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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Angelic_Swancy
heyya karti didi i dunno if i commented on this Ff earlier or not but i just loved it👏👏👏 it was sooo well written Thanks a lot Swancy. Am glad u liked the part and sweety it's Krati...😳

Loved the fact that armaan and ridhima are dancing together

and the confrontation of muskaan towards her brother; armaan

it was very touching, i really really loved it

aww...glad u did.

i hope u'll be updating soon will be updating today most probably

do PM me

thnks

swancy

Thanks Swancy for the comment.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: mohini_agarwal
wow, another fantastic ff krati! do continue soon and could you pm me when you update?

thanks,

mona :]

Thanks a bunch Mona for the comment. Glad u enjoying the fic.
Will definitely PM u once i update.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: samijan
gr8 part. continue soon.

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: AngelicSoniya
awesum....too gud

Thanks Soniya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: -simi-
hey kratiii
awesome updates!! u and nijal both! hahaha

man nijal sounds a little.. angry! hahahaha

keep going i love this fic~~ 😃

Hey simi
Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Glad u liking the fic.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg
luvd de part...hmm...reli hatz off 2 de creative mind huh!!
thx a ton 4 de pm n do cont soon

luv u lts

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Hey Ashu
Thanks for the comment.
Am so happy that you liked the part.

Originally posted by: .x.Saira.x.
awesome update krati👏
plz update soon!

Thanks a lot Saira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: spln
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wohoooo me first...*does the victory jiggle*

wow kratz...that was such a part....i was unsure u wud be coming back to this fic, n i dont know wat i thot abt ur take, but after this part, um rethinking all my thots n i know i want this one up n doen y u as desperately as the rest....the shool going kids n theire heads...how the mere things are life, n life is mere....its al abt being 18 i gues...not like um much over that but still, i cant let go a chance to say it, i take every turn telling ameen that too hehe😆loved it hun...rahul is a wee bit too protective...i hav fgrown up in a fam of brothers only hardly any sisters but none are like that...except one...the only one who ius my twin case n i can totally see where rahul comes from....btw...just for recorrds that cousin of mine is actually a RAHUL too!!!...oh well um no ridhima thats a differnet matter but i know wat fun it is to be siblings or cousins same age n study like that...ita the most awsome thing n even thought rahul was like teh rahul here, since i was not risdhima i had a blast n he just had to admit i was too good for him hahaha....na me love him....rahul n me are the unofficial twin kids of the fam....n this fic making me go back so nostalgically to the time...hope ur updating super soon hun!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: hinanaziri
~reserved~ you meanies all of you!! Kratz the only one who nice here!!

yeh yeh
u reserve me the last of three and u expect me to say that?
God kratz u know me well then lolz
ok back to update

loveeeeeeeeed the part
it had me in splits
Armaan yar,is this not the history class really ? hahahahha
i cud see the fun in the writing
and kya red bull? dont u dare kratz😆
u such a fab writer yar
just write with such ease and style is awesome
Rahul being all posessive as ever hmm
and the dance aha
Muskaan's massive outburst hmm
had to be done eh
awesome update kratz
sorry to be leaving a lame comment

315 sweets

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Posted: 16 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: jia..
Kratzzzzzzzzzz🤗 Jiaaaaaaa😃

OMG firstly u dedicated it to me??? Gosh Kratz um so touched, seriously i mean t, hehe not sugar coating it all......this is just so very very touching and i am so.....oh well chodo.....just that i love u for this!!🤗
awww Jia.....love u too

U knw i love this one, not that the rest i dont, but this one is extra special, haha. I so love the tender gentle emotions.......the update was just brilliant as usual....no surprises there.
am glad that this one is extra special since it is being written for you...glad u enjoyed reading it.

The first scene was hilarous, haha he didnt knw which teacher taught which subject??? LMAOOOO....typical ARmaan, haha very well written scene Kratz!! Kudos!!

The next ahh, Rahul-ARmi up against each other?? The scene was fab, the over protective bro...Ridz trying to ease out between them.....great going!!
yeah...that kinda stuff i have seen happening a bunch of time...didn't involve much thinking there

But the best scene, Muskaan telling him off, that was xceptionally brilliant.............Kratz that was just outstanding......i am so loving the way ur developing this......u saying u cant do a sweet one??? Well thats an outright lie as ur doing a more then outstanding job here....Kratz srsly kudos,........i love love this!!
hehe...😳 like always...ur comment gives me a boast to do better...btw not many ppl liked the bit where Muski blasted Armi...but i guess we all have those confrontations with siblings every once in a while when the lid comes off and the real emotions come out...

