yet another poem for the Ds

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Posted: 20 years ago
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DK to Disha...

FLYING

your beautiful eyes are etched in my heart

a vision constantly before me

and in the remembrance of them

I see a reflection of myself

this idea of you, which pervades my being

is it the source of a new-found warmth?

or have I simply learned to finally love myself

having fallen for something so beautiful?

the green hills, with their luscious growth

have never looked so enticing, and so close to my hand

I yearn to run bare foot, feeling their dirt beneath my feet

and my arms yearn to embrace our commom Mother, Earth

every moment has a new peace

every problem seems so small

every happiness has a new depth

and in every direction I am not alone

when did the world loose its luster?

and how did my heart, unbeknownst to me, turn so cold?

when did life become a series of factory operations

to be perfected and performed without any real thought?

you have lit a fire in my heart

and I have run out from the confines of the factory

to throw myself from the top of the mountain and fly

into the arms of life

-DKaddict, who seems to have found her muse....... 😆

........color adjusted, as per Lata's request.......

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samy74 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey

Wowwwwwww cool love it.

Samy😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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😃The poem is realli sweet!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Honestly, is anyone interested in reading this stuff, or am I just wasting space, here? Really, truly, honesty is appreciated....... Should I bother with any more? Or does anybody have any suggestions? Looking for some quality feedback.......

-DKaddict

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi my dear Dkaddict offcourse we love your poems. 👏👏 great job indeed. But pleeeeeease make the fonts a bit darker na, I am really straining my eyes to read them....please if you don't mind will you. I like the Blue colour which is my favourite and suits this mood too.😊.

Now that you have found your muse , hope to read more of this fabulous stufff👍🏼.

😆 Lata

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Posted: 20 years ago
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dk addict your poems are really very sweeeeeeeet 😊

just waitng for u to write more😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey lovely poe m dkaddict,,and blue is my fav color too😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanks my dear. Its perfect now. I did not want to strain my eyes , else how could I feast my eyes on our Hottie 😉😳.

Oh you are William Wordsworth in the making. 👏👏👍🏼

Love Lata

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hehehe... Lata, you're simply exagerating, I know! Anyhow, here's another one from DK's side. I can't quite relate to Disha......

NEGLECT

frustration brews, just now near a simmer

it threatens to boil over

I can't seem to douse the fire

I am on fire

I can't reach the water, if it won't look my way

it must be off somewhere

swimming in itself

oblivious to what its absence means to me

I am the sun reborn

sometimes too hot for my own good

without my swimming pool

I'm heading for a supernova!

how to reach what I cannot touch?

how to call one who cannot hear?

the tide is out, and driving me wild

oh, when will those sweet waves return?

I can see in the distance how the water plays

in wave after wave, too busy with its own pattern

unaware of my need for it to wash over me once again

calming, soothing, cooling my fiery self

every yin needs its yang

and if you've lit a fire, I think its only fair

that you bring the water

its time you balance me out, babe!

-DKaddict, who's really getting annoyed with the available colors.... 😡

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Posted: 20 years ago
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eh offcourse not I am not exhagerating. Eh but seriously you should think of writing these creative poems quite often and then you will see new avenues opening for you. 😛.

Now this poem is from a modern day William wordsworth , what with a swimming pool and all that stuff 😃

and this red colour suits our hottie and his moods perfectly .

Once again.....

👏 to dkaddict 😆.

Love Lata

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