* 9/11 * AR one shot ~ Alvida from me :P

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*9/11* AR one shot
11:05 am 11th September 2001


You have one voice mail.


* beep *


Message received today at 11 am.


* beep *


Hey... its me... n guess what? My plane.... my building just got hit by a plane and yh but I am okay though.. for the time being anyways... but you know what honey... I think I am not going to make it ... I love you... take care of my angel for me...


* beep *


to listen to the msg again press one, to delete press 2, to save press 3.


* 1 *


* beep *


Hey... its me... n guess what? My plane.... my building just got hit by a plane and yh but I am okay though.. for the time being anyways... but you know what honey... I think I am not going to make it... I love you... take care of my angel for me...


* beep *


to listen to the msg again press...


* 1 *


* beep *


Hey... its me... n guess what? My plane.... my building just got hit by a plane and yh but I am okay though.. for the time being anyways... but you know what honey... I think I am not going to make it ... I love you... take care of my angel for me...


* beep *


to listen....


* 1 *


* beep *


Hey... its me... n guess what? My plane.... my building just got hit by a plane and yh but I am okay though.. for the time being anyways... but you know what honey... I think I am not going to make it ... I love you... take care of my angel for me...


* beep *


to listen to the msg again press one, to delete press 2, to save press 3.


to listen to the msg again press one, to delete press 2, to save press 3.


to listen to the msg again press one, to delete press 2, to save press 3.


to listen to the msg again press one, to delete press 2, to save press 3.


* beep *


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*


11:10 am 11th September 2001


* Ring *


"Okay what joke is it this time?"


"None now..."


"Well that was just sick..."


"You really think its a joke"


"You moron... i kno its an excuse for not taking me out again... I will never talk to you again..."


"Well.... I...wouldn't...dream...of...that...would...I?..."


"Whats with the heavy breathing... and get out of that commotion and talk will you...?"


"I can't..... even if I '.want to..."


"How long until you come back?"


"I.... am with.... you even now.... hunny..."


"Don't sweet talk me again..."


"I thought..... thats.... what made you..... fall for me?"


"I guess... so what do you want in dinner today then??"


"Will you..... make my... faaavvoorriittee??"


"I sure will.... I love you..."


"Meee....tooo... sooo... seen T.V.. yet?"


"Yh... turned it on couple of minutes back... CNN's showing some tall buildings on fire..... you know like the ones you work in... some plane crashed into both of them...."


"Oh okay.. never... knew that... remember.... something... else yes?"


"what??"


"I....."


"Armaan you're not going to believe this...."


"Loveee..."


"One of the buildings is falling... turn on the telly in ur office or something"


"you.......*


* beep * beep *


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*


1st september 2009


"We really appreciate you letting us use this Mrs Mallik..."


"Thats no problem Mr boston... I am happy to be part of this documentary...."


"Your story was very touching Mrs Mallik.."


"Well... we all lose the sense of reality once in while... and when I lost him... I WANTED to lose my life... But something kept me going..."


"Well... I can't express enough gratitude for letting us use your last conversation with him..."


"Its always been my solution from the riddles in the past year and to let people know what a wonderful ordinary hero he was is my tribute to him..."


"We'll be off now Miss Thankyou..."


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


* Ring *


"Hello... Mrs mallik?"


"Yes Mr boston?"


"The technical aspects of the documentary have been handled... when would be the suitable time to come and film?"


"You're welcome anytime today sir..."


"Great today at 4 pm..?"


"See you then.."


~*~*~*~*~~*~*~



"When you're ready Mrs Mallik... chose your own words... convey any feelings... alright?"


* lights * camera * go *

"Life is strange... ups and downs... we face it all but when some one's at our side... My husband...Armaan mallik... Stuck on the 102nd floor of the south world trade centre.... I clearly remember... It was just a normal day... I dropped our daughter emaan at her play school... went shopping... came back about 11ish... the answering machine bleeped.... 1 voicemail... normally I would have just ignored it.. but something made me press the replay button...


You have one voice mail.


* beep *


Message received today at 11 am.


