after such a long time

poor angad he is so heartbroken and poor kripa she don't want to break his or her heart i think that's y she didn't go pleaseeeeee bring them together

i hope armaan realize his feelings soon

kavya and anjali r cute together

i hope prachi soon find out if miling having an affair

finally sujal and kashish r together

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon di

love ya

mittal

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Thanks sweetie!
Will Angad give up the chase so easily?
SK will get engaged soon.... 😃
Prachi needs a friend like Neev to cheer her up....
Armaan's screws need tightening... 😆

Originally posted by: -simi-

very nice part di! kumud is one smart girl, getting all the info from Sujal aahahah.. sasha ke smart mind ka kuch to asar hoga 😉 sujal ko ek gaana dedicate karna chahiye 'bachke rehena re baba' 🤣

poor prachi her hubby keeps putting her hopes down! she's going to need a bigger push in her 'bhartiya naari-ness' [LOL}... cant wait till u bring neev in the pic again 😛 and what exactly is milind hiding? im so curious!😔

awee felt so bad forangad, heis in love for the first time, and he gotrejected by her 😔

atleast kripaknows in her heart that heisnt spying on her...maybe her family had a bad history?probably herdad?thats why she has come to have trust issues with men? 😕 but im sure Angad will bring out the Kripa hidden deep down behind Tanya's face 😃

Kavya is already making plans for taking Anjali to his appartment? 🤣 Even Anjali feels a spark, but she must not detour from her original plan 👍🏼

cant wait to read the rest of AR scene! Ridz wont hear what she wants to hear, but atleast it'll be close 😛

cont soon 😃

and happy dussera to you too 😃

Thanks simi! Hope u enjoyed Dussehra and Diwali! Sorry for being away from IF so long, had a lot of family stuff going on but now things have settled down again!
Kumud and Sasha are both clever devils. But Sujal is a sharp one, he will figure out a way to catch them!
Prachi needs Neev to cheer her up and realize her own dreams instead of hankering after her callous husband!
Kripa's past wounds have made her that way! A thief, a reckless girl, uncaring and callous! Will Angad's love mend her wounds, reform her? 😳
KA both trying to seduce each other.....lets see who wins... 😆

Originally posted by: monikaseth

<font color="#9900cc"><font color="#003300">Hi pallavi awesome part with lots of drama and pain also .<br><br></font>

<font color="#003300">Oh nooo angad is broke down bec of kripa and poor kripa she what to go but at the same time she don't want to
break his heart bec she is afraid if he know who is she is he is going to hate her ,,,, oh noooo please angad find out what is the problem.<br></font>

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<font color="#003300">So armaan realize his feelings & going to confess wowwoow.<br></font>

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<font color="#003300">kavya and anjali going to make each other hahahahah both are ready to ..<br></font>

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<font color="#003300">Sujal and kashish come together that's nice , poor prachi hope she find out about milind having affair ..<br><br>Thank You so much for pm pallavi and this part ... i wish angad soon took kripa with him some where and keep her with him till she did not tell him all her problem.</font><br></font>

Thanks monu! 😃
Angad is very depressed abt Kripa's rejection but will he give up teh chase?
Ur right abt Kripa, she wont allow herself to fall in love.
Armaan doesnt realize yet what he feels for Ridz is not just caring friendship but love!
U mean Angad carry off Kripa and make her confess? No he wont do that but he will do something else.... 😆

Originally posted by: togepe30

lovely part

Cant wait for S-K to get married...

Hate kumud beyond words

Thanks Dear! SK getting engaged soon.... 😃
Will Kumud get caught?

Originally posted by: apra

Hey i just caught up with your fic though i have been a regular reader of all he fics you have written till date but i never commented,

i love the concept and i am glad you are individually focusing on all the couples keep it going and now onwards i will comment regularly.

Thanks apra! 😃
Yes, I am trying to keep a balance between all couples! Im grateful for ur comment, please keep on posting ur views! 😳

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

great part

feel bad for angad..the poor guy was left waitin

Thanks meghasharma! Yes, poor Angad, disappointed in his first love! 😭

Originally posted by: love_KYPH

AWESUM UPDATE DI!!!!!!!!!
m happy 4 SK....
feel soory 4 angad 😭
hope armaan confesses....
cont soon...

