Premeer Oneshot:Snacking Delight Part One & Sequel

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'd like to thank all those who commented and pressed the like button for my previous version of this one-shot:

isha1227 noor arshad

rafna premeer928

Premeer_chahat cute_bear

karoni blackdaughter

curledup Parth Garewal

Momana sweet_gurl93

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-fsn- desichica

-pooji- Shruti11


Thanx alot guys....................😃

N sorry if I 4got to mention any1....................

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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was really good
update soooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nyc shot............u din't PM me.........can u plz rite sum on MEET as well??
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i always lve ur 1 shot so plsssssssssss post it sequel plsssssssss
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys......

Finally managed to finish writing up the sequel, so here it is, hope you like it................

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Sequel- Final part


Ever since she started having scandalous dreams about Prem, she has been unable to take her eyes off him. She was infatuated with him. She sat and watched him while he talked and laughed. She simply watched him while he did everything. She tried to ignore him, oh she really did, but that only made her want him more.


Hai Rab, she thought .........he was oh so dashing with his shaggy hair and his sparkling chocolate brown eyes. The way his arm muscles flexed when he was lifting something heavy made her want him to lift her instead. She loved the sexy come hither smile on his face whenever he saw her. It showed the playful and mischievous side of him; a side that nearly every girl in India would love to experience; a side that makes her go fida over him.


Then there was his voice that could simply seduce a girl. Oh my Rab.....it was deep and throaty, just the way Heer liked it. His laugh was deep and rich. Just like chocolate, it filled her senses and possessed her. His voice made her want to sin.


His eyes, uff yeh ankhein mujhe mar hi denge, she dwelled. Prem's soul reflected in his eyes. When he was angry his eyes would turn to a dark shade of brown. If he was sad then his eyes were pale in colour and lost their sparkle. When he was happy they were bright, sparkly and big. But Heer yearned to see what his eyes looked like when he desired something. She wanted to see his eyes darkened and alive with passion. But then she reminded that she had seen his eyes in that way, but only in her oh so wild dreams.


His body was hard and tanned from being out in the sun a lot. He had broad shoulders and a wide chest that any girl would love to lean her head against. His arms were strong and muscled and Heer very much wanted to be held by those very arms.


At the moment Heer was in the kitchen carrying out her favourite hobby: Prem watching. She watched as his strong white teeth bit into the top of his strawberry which he chewed very seductively and swallowed. She noticed that he closed his eyes as he swallowed as if he was enjoying the strawberry way too much.


She swallowed hard, afraid to blink in case she missed any of his actions. Her behind was glued to the seat as she watched him pick up another strawberry. He didn't seem to know that she was watching him; he was too busy having a conversation with Harman. This time he dipped the strawberry in cream and proceeded to lick of the cream that had gotten onto his upper lip. She watched as he stuck his tongue out and licked the cream off. She wondered how it would be to lick the cream off his soft lip, but she kept her fantasy to herself.


He took another bite of the Strawberry but this time some juice dribbled on his chin. He paid no mind to it as Harman had said something that he seemed to have found funny. She watched as the red juice made its way down the column of his throat and she ached to wipe it off his skin.


He wiped the juice off as it reached the opening of his shirt, which had the top three buttons undone showing of his gorgeous chest. She sucked in a breath, he heard the noise and looked up at her inquiringly. She said nothing just sat there and looked at his red lips, which were covered in strawberry juice. She wanted to reach over the table and kiss off all the juice on his lips.


She shook her head and looked down, until she felt someone's eyes on her. She looked up to find that his eyes were on her face and he was no longer paying attention to Harman. He held her gaze as he picked up another strawberry and brought it to his mouth while she tried not to moan.


He popped the strawberry into his mouth and chewed slowly, while keeping his eyes open and focused on her. Suddenly Heer looked around him; they were all alone. Without a word she leaned over and braced her hands on the table her eyes focused on his lips.


Huskily she said, "You have something on your lips."


And unable to contain herself she licked the strawberry juice off his lip. As she licked the juice off, he brought his hand to her head and ran his fingers through her silky hair. She moaned and this time his mouth came crashing down onto hers. They kissed heatedly and passionately. His mouth was open and he ran his tongue across her bottom lip, subtly demanding entrance. She opened her mouth and let him in. His tongue like him was hot and devastating and their tongues danced with each other until breathing became a chore.


They broke apart and breathed heavily.


"Woh.......woh........You had strawberry juice on your lip......It's been driving me crazy. Please do not eat strawberries when you're near me, otherwise that's the response you get from me'" She trailed off.


He smiled naughtily and picked up another strawberry and bit into it. After he had swallowed he looked at her and saw that her almond shaped eyes were smouldering.


"I like you," she whispered. "I have for a long time'I just didn't realise it."


"I know," He replied


"Do you?" She questioned as she pulled his head towards her.

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What do you guys think? Plz, plz, plz comment and press the like button........😃

Edited by *Shifali* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine

and you think that, that is the last part???

ok seriosuly yowzaa I was like heated update
really good!!!
great!
-speechless-

it was really good
will he say yes??
hmmm
thinking

-aashifa-
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Posted: 16 years ago
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my spot!!!

OMG REALY nice👏👏
and hot😳😆
Edited by noor arshad - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice and that was the last part 😭
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg my freakin god...that was amazing!!!!

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