And u better not say.....that "atleast someone likes it?" u had it then as i love this!!
hehe...alrite...i won't...am glad u like this...ur my star reader so...

Awaiting more, the dance practice, hmmm really eager to see wer this goes!! Love u Kratz!!
am still stuck on the part...will try and update soon.
love ya tons Jia...thanks a bunch for the awesome comment

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Part-3

Rahul ran into the next block but stopped as he saw someone sitting in the playground outside, all alone and looking at the curly mane, he instantly knew who it was. He stealthily walked up to her and sat down on the bench she was sitting on.
Muskaan looked up and gave him a short smile, turning back to look ahead.
"I am sorry." She looked back at him as she heard him whisper.
"It's okay. I know you didn't mean to hurt me. It just happened. Forget it, I am fine anyways." As she again looked ahead Rahul noticed she was upset over something and than he realized that she was alone here……where was Armaan? Before he could say anything the bell rang.
"Muskaan we should…. He stopped as he saw a tear fall out of her eyes.
"Muskaan!?" He placed his hand on her shoulder but she just shook her head and covered her face with her hands, sobbing. He moved closer placing his hand on hers.
"Muskaan, you alright?" He whispered, not sure of what he was supposed to do. Reluctantly, he placed his hand on her head, caressing it lightly. "Muskaan!?" She removed her hands from her face and wiped her tears. She kept looking down at her feet while Rahul waited patiently for her to say something.
After staying in that position for a while she looked up, embarrassed at her behavior. "I am sorry Rahul. I was just…
"It's okay. You want to tell me what the matter is?"
"I and bhai had a fight and I was really rude to him."
He nodded and waited for her to continue but when she didn't say anything he said, with surprise evident in his voice, "Is that it?"
She looked incredulously at him. "Isn't that more than enough?"
"A reason to cry?…No. I and Riddhima fight all the time. What's the big deal?"
"YOU AND RIDDHIMA FIGHT!?" she spoke loudly, shocked.
"What's so shocking about me and Riddhima fighting?"
"One, she doesn't seem to be the kind to fight with anyone. Secondly, you both love each other so much…I just cannot imagine you guys fighting."
"We love each other and that is why we fight. When two people don't fight it's because their isn't enough intimacy and love in the relationship and okay we both don't go around yelling at each other but we do have arguments and than Riddhima stops talking to me and I have to do all sort of things to get her to talk to me and forgive me."
"Like?"
"Like, I start with irritating her, than I try to make her laugh and once she starts laughing there is no stopping her and than she forgives me….of course after she extracts some dozen chocolates from me but it's all worth it when I see that smile on her face."
Muskaan smiled and replied in a forlorn voice, "I wish bhai did that for me. When we fight he just leaves and I eventually forgive him myself."
"Yeah. He's a looser I know."
"Excuse me!" He looked at Muskaan looking angrily at him. "He's my brother and you are not allowed to say anything wrong about him. He's just a little different….and not very expressive but he loves me just the same and…
She stopped mid-sentence as she saw him grinning wide at her. "What!?"
"You love him so much and you know he loves you too than what's with all the crying? So you guys had a fight, big deal. All brother-sisters do. That's the beauty of this relationship… you can fight all you want and still retain the love and affection because at the end of the day it's your brother whose going to stand by you and make you smile no matter what."
She looked at him with her eyes narrowed and he wasn't sure if he should stay to see whatever it was that was going on in her crazy head. "You said that deliberately. You tried to provoke me so I would say all that stuff and you would make me see sense."
He did not say anything, still not able to understand the look on her face but was startled the next moment as she slapped him on his back knocking him off the bench and laughing loudly.
"Dude you're good."
He stood up, brushing the dust off his pants and smiled at her.
"If you are done, can we please go back to class. We'll miss the eco period."
"I don't think the teacher will let us in. We are already 10 minutes late. Let's just stay because we are going to get blasted anyways."
"No. Just come along, she'll let us in when she'll see you were with me. She may not like you but am her favorite student." he told her rather proudly.
"You do know what that makes you, right?" She walked along with him towards their class.
"What do you mean?"
"You are the king of dorks…being the teacher's favorite is so not cool."
He turned around but unlike what she had expected, he didn't look offended one bit instead he looked smug.
"See that's what the general mistake is. People use words without knowing what it really means. A dork is a term used for people out of touch with contemporary…
"Alright, there we go…see what I mean, DORK?" She rolled her eyes at him and walked off smiling to herself, congratulation herself mentally for not, for a change, making a fool out of herself around him and this way she just might get his attention….