Thanks nikita!
SK love problems are sorted out and they will get married soon!
Armaan needs a stronger dose before he realizes her feelings.

hey pallavi..no prob huh..

Originally posted by: srihari_phoenix

heyyy.....<br>
amazing part...<br>
beautifully written....<br>
awwwww....i feel sorry 4 angad...<br>
hope kripa finds out pridhvi's plan sooon....<br>
glad SK r getting married sooon...<br>
looks like armaan want to talk abt jeet...lolz...<br>
plzz continue soooon.....<br>thnxx...<br>

Thanks srihari! 😃 I Appreciate ur compliments! 😃
Kripa knows Prithvi is lying. But she cant risk falling in love.
Armaan has some advice for Ridz... 😆

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

haila! part was brilliant!!

please do continue soon!

Thanks, Hun! Im glad u enjoyed it! 😃

Originally posted by: akrock

lovely update!!!
kripa didn't cum 😭
feel sorry 4 angad 😭
wonder wat happened in kripa's past....
continue soon...

Thanks akrock! 😊
Kripa's past will be revealed gradually....then Angad will understand her attitude.

Originally posted by: UzMa15

hey pallavi! great ff!

its great to red ff once again with all my fav actors in especiallu ammy ridz and kripa and angad :)

plz pm me when u do update :)

Thanks Uzma! 😊
Yes, I added u to my pm list!

Originally posted by: NYPunjabii

Hey Api

Yes, I had a great EID. How was your festivals? Must have been busy.

Great Part

Kali is annoying me, pestering Sujal about case. I hope Kali being Kashish's sister doesnt create problems for the couple when Sujal figures out the mystery.

Angad bechara akela reh gaya. Taras ay gaya uspe. Kripa has some secret?

Millind is cheating on Prachi? Twice he was with a woman.

Armaan ko laktha akal aahri ha

Continuee Sooooon

Jannat

Thanks Jannat! 😳
I was busy with festivals and family activities so could not update!
Ur right abt Kumud, shes the spy in SK life.
Kripa has a terrible secret in her past...
Prachi needs Neev's friendship now! Armaan ko thoda sa akal aaya, ab poora batti jalnaa baaki hai!

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Hey pallavi..nice part..

SK's Roka went pretty well..the bonding b/w the families are nice..but only Milind was missing as usual!..the way Kali teased Sujal was funny n cute!..he was really getting grilled..! ..lol..n Kumud got info outta him!..hmm she'll report it to Sasha now..but Sujal better not reveal too much!

Angad waited so much..bt she did'nt turn up!..his 1st rejection i think?..thats sad..but then Kripa was right..she cant get caught!..its all too dangerous..!..but den she does love him!..the song truly expressed his feelings..

Kavya;s no was good too..n even the KA dance..!..romantic!..but then Anjali shudnt fall 4 him!..she has to complete her mission ryt?..n he thot tat she's dating Angad?..lol...now he's happy i guess..

Milind is really rude..i really think he's having an affair.poor Prachi!..she must be so hurt...n he's like neva der 4 her!

Armaan was worried and concerned?!..abt Jeet n Ridz i think?..lol..Muskaan did a good job!..i hope Armaan has realized his feelings...n wt was he gonna do nw?

update soon

-Aish

Thanks aish! 😳
Angad is in love for first time so her rejection hurt even more!
Lets hope Anjali doesnt succumb to Kavya's charms and remembers her mission... 😉
Armaan doesnt want her to marry Jeet, hes giving her all kinds of reason why she shd not.... 😆

