Premeer One Shot 'Chocolates'

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sonia

@cute_bear

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hey

very different one shot

loved it

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Hey,

Looks good! But if i were you, i would just put the 'this is an adult one-shot/ff on the top'. Just for safety sake. 😳 Not trying to be mean or anything, just want to help. Otherwise it's really nice! 😃

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441240

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93
this was very interesting, are you going to continue it?

I've been getting a few pm's requesting i put up a sequel, so i'll c wot i can do..................

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441240

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: blackdaughter
Hey,
Looks good! But if i were you, i would just put the 'this is an adult one-shot/ff on the top'. Just for safety sake. 😳 Not trying to be mean or anything, just want to help. Otherwise it's really nice! 😃

Hey,

Thanks 4 da tip, i'll make sure i put in a warning.................

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Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

hey its very different ...nice one....go ahead...

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268143

@268143

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

woah dat was a very different concept ................. da way Heer n Meher were talkin about her wild dream 😳 n looks like Prem heard it 😆

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desichica

@desichica

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

oh man....these OS's are getting amazing more and more i read em!!!! I thoguht i was the only one with the imagination of Premeer like that...ok no probs...we all are besharam's 😳!!! We all can have Shaitani dimaag's right?!!!!😆

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441240

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Hey guys,

Unfortunately this one shot has been closed due to the explicit adult content, so I will attempt to re-write it and town down the adult content, as a sequel is coming up soon.

Let me know what u guys think............

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