'Pardesi' (AM) FF: 2 Parts, End, Page 7 - Page 3

Originally posted by: ~*~A~*~

Ur welcome,Bhabhiji..but plz,cont.soon..i'm dyin to read the next part...😳 itni betabi?😆 lol,,, I have exams yaar, later in the week acha?😉

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dc

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omg u have a new ff and omg wat can i say i repeat ma self all the time but that was absolutely awesum!! 👏 👏
the way u describes thing and the use of words and how the flashbacks r gd omg and gd use of songs were gd i loved it!!!! 😃
cnt wait 4 ur 2nd part
continue soon 😃

Shaz!... Joh socho, woh bolo... dil se😉 Thank you kindly for the words!!... Haha, you get me pumped with your excitement... I need the energy after reading a whole lot of boring things for exams Thanku.😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: psawyer

Now you're just being modest😉 They say beauty is in the eye of the beholder, but there has to be something beautiful to behold in the first place😳This is it😊

I suppose... but each individual has a slightly different view of "beauty" do they not?😉

The best writers are those that just....write. From the heart, the soul, from anywhere deeper than the obvious...that kind of beauty is not imagined or perceived by readers - its there because it exists in the language😊😊

Language is subject to interpretation too na... But I see where you come from and *bows humbly* for the assertion!

As for wanting read my work, you're more than welcome to - I write an ff in KZK forum - would love to hear your comments on that😉

KZK... hmmm I don't watch it regularily... If its by you, I would know its a PM one right? I didn't watch much of them... but since you've written it... I will definately stick my head in some time after these damn exams! All at liesure...

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dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Shaz!... Joh socho, woh bolo... dil se😉 mein hamesha dilse bolti hoon 😳 Thank you kindly for the words!!... Haha, you get me pumped with your excitement... 😆 Im excited lol i cnt wait!!! need the energy after reading a whole lot of boring things for exams Thanku.😳 aww bless u gd luck hun hope u do well 😳

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dc

Originally posted by: psawyer

Oh, I know you didn't write it 😆 but still - it seems unfair for me to suddenly chori a quote that yuou post in your own context 😆 😆

Yeah, I know you know... 😆 I was just having a "kaash aisa hota" moment😆... Why is it unfair if it works for you... I don't have my name labelled on it now do I!😉

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dc

@ Mina... Thanks!😃 Yep, Metz is an exception indeed... she's got some contagious virus that spread to him

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dc

@ Shaz... thank alot, I'll need the luck!😳 Gosh woman, jail jaaney ka irada hai... killer siggies😳

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dc

@ Vasu... Ditto!😃 Chalo, permission toh milgayi... kissi din doob jaayenge... see how high the water gets😆

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dc