FF: Destiny-III (Note- Pg 145; Aug 24th) - Page 107

Originally posted by: Cess-

okie smita - first time me commenting... will be back!!

*edited*

hey smita....

ok, so this is the first time me writing in destiny.... gosh could you blame me?? i mean how difficult is it to read 100 + chapters in one go? and a chapter from you can be really long... not that i'm complaining... 😉... btw, me not that crazy id comment on all your chapters, or you wont be able to write anymore, lest reading my comments.... 😆.... Hey Cess!! Good to see you here!! 😃 No no..cannot blame you at all. It is a wonder you are not petitioning for me to wrap up this story. Lord knows it has gone on for long enough!! 😆

so, will start with the last chapter... ok, i felt a tug in my heart while reading about atul... aww poor guy... had to suffer a lot, for just one single mistake.... i mean seriously, he didnt have a clue of his feeling at that time, and he was really helpless... seeing what his father went through, and then the sudden outburst of meher, really... it's too much to take in one single moment nah? and seriously, meher, give me a break... she is heart-broken, i'm not doubting that, yet she isnt happy, unable to take the pain of separation... i feel this attitute isnt about 'not living with a guy who doesnt respect me'.... it's more revenge and ego problems... she doesnt want to share it with anyone, yet she keeps breaking and weeping inside... it's a real horrible feeling... and what's worse is, it's not only hurting her, atul and prem, but it's hurting heer as well... her sister is in a tricky situation, where anything is possible... meher must understand where everything stands rigth now.... you know, meher's attitude reminds me a little about our own heer in the show right now... she is so stubborn and stone hearted, nothing is really gonna change her mind!! but then again, heer is angry for a valid reason, (ok, except the chahat part) but meher is really more stubborn than her sis no? i hope she soon understands her mistakes....but with you as a writer everything will go well nah?😉 Aww, did you? I know...poor guy!! No it is true he had no inkling of his feelings. Or maybe he did but was extremely reluctant to give it that name...you know.."love". It was too much to take it all in...not to mention that he was battling his attraction towards Meher!! 😃 Yes, with Meher...the last stand off in her office was all about her assuaging her ego. Her pride took severe battering with the whole fiasco the first time with Atul, just before she left the US. And then in Sydney that last night, she found that she really couldn't resist him..and hence in her head, Meher considers herself weak and pathetic for falling for him all over again. This was more to prove something to herself than anything...know what I mean? Aww...thanks for the vote of confidence...it will all be sorted out I promise!! 😃

aahh, about premeer.... pure, and faithful love without an atom of doubt... beautiful relationship these 2 share... seriously smita, i have nothing but admiration for the way you portrayed their understanding and passion for one another.... truly magical... whenever i read their parts, it remindes me of the real premeer - the one we had before prem's apparent death! i just love the words being understood through their eyes, the intesity of their love.... every couple's dream is to cherish the moments when the sign of their love would be taking a step into their world! prem gave up all those never-going-to-be-back moments just to keep heer safe, and himself ready to give up what for other people means life.... he is ready to give up his own child for heer, without hesitation and second thought whatsoever.... their love is eternal smita... you made it that pure!! Yes..they are like the calm, soothing balm over raw wounds...no? I am glad you have liked the way I see these two as. Yes yes...this was what Prem and Heer were in the show before his so called death. **sigh** Prem...I like the way you put that in words. Yes, he can never get back these moments with their baby. And he does not hesitate to overlook that for a minute...for Heer. Can there be anything more beautiful about their love? It is not that he loves his baby any less...just not willing to think about it just yet. And Heer...she knows....**sigh** Thank you...I am happy you think so!!

looking forward to the next chapter... geniunely hoping for premeer, but atul-meher is fine as well 😆... you know, they are really growing on me... but ash-preet, and sanjana-harman are real cute too!! i guess it's your magic!! oh, and btw, congo in advance for your 4th thread! hope 2 c u in the EDT! byee!

