Mayur one shot—The Tragic Dream

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

tumne toh pehle dara hi diya.....mayu ka death!!!!!..........yeh toh main doooooooor dooooooooor tak bhi nahi soch sakti..........thnxx god it ws a 'tragic dream'........nywz nice one shot dear....😃

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talkativetaurus

@talkativetaurus

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

nice part ... though ur title says its a dream... i felt it ws for real .. nice work!

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Priya

@little_dragon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hey anshika... so sweet.

mei toh ek minute ke liye darr hi gayithi..

ophs.. he is alive.... mere jaan per jaaan aagayi...

parr yaar.. romance aana hi tha aur tumne stop kardiya....

neways was too cute and thanks for the PM

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

it was realy nice anshika...kp it up huny!!!! 🤗
luv mayur always !!! luv mjht... 🤗

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preksha07

@preksha07

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur
to be frank reading first few few lines,i never wanted to continue reading,but with some small hope i read it fully...really i was out with great breath,it was nupz dream....oh god really it was tragic dream yaar....very good...i was happy that u haven't ended it sadly...u made me happy...finaly mayur were too cute as alwaz...too good....

hey bhagwan....yeh dream kabhi sach na ho........awesome update..........keep it up......

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437810

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

thanx a tonn guyz...
well...even i think that ma 1st OS was better than this one...
and even i never want this dream to get true...
after all, twas a tragic "dream"...

with love,
anshika