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Riddhima walked towards the arts room at the extreme end of the corridor and as she had suspected, found Armaan sitting alone in the room. Before walking in she tried to read the expression on his face and much to her surprise she realized that he looked almost sad.
She wondered if she should go in….she had never ever had a proper conversation with Armaan, the very thought of being near him sent her into frenzy but the conversation from yesterday in the biology lab made her feel a little confident, he had helped her when she had needed him and now it was her turn. Besides, she didn't think she would be at peace if she left him alone when he is so obviously distressed.
She was still lost in his thoughts when he looked up, sensing somebody's presence.
"Hey!" She heard him say as he looked up giving her a short smile.
"Hey!" She replied meekly, walking in. "What are you doing here?" She stood next to the seat he was sitting on.
"Err…I was just about to go back. Is the recess over?" He asked, walking towards the door.
"No, we still have a couple minutes. Is there something bothering you?"
"No am fine." He didn't look at her. She smiled to herself knowing him probably better than he knew himself…trying to act all macho when just a moment back he was crying standing in the corridor.
"You can tell me you know." She walked to where he was standing and stood facing him.
"There isn't anything to tell. We should head back for class." He answered trying to look away but she kept looking him eye to eye slightly surprised at the fact that she wasn't feeling jittery or nervous. He sighed as he found her eyes boring into him and he for once wanted to quit the act and have somebody else take control and help him out.
"I am a terrible person."
She looked at him surprised. "No, Armaan. Where would you get that from? You are a really nice person….everybody thinks so….
"But Muski doesn't." He spoke interrupting her mid-sentence. Riddhima now understood that he might have had a fight with Muskaan who would have said something in her anger.
"I am sure she doesn't mean it Armaan." She spoke softly. He looked at her, the kind look in her eyes making him feel better and he suddenly wanted to talk to her and tell her everything.
"You don't understand Riddhima. When people are angry, they tend to say things that have been hurting them the most and Muski said that I have never been a good brother to her. And she is right, I have never done anything for her."
He slipped into a chair suddenly trying to figure out where he went so wrong as to hurt his kid sister so terribly.
"I don't know much about your guys relationship so am not going to try and judge but if you really think that you have not been a good brother, you can be one now. It's never too late to correct a mistake and instead of feeling bad you should try and make it upto her. Keep her happy, do everything that a good brother should and am sure she'll forgive you for the past."
He looked at her and slowly a smile slipped on his lips as he stood up. "You're right. I'll make it upto her. I'll be the best brother anybody ever had….better than Rahul even."
"What!?" He bit his tongue at having said more than he wanted to but was surprised when she chuckled. "I know you don't like bhai but trust me once you get to know him, you'll love him."
"Yeah…am not that kinda guy."
"Armaan!!! I meant you'll see that he is a great guy. Now cummon let's go, I think the period started like 10 minutes ago."
She stopped suddenly as she realized he was still standing at the same place, looking at her.
She gestured him with her hand to hurry up. He walked towards her and before she knew it, enveloped her in a tender hug.
"You're the best. Thanks a lot." he broke the hug and smiling at her, stroked her cheek lightly and walked ahead. "Let's go."
Riddhima stood there for a moment trying to come out of the shock that her body was just subjected to. She smiled and blushed and would have stood there with the shy smile pasted on her face had Armaan not called her name. She turned around and after wiping the smile off her face, she followed him to the classroom.

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"Where is Riddhima?" Rahul scanned the whole classroom and frowned when he couldn't find her.
"There she is." He looked towards the direction Muskaan was pointing at and frowned harder when he saw Armaan with her.
"What is he doing with her?" he spoke angrily.
"Oh god, not again." Muskaan hoped that she wouldn't have to witness another fight.