The next chapter is coming up soon!! LOL!! I hope to fulfill one wish..I think. The others will all make an appearance later....😉 Yeah...the update will be in the fourth thread!! Gosh!! C ya later!!

cess

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
ur back...wow...long time...really missed reading ur ff. 🤗 the part was amazing...loved it. 👏 really hope everything becomes fine with atul and meher...soon...I cant see them sad anymore...😉 and the small premeer scene was cute...😛 cant wait for the next update...continue soon.
Hey Afreen!! 😃 I know dear. It has been a long time, no? I am glad you loved it. Stuff between Meher and Atul will work out...keep reading!! Thank you!!
love
Afreen

Originally posted by: nuptalie

Thank god.
You have updated.
Waited for a long time.
Thanks
Hello!! 😃 I know it was a long time. Next update coming up soon. You are so welcome!!

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey really nice ff...................plz add me to ur pm list..........plz update soon
Hey Sanju! Thanks...next update coming up soon! 😃

Originally posted by: maha_k

great and amazing update dear
Thanks...😃

Originally posted by: mithalio

mine.

After a long time, Are you ok? we all miss you , now for your punishment you have to update regularly no more excuses ok. By the way update was excellent as usual.
Mithiya
Hi Mithya!! I am fine..sorry about the delay. I have been so busy!! Awww...yeah, next update coming up soon. Thank you!! 😃

Originally posted by: yasu09

hey,

great update...............👏
hope meher and atul sort things out............
can't wait for the next update, plz pm me when u do ............
Hey Yasu! 😃Thanks...keep reading to find out if Atul Meher things are sorted out or not...and how!! 😉 Next update coming up soon dear!

Originally posted by: fungrl

Finally an update, you were MIA tooo long, anyways awesome update as usual. absolutely loved the interaction between the sisters. I soooo dearly hope that Prem decides to meddle in Atul and Meher's stupid lover's tiff.....however I am surprised that heer decided to keep out of the whole mess.....interesting how Heer is not babying Meher anymore.....great update all in all
Hey there!! 😃 Yep...finally!! I know I know...I have been fighting with stupid SP and calling them all over the world...gits!! I am so glad you liked the update. Prem is going to meddle..when and how, I want you to read on!! 😉 Yep, Heer has bigger things...like a new baby...to worry about no? 😆 Moreover I think she knows that her sister is now grown up...so it makes sense...no? Thank you!!
Now I shall go back resume my fight with duffer SP Aww...yeah, me too! 😉
don't forget to update Next update coming up soon!!
adios

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesomeeeeeee

great part
Thanks... 😃

Originally posted by: fj08

Hey Smita,

So glad you updated, love the story and always eager for the updates, cant believe i didnt find this till the 19th :( Hey Fatima!! 😃 Aww...but you found it now, no? 😆 Glad to see you here!
so when did Vij make an entry into the story? i am going to have to reread the update along with some of the previous updates for more detailed comments, but i really liked the update, wonder how prem will manage to talk to atul about anything, feel so sad abt atul and meher Vij...he is just there for the one update...nothing much to write about him!! 😆 OOh, but you will have to read on to find out what Prem really does...glad you liked the update though!!
wish list.... have atul come to india probably for the wedding but not make up with meher, prem try to push the two together and take meher to task abt it and atul jump in to defend her.... sort of like the 18th june prem but prem doesnt have to be as mean as DJ,
Oh, that is quite a wish list. I think you will like what I have planned...😉 But it is a nice scenario indeed...will see what I can do..😆
at least i can think about that track till you update again, That's good...keep thinking..and I hope to add more to your thinking pile with the next update!! 😃 I need you to come back for more..don't I?
tc
fatima
Take care and see you soon!!

