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Posted: 16 years ago
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Caught in a web of lies, deceits, implications,
Burning in a fire they themselves created.

Overcome with tears of their own creation,
In the middle of madness that they are responsible for.

One is in a marriage and doesn't even know why,
The other is a silent bystander, though this was his plan all along.

One has married the girl he has a soft corner for and is not even totally aware,
The other is falling hard and fast for the lady who is his perfect match.

They will have to suffer their share of pain,
They will have to live in a darkness of their own.

They will have to pay for their crimes,
They will have to fight their own demons.


But like it has always been the case,
You can see light at the end of the tunnel.

This will go away, and there will be good days again,
That's how life is, that's how times have always been.

***


Where They = Pri and Sam today..

P.S: I am aware my optimism might be getting on some people's nerves 😛😆, but what do I do!! Can't help being me..😳

Just did this on impulse..






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Posted: 16 years ago
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There is no way I can stress on how much I love your posts! You are one talented being! Loved it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved ur post Sarah... but yeah too much of optimism yaar.. it did get on my nerves a little bit... but its the effect of Pri on me.. just like Pri took out his anger on the drunken stranger... Me letting out my disappointment here... but seriously very nice post... I think it helps to be optimist ...its good it gives hope... lets hope creatives get out of this rough patch and give us some nice plot to look forward to... and sorry for ruining your post
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sarah ... I don't know what to say to that! Seriously .. this is BEAUTIFUL! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
And the last bit .. about Prithvi-Sameer being in pain ... will just repeat what you had mentioned in one of my posts .. that, Pain is Beautiful 😊 Both brothers .. actually, will come out better individuals from this whole whirlwind tour they're in!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Who-I-Used-2-Be

Caught in a web of lies, deceits, implications,
Burning in a fire they themselves created.

Overcome with tears of their own creation,
In the middle of madness that they are responsible for.

One is in a marriage and doesn't even know why,
The other is a silent bystander, though this was his plan all along.

One has married the girl he has a soft corner for and is not even totally aware,
The other is falling hard and fast for the lady who is his perfect match.

They will have to suffer their share of pain,
They will have to live in a darkness of their own.

They will have to pay for their crimes,
They will have to fight their own demons.


But like it has always been the case,
You can see light at the end of the tunnel.

This will go away, and there will be good days again,
That's how life is, that's how times have always been.


***


Where They = Pri and Sam today..

P.S: I am aware my optimism might be getting on some people's nerves 😛😆, but what do I do!! Can't help being me..😳

Just did this on impulse..






and it starts day one ..doesn't it..
the minute the toddler falls down he starts to get up and walk again..
and amazingly your post really drives home the fact...
without the light ..there is no end to our plight..
every fall that gets you down..
the joy of risng up is the ultimate crown..
Sarahkins..*Muah*..I love that optimism...arrey yaar real life is too dark anyway
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Urvi..Thanks a lot, babe..Thank you..

@ Tina..Thank you..Awww..Pri and my optimism are getting on your nerves? Know who is getting on my nerves? Not exactly getting on my nerves but both Pri and Da irriated me equally today, and I think they are both to blame..But then I got over my irritation and this just came out of the blue..And it's OK, babe..I understand where you are coming from..

@ Eksy..Thanks a lot, friend..Thanks..🤗 Eh eh..'Yeah, pain is beautiful'..I was reminded of that too while writing this..*smiles*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sorry Sarah its not u who is geeting on my nerves soorrryyy for being so rude... I am not myself today pls forgive me... I 'am tend to behave like a fooll sometimes so sorry once again dear...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's OK, Tina, really..I understand..

Originally posted by: current


and it starts day one ..doesn't it..
the minute the toddler falls down he starts to get up and walk again..
and amazingly your post really drives home the fact...
without the light ..there is no end to our plight..
every fall that gets you down..
the joy of risng up is the ultimate crown..
Sarahkins..*Muah*..I love that optimism...arrey yaar real life is too dark anyway

Awww..Thanks, Zain..🤗 And well said @ above..

Edited by Who-I-Used-2-Be - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was cute and nice to read...and some things were just sooo true....especially the marriage and the innocent bystander stuff...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWESOME poem...........................U GOT TALENT GIRL..................i was a bit dissapointed after the prida scene 2day.......................but after reading all these optimistic posts....................i m gonna watch 2morwws epi with no hard feelings................thanks for changing my mood.............AGREE WITH UR POEM...................WORD BY WORD

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