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Posted: 15 years ago
I definately have a LOT of scenes to catch up on - the last time i was updated was when this topic was back in it's 40s! hahah

Anyways, two scenes that i have caught up on so far are the two that Ivy wrote! OMG haha they're BRILLIANT!!

The tie scene was just PERFECT, i can TOTALLY imagine that happening between AN and i actually wish it would!! I wish AN would go back to being happy and romance and bicker and tease each other! I lovee how Mr. Abhimanyu Modi, doctor et all, can't tie his own tie hahaha it's just all so sweet! And Ivy, you've got SUCH a way with words, it astounds me! I loveeeee reading your scenes and i cant wait for more!

Ok,...that future youtube video scene was SO AWESOME! OMGG HAHAHAHAH i cracked up so badly at Niki's reaction when Abhi entered the room! Poor guy must have been like...why is she so looney!? And Niki, all she could think about were his kisses...HAHAHAH awwww man, it's one of my favourite scenes EVER!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx Frost! ur words cheered me up!!!! I thought u'd like the future video one too!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Full Moon night ,
moon's reflection flickering on the beach.......


Abhi feeling the warmth of this scenario seeing nikki.."I wish you are close to me" abhi whispers.


Nikki walking away from him, does not want to have those beautiful feelings again.

Abhi finds a pearl on the ground, he picks it and turns around ....grabs it in his palm and wishes to be with her..So close as kohl to eyes, so close as heartbeats to heart....

Nikki walking in her own restrictive thoughts, suddenly realize that she is walking alone turns around and sees abbhi 's back. she get furious what happen to him, why he is not walking with her?

she calls ' Abhimanyu...' he didn't listen....she call him again..he didn't listen her..she walks towards him now fastening her speed.
Abhi realised she is reaching him, as soon as she was about to reach, he hides the pearl....she wanted to know what is he hiding now..giving her nervous look he replied" Yahh!!....sorry I didn't listen you..this melodious sound of beach is keeeping me busy.!!!"

Nikki coming in anger , loosing her calm asked him " this sound or something in your hand" giving him angry look. He walks further, does not want to face her because he knows she has stopped melting when abhi shows her his feelings....

Nikki comes in her full mood to bash him if he does not tell her what is it that he is hiding from her NOW!!!
" OK..waise bhi tumhe chupane ki itni aadat hai..ek baar aur sahi....".

But now she is not going to leave him...she rushes over himturning his hand and trying to open his fist but couldn't , he is very storng, trying to stop her but this time she bits him on his hand.."OOUCHH!!!" he still doesn't open his fist............
he grabs her putting his hand on her waist and falls down..TURNING AND TURNING AND TURNING over each other they reach close to water..."WOW!!!"
Nikki is lying over him..look into his eyes..his eyes are full of love..but they loose those passion that she use to feel..she could see the pain in his eyes now, but love is the feeling that dominates any other feeling when your love touches you..and here she is actually over him..

TO BE CONTINUED......

Specially for sayra..🤗
Abhi grabbing her tightly as he hears the sound of small tides......ITS THE TIDES EVOLVING IN THEIR HEARTS..Nikki looking hot with little little water drops allover her face and Abhi just couldn't resist.

"Let me get up" Nikki says but she spoke so slowly wishing that he should never leave her but she has to get up because its not his Abhi..
Abhi leaves her, she got up Abhi hasn't yet, he does not want to, he closes his eyes and spread his arm far apart...


Nikki walks away and sits alone, she couldn't stop those feeling emerging in her heart that she wants to be over him, lying over him...those thoughts gives shivver to her , still looking at him and keep on looking................

"Why, why why cannot be with him" she gets frustate of not being with him.
Abhimanyu lying over there.....getting confident over thought that nikki would definitely comes close to him TONIGHT.
"How much time she has to take to accept the truth I told her, now she know EVERYTHING, EVERYTHING about my past, how and in what condition my SO CALLED WIFE left me, my SO CALLED WIFE betrayed me.I am HEARTBROKEN and I LOVE HER." abhi thinks, he knows what kind of look Nikki gave him just few minutes ago when she was in his hands...she does not want to be far now.."I KNOW SHE WILL COME" he whispers.
As soon as he speak those word he felt someone throwing water on his face, he felt the warmth of his love and he knows its Niki. He become motionless, Nikki stopped throwing water on his face, she tries to bend closer to him to check whether he is fine....HIS EYES MIGHT BE CLOSE BUT HIS HEART IS OPEN TO REALISE HOW CLOSE NIKKI IS TO HIM...she is bending more and more and more and more..And finally speaks "A..A..ABHI" tear drops down from her eyes onto his face, her face was so close to his........as he speak "I AM ALIVE"..his lips touches her lips....he grabbs her truns over her AND....................................

THE REST YOU ALL KNOW...😉


Edited by ratika89 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Erutan99

I'm glad u liked the scene but its not part of a series. Its just a oneshot, sorry. The reason Niki got angry was b/c this took place when she first started having feelings for Abhi but still thought she hated him...thuse when she saw Abhi right after seeing a video where they were romancing like crazy she automatically blamed him for it in her head!😆 She was especially annoyed bc of the feelings the video evoked in her, feelings she wasn't ready to acknowledge just yet! Thus Abhi like always got to deal with her anger.😆 Im sorry u didn't get it. I tried really hard to get those emotions across in the piece but it was kinda hard to write and I guess I didn't succeed.😭



oh please dont feel sorry.. i didnt understand so not ur fault and so i re read it and guess what? i understood it better!!!! i think u have to have that creative side to understand such good piece of work... i guess i am a little dense!!! hahah

again keep up the good work... 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi everyone.....have been a silent reader of the FC and an AN fan for a long time but today I cudn't stop myself as I wanted to thank Ivy, ratika, mich for the wonderfuuuuuuuulll n excellent scenes!!!
MICH: I absolutely LOVED ur 8 pm series n always wait for ur top 10!!! N plzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep writing the wonderful scenes!!! Thanks so much again!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

@ Ivy loved your scene...looking forward to reading the continuation...Wow AN rolling over..... 😍 😍 But I don't think they'll ever loose their passion.... 😃

@ Happnezz,,....thanks so much so glad you liked the after 8 pm series... will try to do work on a scene soon.. thanks so much

Mich
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mich what scene r u talking about? I haven't written any since the youtube video one????????????😕
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Posted: 15 years ago

Sorry Ivy, I mistook Ratika's scene for your scene...

Ratika lovely scene, do continue...

Mich
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mich09


Sorry Ivy, I mistook Ratika's scene for your scene...

Ratika lovely scene, do continue...

Mich



Thanks michi..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ratika tm scene likh kar hope dilate hooo

aur wahan creatives bina hope dilaye hmare band bajate hain

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