Originally posted by: Deizy

hi ...is soo good to see u ....and wth such a owesme update ...

totally wonderfulll .i was missing ur wriiting

hm now that u are back ..i want to read more ...heh

update soonnnn

wil be waitingg
Hey Deizy!! It is great to see you too!! Thank you...glad you liked it. Aww....you are such a sweetie!! No worries..next update is coming up soon. Keep reading!! 😃

Originally posted by: angel82

a much awaited update I guess..

well just dropped in to say , I did catch up with ur FF...ermm....ummm....to be honest, with only the Prem - Heer parts......and a very little of the others.....If I get into the Meher-Atul one I wouldnt be able to complete anywhere in the near future so just skipped them......Sorrry .......I'm vey sure you must have done a wonderful job with their story, I read a few parts, like meher's bonding with atul's dad, their kissing and Atul rejecting her and all that....I also liked that it was harman who first noticed Meher's fallen face and decided to talk to her...though I havnt read that part completely,,,.I love it how you shape relationships in this story and I will try my best to catch up with the entire thing sometime in the future coz I really dont want to miss such a beautiful piece of writing.... Hey Angie **squishy hug** So glad you dropped by!! No problem, I totally understand!! All that can get a bit much 😃 Don't worry...there is no rush. Catch up and comment when you have the time...thank you. I am just glad you are here.

absolutely loved everypart , evrey line I read....I can soooo relate to what Heer and Prem must be going thru....I know..this gives me goosebumps...everytime I read how a part of my story each one can relate to..it is a humbling experience, let me tell you! 😃

from here onwards I am planning to read the entire updates so I would be glad if u could brief my on the meher-atul part...just in two or three lines...

I know that meher in canada was close to Atul's dad and him...atul had a GF there, the day before Meher was leaving to india , she kissed him and then he backed off saying he was just doin a favour for prem...then what ??

Oh no problem. I can give you a quick run down. Oh Meher comes back to Mumbai..she's all hurt..there are plenty of flashbacks of Meher and Atul's time in the US and Canada. Then Meher has to go to Sydney, where Atul engineers to go there at the same time. He apologizes..but Meher doesn't want anything to do with him. She realizes she is still in love with him the last day...and one thing leads to another and they end up spending the night together. The next day Meher leaves. Atul follows her to India and they have a confrontation in her office, part of which Prem over hears. Meher says some unforgivable things and Atul just takes it all in and leaves for Toronto. *whew* Not really 2-3 lines is it? But that is the gist!! 😃

and is preet and ash married? I guess they arent ?

I read that sanjana had decided not to have kids till heer has one ,so she isnt pregnant yet right?

No Preet-Ash are waiting for the baby before getting married. And no again, Sanjana is not pregnant yet. 😃

thanks and will try to catch up with all the updates henceforth No worries...next update coming up soon!!

luv

Angie

Originally posted by: kaymail

I have been a silent reader, but just wanted to say...you are are an amazing writer...There is a lot of detail in what you write and well thought out...👏👏👏
Hey there!! 😃 Thank you for taking the time and leaving a comment. I really appreciate it. Thanks again...and keep reading!!

Originally posted by: ashpush

Finally!!

I made it here.....U updated, n right at that time i had my internals!!!

N smithsie...I missed u a lot......*hugs*...More than i missed destiny....

That was the thing i hated the most 'bout no updates from u...that there was no convo at all with u*pouts*

Anyway,loved the update... Hey Ashie!! **squishy hug** Me too...missed not talking to you!! These updates were a regular way to catch up no? Aww....you are cho chweet!! 😃

Ahh...Poor Prem....He must be having a "great" time trying to figure out what's wrong between those two*goes and runs hand on prem's awesome hair*(of course,to console him😆) I know, right? Hey...you just want to tussle his hair...**peering knowingly at Ashie** 😆

Heer knows that there is some problem??!!!! Dint expect that.....

But Im soooo glad she knows....I mean in the sense that,its good to know that Heer knows her sister so much that she'll knw wen there is some prob....and i loved that moment between the sisters....

K then, Im off!!! Yep Heer only knows that there is some problem..not what! Thank god!! I am glad you liked the update. The next chapter is coming up...so see you then? Bye..c ya!!

Take care!!

Love,

Ash

PS: That Geet is so irritating!! Tell me about it!! Git!