one shot -i want to marry you

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one shot - i want to marry you
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i dont know about love or attraction when i study in 5th class but somewhere frm my cousin i listen marrige and well i leran frm their after marrige ,the person and the girl live together ,
i can say that time im so stupid when i said some of my that i want to marry maynk yes ,in fifth class i want to marry him.
this was the biggest mistake of my life becoz my stupid so called friends spilt this infront the whole class and this was the worse day of my life ..........
but i dont know that more worse also coming becoz next day i hear my class boys saying that she was the girl who want to marry maynk ,now not only the class but whole school know about this ,and im feeling guilty like i killed someone ...........
but this is not stop their becoz of my sweet brother dodo he tell my mom dad too,not my mom dad ,my massi too ,i was standing there like someone hang till death...........

this was my last day at my house ,they send me to bording .
i curse the day when i said these word which i dont know what they mean, and curse maynk also becoz for him i send inn this prison.

well the days pass but i dont forget him ,i still feel for him ,i go home but never see him ,becoz i was angry becoz of him im away frm my family

but the feeling for him is not finish day by day ,i feel more connected to him,but i never see him

and today im going home becoz ya this is the last day of my college ,my college friend say that may be i fall in love but no way this love give me nothinmg, but in my dreams i alwys imagin him wearing the same small half paint ,
how he look now ,alwys wonder this but i never see him,i feel his picture like i wacth him in 5th class

but today im going back ,he must be grown too ,but he nevr conntect me

mom tell me that their is some one who want to meet me

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home mom tell me that they select this boy for me ,but for me only the one boy i like which i never see after 5th class ,whom i want to marry
the tray fall from my hands
i was standing there like deaf and dumb

today i feel may be he was there my maynk,how he looks is he wear half paint these days ,no he must be wear jeans
but he was no where the boy approching me but i feel run frm there
i run to terrace
i was crying why becoz my 5th class lover is not there ,i feel some one patting my back
he call me nupur
i feel some relation with him
he speak -nmupur it was not only you who want to marry me in 5th class ,im also want to marry you

and i recognize that he was there and his cute smile also...............

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hope you like it
love
************aditi

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stuti123 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice nd sweet i liked it alot .........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey adi this is soo sweet, aww i simply loved the cute and adorable mayank and nupz man. too good.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi_gupta

<FONT color=#0000ff>one shot - i want to marry you
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<FONT color=#0000ff>i dont know about love or attraction when i study in 5th class but somewhere frm my cousin i listen marrige and well i leran frm their after marrige ,the person and the girl live together ,
i can say that time im so stupid when i said some of my that i want to marry maynk yes ,in fifth class i want to marry him.
this was the biggest mistake of my life becoz my stupid so called friends spilt this infront the whole class and this was the worse day of my life ..........
but i dont know that more worse also coming becoz next day i hear my class boys saying that she was the girl who want to marry maynk ,now not only the class but whole school know about this ,and im feeling guilty like i killed someone ...........
but this is not stop their becoz of my sweet brother dodo he tell my mom dad too,not my mom dad ,my massi too ,i was standing there like someone hang till death...........</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>this was my last day at my house ,they send me to bording .
i curse the day when i said these word which i dont know what they mean, and curse maynk also becoz for him i send inn this prison.</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>well the days pass but i dont forget him ,i still feel for him ,i go home but never see him ,becoz i was angry becoz of him im away frm my family</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>but the feeling for him is not finish day by day ,i feel more connected to him,but i never see him</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>and today im going home becoz ya this is the last day of my college ,my college friend say that may be i fall in love but no way this love give me nothinmg, but in my dreams i alwys imagin him wearing the same small half paint ,
how he look now ,alwys wonder this but i never see him,i feel his picture like i wacth him in 5th class </FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>but today im going back ,he must be grown too ,but he nevr conntect me</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>mom tell me that their is some one who want to meet me</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>***********************
home mom tell me that they select this boy for me ,but for me only the one boy i like which i never see after 5th class ,whom i want to marry
the tray fall from my hands
i was standing there like deaf and dumb</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>today i feel may be he was there my maynk,how he looks is he wear half paint these days ,no he must be wear jeans
but he was no where the boy approching me but i feel run frm there
i run to terrace
i was crying why becoz my 5th class lover is not there ,i feel some one patting my back
he call me nupur
i feel some relation with him
he speak -nmupur it was not only you who want to marry me in 5th class ,im also want to marry you</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>and i recognize that he was there and his cute smile also...............</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>********************</FONT>


<FONT color=#0000ff>hope you like it
love
************aditi </FONT>




Very Nice.. I Really Liked It.. How Shweet x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwww...........vry cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee os yaar............5th class se shuru hi yeh love story????????????wowww............10 on 10 aditi...lovd it vry much.....👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!!!
it was really very cute. lovely one shot.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so sweet adi wt a story keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8
wow soooo sweet story......just like mine(...instead 5 it was in 4th)😆...i hope my story also end up having a happy ending...😆😳.....awesome one shot yaar....please write more...pm me😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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what a wonderful one shot.

Really totally love it.
Love it.
V.V.V. NICE
At the end when she realized it is mayank-wow. I love it.
The concept was also so so so nice.
I wish u elaborated a little more and made it a litt long.
But thanku vvery much.
LOVED IT
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
aila majja aaya.. loved it so much... 5th std love coming true.. waaaaaaaw...
am loving it..... mei fida hoyi iss one-shot per... can i see it in realitiy?????

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