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12

im waitin for ur new ff...have u posted it yet??<br>awww poor prachi she always gets dissapointed:(<br>kali bhi kumud ke saath mili hui hai???<br>hahaha love kaliz interviewing:P<br>awww sujal even remembers the time thts true loveee <3<br>damnn sujal is gonna tell her everything....hez very smart agar wo iss waqt roke ki khushi mein khoya nahi hota then maybe he wudve suspected her but rite now hes too lost in his own world :(<br>kumud is too cunning :O<br>sujal shoo romanticcc :$:$<br>awww roka hogaya :) do they still need to get engaged???<br>aur agar shaadi ek mahine baad honi hai to roka karne ki kya zaroorat lol<br>im waiting for them to be married then it wud be more interesting :D<br>kripa wont turn up pooor angad:(<br>i guess kripas heart knows angad really loves her but her mind wont listen....<br>n shes the type that wud follow her brain more:P<br>hope angad changes tht soon ;)<br>hahaha manager ko bara experience hai paise ctch karne ka:P:P<br>awww angads song <3<br>pooor kripa i understand what shes going through :(<br>love makes the strongest ppl weak :(<br>reveal her past soon:(<br>is anjali gonna seduce kavya:P:P<br>u knowi read somewhere that when a man is a player...only another player can fix him most of the time :P<br>i can imagine kavya singing in his sweet voice :P<br>does simone have a big role in this???<br>i wanna hear kavya n anjali sing together nw :P<br>u made a typo...instead of anjali u wrote kritika...whoz kritika??:P<br>awww he called her angel :))<br>i could picture this whole dance....<br>they were never that romantic in the show :(<br>awww kavya falling for her :P and shes falling for him too without realizing<br>n hes even started changing coz of herrr<br>hahaha kavya jealous of angad now ehh :P<br>some players r so dangerous n kavya is one of them :S he cud do anything to get his goal<br>what does he want from anjali???<br>i think he wants to just play with her heart but really hes having genuine feleings without realizing<br>is milind having an affair with that girl :O<br>usually our gut feeling is always right :)<br>awww humara armaan badal gaya hai :P<br>i wonder what armaan is gonna say<br>u know ive stopped watching dmg its so boring now with all the new characters i miss armaan n ridz so much :(<br>n i saw wake up sid ranbir looks awesome as usual :)<br>anywayz cont soon!!!<br>

Thanks Hinnu! 😳
No, I didnt post promos for new FFs yet, as I said a lot was going on at home and work so I couldnt concentrate on writing but now hopefully I can resume writing regularly!

Ur right abt players, Kavya needs a tough smart cookie like Anjali to bring him on right path!
Kali helps the gang unknowingly, but Kumud has full knowledge of the gang. Kali just helps Yudi out, she has no idea abt the robberies.
sujal has no reason to suspect his saali, how would he know shes the Gf of the leader of robbery gang? he just thought she was curious abt the case...
Roka, then sagai, then shadi ....Padma and Professor both want to follow all traditions by the book.
Ur right abt AK, Angad dil ki suntaa hai, Kripa dil per aitbaar nahin...
simone is just a co-singer, maybe she will have a role later on...
by kritika I meant Karishma, sorry for typo, thats Anjus friend whos in the hospital,. who tried to kill herself becuz of Kavya's rejection.
so no more AR in DMG? Tough luck for AR fans but at least u enjoyed them for 2 yrs or more.
U lucky gal! I want to see Wake up Sid so badly! 😃 It got great reviews, Im a big fan of Konkona!

pallavi

Originally posted by: Smilesx3

grt part.......wen u postin ur new ff ?

xo*kiran*xo

Thanks, Kiran! I will start new FF in November. 😃

Originally posted by: love_KYPH

its ok di...
hav a gr8 time...
wil b waitin 4 u n d new fic...

Thanks Dear!
I will post promos soon for new FF. 😊

QUOTE=monikaseth] Have a nice Holiday Pallavi .. Wish You And All Family Happy Diwali ...<br><br>Take Your Time and enjoy with family ...<br><br>bye monu <br>

Thanks monu! I had a wonderful vacation! Hope u had a superb Diwali as well. 😃

Originally posted by: spvd

ok dear..............have a nice time n come back with full force.................now since u have promised i cant wait for that day................<br><br>pm me the new story too............n i think i have to make myself very strong for it................<br><br>Advance Happy Diwali to u too n ur family.................<br>

Thank u, Deepa! 😃
I had a great vacation! Short but sweet! I will start Halloween special story on 29th. I will post promos next week, probably Wednesday. Hope u had a wonderful Diwali! 😳