Mayur one shot—The Tragic Dream

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Heya guys…this is my second attempt at writing a one shot…actually m not very good at portraying emotions but here I have tried my best…hope u all like it…


Mayur one shot—The Tragic Dream


"Mayank", shouted she, as she ran inside the home with tears running down her cheeks, "Mayank, kaha ho tum?"

She was just walking when she, all of a sudden, stood straight, emotionless. She saw a body lying down covered with a white cloth.

She walked to the body and sat down on her knees; removed the cloth from the face and then, tears started flowing out of her red eyes again and she said, "yeh nahi ho sakta Mayank. Tum nahi jaa sakte mujhe chodke, nahi jaa sakte."

Yes, it was Mayank's dead body, his one and only love;s dead body, his 'husband's' dead body, lying over there.

She wiped her tears off and stood. "Ma, aap kaha hain, aunty", she called mayank's mom who was her mom also- shilpa.

A figure came out of a room, with the eyes red, face all covered with deep sadness, and tears not wanting to stop, "Nupur, ye kya ho gaya?"

"Nahi ma, kuch nahi hua hai. Ye sab jhoot hai na ma, Mayank aur aap mere saath mazak kar rahi hain, ye jhooth hai na ma?" she broke as she said the last words.

She hugged Shilpa, Mayank's mom.

She was crying, unable to control her, but, stopped when she felt a strange silence in Shilpa. She came out of the hug to see another death—Shilpa's death.

She shook the body, but, she failed, she had to believe in the truth; she broke into tears. She sat down, crying.

She suddenly got up and sat on the bed and saw Mayank sitting in front of her, tensed, and with questioning eyes. He was trying to wake her up.

She hugged him tightly, unable to control her emotions, tightly so that he would never leave her alone, and cried to lighten her heart.

"Nupur, tumne koi bahut bura sapna dekha hai. Chup ho jao. Dekho, mein tumhare saath hu."

"Mayank, tum promise karo ki mujhr kabhi chod ke nahi jaaoge."

"Nupur, ye tum kaisi baatein kar rahi ho?"

"Mayank, mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai, tum mujhe chod kar mat jaana Mayank, please."

"Nahi jaunga nupur, kabhi nahi jaaunga."

She got out of the hug. He wiped her tears and to lighten the atmosphere, he said, "Waise agar tum kisi ko pakad leti ho to use jaane kaha deti ho? Dekha tha na abhi itni tight se pakda tha ki aisa lag raha tha jaise kabhi chodogi hi nahi!"

"Mayank, you na, I won't leave you!"

"Before that...I won't leave you", he said, coming closer to her.

"Mayank, hato, tayiyaar ho aur jao office."

"But darling, you only wanted me to not leave you, right?" ,he said those words and before she could reply he went closer to her and she started blushing...

Aagey ka mere dimaag mein nahi aa raha hai to khud hi imagin kar lena!

Sorry for the mistakes...

Pls use the 'like' tab if u liked it...

Comments are appreciated...

Criticisms are also welcomed...

With love,

Anshika

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Posted: 15 years ago
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pls comment guys..is der no 1 online?😔...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice one dear
Thank God it was just a dream
And yeah I am the first one to comment
So cheers
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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to be frank reading first few few lines,i never wanted to continue reading,but with some small hope i read it fully...really i was out with great breath,it was nupz dream....oh god really it was tragic dream yaar....very good...i was happy that u haven't ended it sadly...u made me happy...finaly mayur were too cute as alwaz...too good....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx guys...and i see that u all were very relieved seeing that it was just a dream!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one yaar
one the dream was realyyyyyyyyyyyyyy bad😔
do continue it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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anshika so sweet update yar keep it u p
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one yaar continue writing one shots u r really good at creative writing

n the end was soo good
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really nice one shot!! love it.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi dear
the first 1 was too much good, fantastic and fabulous and mind blowing.
and the 2nd was good also, but not as much as 1st one.
Anyways this 1 is not bad at all.
Keep updating .
Thanx 4 ur PM.
Faria


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