ll what is love? ll FF ll 6: plans page 25 22/12

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys some of you know me as curled up and some as aashifa well for the ones who don't know me at all *hi aves* I am aashifa


and like reading all the ff's round I thought why not create my own with a new style!!



hope you like the teaser!



TEASER


When I was little I had a baby brother and a new born baby sister....My mother used to tell me that God gives us children and some sort of karishma happens for them to be born and I can still recall the day:


~flash back~


Mama mama yeh kon hai???...............I asked


Arre pagli yeh teri choti behen hai!......Ma said


Par..pehle Nihaal aur aab yeh??.............I was confused..hey don't blame me I was just a kid!


Ha..jab upar-wale humme bach de na chate hai tho woh koi karishma karte hai to issliye baache aate hai................Ma ended and suddenly the little member starting wailing

Yeh lo....puttar zara idher ho mujhe upar jaane hai!......Ma said trying to keep that annoying loud wailer's mouth shut!


When ma left the only thing I could think of was when I get married will I ever have a karishma..will I get a wailer like my ma has..but most of all I would have a person that loves me alot and will always


present


Tears blindened my eyes as I tried to stop them falling but all was useless as they fell of their own accord as another painfull day awaited me here in this place a karishma will never occur....it will never make me feel loved but feel disgusted of my shadow let alone my body..marks covered me from head to toe....I looked on out to the window wondering when this pain will end and the sun will shine on my head




INDEX:
chapter 1: Page 3
chapter 2: Page 7
chapter 3: Page 14
chapter 4: Page 18
chapter 5: Page 22
chapter 6: Page 25

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-Maha- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi aashifa
you are starting ff really great
and about teaser
ooo yar great hy.i want to read this plz continue
maha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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^^thank you guys will continue soon pakha promise!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy nice teaser...
very intersting concept
plz cont soon.
Momana
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi aashifa
wow u r starting a ff really great.
teaser is very nice & very intriguing.continue soon.
pm me when u update.
luv
Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy awesoem teaser!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved the concept
please continue asap
please pm me when u update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Riya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome teaser!And the concept is totally different!I really want to know why Heer was covered with marks everywhere around her body!Your teaser is totally suspenseful!Please continue soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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You did a really good job on the teaser Aashifa! 😊 Can't wait for more! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Aashifa
awesome teaser
can't wait to read more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey aashifa, amazing teaser!!!! Really like the concept!!! Plz continue soon!!! 😃

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