Read-Away Marathon - Page 2

Thanks guys for the feedback! True, I agree with Ysh. My writing hasn't
been good at all. I guess it's the school stress. They're sending me for
loads of competitions so I hardly have anytime for anything.

I would really like to rewrite many parts but since I have readers I can't
because they would want new parts.

About the filmyness - I'll try to reduce that. It's just that I need to devote
more time to this story which I find hard to do given the competitions,
exams etc. Btw, who's acting OOC? D or N? Perhaps both. I guess I have to
reread the earlier parts to be able find the esssence of the characters
again.

The thing is, now the rising action begins in the story. Obviously, it gets
more dramatic as more things happen. I really need help to keep it
realistic in these crucial parts.

You know what, it would be great if I had a BETA to help. Is anyone
interested?

Haan one more thing, have u guys got any suggestions generally? Or,
more specifically, have u got any suggestions for how the story should
progress? Ofcourse, I've planned it all out but I'd love to hear your imputs.

Thanks guys! 😃

P.S. What a long post! 😆

thats great!! i ddint no this secion existed 😆 will try to stay active there

awesome though I just joined here i would deffinately .like to write some thing here