* beep *


Hey... its me... n guess what? My plane.... my building just got hit by a plane and yh but I am okay though.. for the time being anyways... but you know what honey... I think I am not going to make it... I love you... take care of my angel for me...


* beep *


to listen to the msg again press one, to delete press 2, to save press 3.


"I wonder sometimes that how many times I clicked that play again button.... all my energy drained out of me... The five minutes turned into lifetimes and I stood there... my finger lingering over the replay button... until I lost the energy to even press that.... The phone rung again... It got ignored... I switched on the tv... CNN showed the twin towers in flames and thats it... I remember it vividly... the concious mind spoke..'thats where armaan works' but my subconcious ignored it... 'no!!! its just a building that look likes where armaan works...' The message replayed across my eyes... he can't be... its just another one of his jokes.... yh... the stupid moron... I cursed him endlessely and yes there I was.. wrapped in the protective cacoon of my dreams within 5 minutes.... I picked up the scattered pieces of reality and arranged them again in my mind.... He was fine... the msg was just a joke... The phone strung again...somehow my eyes forced to look at the caller id and I plunged at it..."


"My heart was set... I refused to look at the real picture... The towers burnt on the TV screen.... and that when I spoke to him for the last time... I don't kno but I am very content that I spoke to him the way I did that day... and for mutual reasons I think he did too.... His lack of breath... the hoarse whispers... I ignored them all.. coaxing them into my own explanations.... people say that once the loved ones are gone.. you forget their voices.... but now I've got something to hold on to all my live.... And you know.. he'll never be gone... I was 3 months pregnant with my son arnav then.... so I always have him.... and ofcourse our little angel emaan... she's nearly 10 now and loves her dad very much... what I want to say is that... life always moves on.... and we have to with it... I live now... for him.. for my kids... and we live life on his behalf as well...."


* cut *


Tears flowed from her eyes.... she looked at their wedding picture on the mantelpiece as the little boy and the tearful little girl came run into her lap....


"I love dada mom..." He spoke...

"I love him too angels... forever and always....."


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*


hmmm..... crooked eyebrows... drooped faces...don't curse me... lolz..... I kno its not the most cheery thing... but yes... I watched a documentary today on channel 4 on the 9/11 attacks: phones calls form inside the towers... and it really touched me.... besides my fingers were getting desperate to write something.... so yes... last piece of writing form me for bout 2 years....


this one shot is also a goodbye for now.... I love all the special people here and as it says in my siggi box m leaving IF.... so toodles people.... sixth form starts on wednesday... only one more day of freedom.... n then concentration... hehe..... love my specail people.... they kno who they are..... will update my siggi gallery once in a while n yh please keep on sending pm updates.... I will pop in to read the brilliant pieces of writing... can't live without them... lolz....


SO GOODBYE PEOPLE..... LOVE YOU MUCHOS....


love you all.....


rav

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserved.....
can't believe your gonna leave us all....
love
sumedha
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hey jaanu
howz ya?? after long time naa😃😃
actually i was off to india

anywy loved dis one shot
no doubt u r a wonderful writer
keep it up

btw whr r u going?

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just loved it....................it was fabulous.
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hey very nice and very emotional one....
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OMG! brilliant work! im crying right now! i fell sooooo bad n God Bless all who have lost der lives on that day n tha families! u relly lke making me cry! poor AR!
❤️twinkle!
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hey Rav
dat was basolutely beautiful!!!!!
m speechless...keep it up
i luved it!!
luv shai
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Originally posted by: ~sumedha~

reserved.....
can't believe your gonna leave us all....
love
sumedha

😆 sorry hun... studies come first now....😳😳
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omg....that was just soo *sniffs* soo *wipes tears* beautifully written...*tears continue to flow anyhow with increased momentum *
oh rav...i seriously cant pen down my exact emotions at the moment coz this one shot to toooo much beautiful to be praised in a few words...its talks so deeply abt love and inspires one to live on in life...
armaan's last words...omg...that was the place when tears started and even after the end and five miutes after they just dont stop....
riddhima's state of mind when she heard him and her last message for him...no words hun :)
simply mind blowing....
oh gosh..i'm really gonna miss ur fics...
*still crying*
awesome one girl :)
and thanks for the pm....

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