FF: Dil Ke Rishtay - Part 35 Page 57- Feb. 7th

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Dil Ke Rishtey - Part 1 -Page 1 - Updated on Sept 7th 2009
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Dil Ke Rishtey - Part 3 - Page 5 - Updated on Sept 9th 2009
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Dil Ke Rishtey - Part 5 - Page 9 - Updated on Sept 11th 2009
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Dil ke Rishtey - Part 11- Page 19 - Updated on Sept 17th 2009
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Dil ke Rishtey - Part 13 - Page 21 - Updated on Sept 19th 2009
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Dil Ke Rishtey - Part 16- Page 28 - Updated on Sept 26th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 17 - Page 30 - Updated on Sept 28th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 18 - Page 32 - Updated on Sept 29th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 19 - Page 35 - Updated on October 1st 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 20 - Page 36 - Updated on October 2nd 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 21 -Page 37 - Updated on October 3rd 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 22- Page 38 - Updated on October 4th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 23 - Page 40 - Updated on October 6th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 24 - Page 42 - Updated on October 9th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 25 - Page 44 - Updated on October 12th 2009
Dil Ke Rishtey - Part 26 - Page 45 - Updated on October 16th 2009
Dil Ke Rishtey - Part 27 - Page 46 - Updated on October 19th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 28 - Page 48 - Updated on October 24th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 29 - Page 49 - Updated on October 29th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 30 - Page 50 - Updated on November 6th 2009
Dil ke Rishtey - Part 31 - Page 52 - Updated on Nov. 15th 2009
Dil Ke Rishtay - Part 32 - Page 53 - updated on Nov. 30th 2009
Dil Ke Rishtay - Part 33 - Page 54 - Updated on December 20th, 2009
Dil Ke Rishtay - Part 34 - Page 55 - Updated on January 10th, 2010
Dil Ke Rishtay - Part 35 - Page 57 - Updated on Feb. 7th, 2010




Dil Ke Rishtey ? Part 1

Ok girls, I am starting a new FF. I got my inspiration from Rosh, Faiza, Purva, Darsh, Beenadi, Kowshik, Anshu, Juna, Rakshadi and all my friends at IF.

Yudi has married Imli at Rani's request because Rani wanted Yudi to have a child. Imli tricked YuRa into thinking that she was pregnant with his Yudi's child. Now the story starts when Rani leaves the Mahel. This part is different from the show because it assumes that Rani was asked to leave the Mahel by CR and Yudi did not try to stop her because he was obeying CR's order.

Rani looks at Yudi who is standing there with his head down. He looks helpless and Rani looses all hope. She quietly heads towards the door. All the members of Raj Parivaar are sad and helpless to see their Maharani leave the palace. Rudr, Bhoomi, Niharika, Bhanumati, Kali all stare at Rani leaving the palace. Rani gets to the door and looks back at Yudi who is standing fixed to the ground like a statue.

Imli is happy. CR also feels bad for asking Badi Bahu Rani to leave the palace but she does not really have any other option. In CR's eyes, the only way to reduce Imli's stress is to send Rani to her Gaun for some time until Kunwar Yudishter accepts Imli as his wife. The stress could be dangerous to the child. CR prays to God that Rani understands her position and will find in her heart to forgive her.

As soon as Rani is out of sight, Yudi leaves the room. Everyone else is also dismissed by CR. Rudr goes to CR and says, "Mom ye apne kya kiya, aap ne Rani Bhabhi ko Mahel se jane ka aadesh kyu dia." CR ignores Rudr and says to Imli, "Imli aap humare saath aayeye." CR says to Rudr, "Hum aap se baad mai baat kareyege." Rudr is frustrated. Imli and CR leave the room.

Rani leaves for her village heartbroken. She feels numb with the pain and does not realize when she reached her village. She tells the driver to go back as she will not need his services any longer. The driver leaves. Rani walks to her house like a defeated soldier and knocks the door. Amma opens the door and is happy to see Rani. She hugs Rani but once she realizes that everything is not right, she takes Rani in the house. "Kya hua beta, tum akeli iss samay, sab theek to hai". Rani breaks down crying and hugs Amma.

Yudi goes to his room and gets ready and leaves the Mahel. He has never felt more helpless in his life. On one hand it is his love and life while on the other hand it is his obligation to his family. He knows that Rani was asked to leave because of his behavior towards Imli. However, he cannot find it in his heart to give Rani's place to Imli and for that, he had to make the sacrifice to agree to send Rani away for some time. He could never say no to Rani and Rani was making him do things that he otherwise would not do, like share a room with Imli. He orders Bhanumati to transfer all of Imli's things back into her old room. He tells her to tell CR he will not be back for dinner as he has some urgent task to take care of.

He wants to call Rani and tell her that everything will be all right but for the moment, he has to deal with the pain of being away from Rani quietly. He makes himself busy with work so he will forget about everything, which is easier said than done. He need to find out about Bali and Sona as soon as possible. He knows that he promised CR that he will not bother Bali and Sona any longer but he can't stay away from Rani much longer. In order to do that he has to send Imli away to a save place where Sona and Bali cannot reach. He will go and get Rani as soon as Imli is at the save place and he smiles to himself.

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usmrasul thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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bobbidi, congrates for your own FF but how do you do it with imli in the story? i guess creatives thinking about it was enough painful...and now you want to take this pain too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyway, good luck
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Originally posted by: usmrasul

bobbidi, congrates for your own FF but how do you do it with imli in the story? i guess creatives thinking about it was enough painful...and now you want to take this pain too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyway, good luck

Urmrasul,
Imli is going to go out after first few parts.
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By the way bobbidi, if you bring a mature sensible independent Rani in front of us, i guess i will be more then happy.
As you wrote on other thread, plz dont make you-know-who notice Rani so easily in school....i want to see him raving like a lunatic to see one glimpse of Rani....maybe you can send Rani out of that kingdom so Rani can live as a simpleton and would be hard to find................mabe you-know-who will get mocked by Neel for 2nd marraige.................

😃 Dont mind write in the way you like, we are with you 😊
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Urmrasul,

Do not worry, my Rani is going to mature and sensible and give Yudi run for his money. 😉😉 This time roles are reversed.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Bobbie,🤗


You know wat, tum ne mere dil ki baat sun li!!!


Yesterday wen I read that topic post by you, the after Imli story, I wanted to ask you to write an FF of ur own n now here you are!!!👏
Love you hun!!😎
I really loved that idea n I suppose that the story of this FF will be around that, right? Cool!!!⭐️
Looking forward to it!😉


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Bobbie,🤗
Finally.....Finally you have come up with this FF!
Iam so glad you started...And its going perfectly!😃
Ab jaldi Yudi ko Rani ke paas leke aana! 😳
Awesome part...Eagerly waiting for more!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bobbie thank you for your FF and enjoyed reading it but please can you also show Rani as repentent for making her husband marry another woman and show her realization that relationships are not to be taken for granted. I am also angry with the serial Rani for making her love do things that would change the equations in their relationship with each other inspite of loving each other.
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excellent bobbie.............wow that's daring to use imli in FF..........but we have trust on you..........imli will have all kind of torture..........
so congrats in world of FF writing............
keep it up..........i will catch up..........as i have promised to all my FF writer friends........
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Wow,Bobbie,naya FF! After reading that scene of urs I so wished that u cud start one!Tumne meri dil ki muraad sun li-sorry for l8 comments,hun.
I just loved it-Imli shud go back to her room asap!Poor,Rani-but I liked ur thinking Yudi,yaar-he really has some feelings!

Go ahead 🤗

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