Riddhima looked at Muskaan sitting next to Rahul.
"Armaan, let's go ask Muskaan how she is feeling?"
Armaan reluctantly followed her, feeling a little awkward after the fight they had.
"Muskaan, how are you feeling now?"
"Oh am fine. It was just a minor cut." Muskaan looked at Armaan and could tell that he was upset. She felt guilty again and wanted to apologies but before she could the teacher entered the class and they had to take their seats.
Armaan sat down at Rahul's place, next to Riddhima.
"Please tell me we don't have a test today." Armaan asked Riddhima in a whisper.
She looked at Armaan worriedly and wondered how she was supposed to break the bad news to him, "I am sorry to say Armaan but we do."
"Oh man." Armaan closed his eyes cursing the economics teacher for giving tests every other day.
"And it gets worst…it's an oral test."
"WHAT!?" He yelled loudly standing up.
"Armaan!?" The teacher glared at him.
"Am sorry ma'am but I actually have a problem in this chapter…
"No, Armaan. It's not going to work this time. Everytime there is a test you waste the time of the class asking me to repeat the concepts. I will firstly take the test and those who won't be able to answer will be doing the last week's assignment 10 times, later you can ask me all the questions you want to."
Armaan slipped back into the chair and looked at Riddhima hoping she would have some way out of the situation.
"Help, please." She looked at his face and couldn't help but feel bad for him despite knowing that they were given four days to prepare for this chapter.
"Ma'am, I think we should complete tomorrow's lesson first…otherwise the link would be broken and we'll have to start all over again." The teacher thought for a couple seconds and than agreed. She did not suspect Riddhima of any ulterior motive and hence agreed thinking that if Riddhima, one of the best students in the class, wanted to finish the chapter than so be it since there was barely any other student who paid any attention anyways.
Riddhima knew the test wouldn't take place as the teacher was already 10minutes late and she would spend at least 15-20 minutes on the chapter and than she would take up everybody's doubts and by the time they would finish with the lesson, the class will be over.
Armaan looked at Riddhima and wanted to thank her a billion times for saving his a** again but she kept looking away. He nudged her and mouthed a thank you but she simply smiled and looked down at the book. He wanted to ask her the reason for the sudden change but couldn't as the teacher started the lesson.

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"Riddhima!?" Armaan saw her walking away as soon as the bell rang. They were supposed to go to the auditorium together for the dance practice. He finally caught up with her and blocked her way. "Where do you think you are going?"
"I have to return this book to the library and than am going home."
"But we have the dance practice today."
"I told you Armaan, I don't want to do it." She tried walking away but he held her back getting slightly annoyed with her constant negative attitude.
"Are you not doing it because of what Rahul said?"
"Bhai has nothing to do with it."
"Than what?" He asked on the verge of yelling at her. He wanted to help her…get her out of her shell and maybe being a part of the final event as his partner might just help her in making a couple friends but she was just not ready to give him a chance. He mentally decided to give it a last try and if she still persist than he would let her do whatever she wants. She had helped him a lot of times so he felt sort of obliged to help her in whatever possible way he can.
"I will do it on one condition."
Armaan frowned looking at her. This is way too much, he thought, she is putting conditions here. "What!?"
"You will study for the economics test. I know it's none of my business but I lied to ma'am today so if you'll do it tomorrow , it would make me feel better." She wished she hadn't said it when she saw the amused look on his face and she knew inside he was laughing on her.
"Look, you're the geek, am not. I haven't studied even a single day in the whole year. Do you really think I can prepare the chapter in just one day."
"You can take my notes and maybe Muskaan can help you." She held out her notes but he shook his head.
"Muskaan won't be much help here. Let's do this, let's go to the dance practice and than we can study together. You can help me with the chapter."
Riddhima knew she must refuse. That would be spending way too much time with him, she told herself, but I can help him and than he will score better. She knew she wanted to say yes but was afraid to be around him for too long…she was afraid she would make a fool out of herself or even worst might just end up revealing her feelings for him.
"Cummon, say yes. You are a good teacher. You help half the class during exams or maybe it's just me. You don't like being around me….you think me a dufus. It's okay…I know your way too smart to….
"No, Armaan really. I never thought that about you. I would love to help you out." She spoke quickly worried that he was hurt thinking she didn't want to help him.
"Alright than let's go." He smiled, congratulating himself as he walked towards the auditorium with Riddhima following him. He knew she would fall for his little nautanki…he was well aware of her soft nature and took advantage of it.
At least I'll understand one chapter in that huge book and will answer all the questions tomorrow, he thought trying to think of something good in studying with the geek, I can freak everyone out in the class by telling all the answers…the teacher would be shocked….it would be kinda fun.
He was happy with the plan but was surprised with the sight that greeted him on reaching the auditorium.
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"What do you think you are doing?" Rahul looked at Muskaan and than back at his wrist that she was holding.
"Since you wouldn't walk yourself, I will have to drag you."
"Where do you want to take me?" He spoke standing up and taking her hand off his wrist.
"To the auditorium. We have dance practice, remember? Only bhai has been finalized for the final event…the other couple still has to be chosen and I so want to be a part of it."
"But I don't. Get yourself another partner." He threw his bag on his shoulder and was walking out of the classroom when Muskaan's words made him stop in his tracks.
"Fine. Guess than I will just sit and watch my bhai dancing with YOUR sister. She fell down yesterday doing the steps, I hope nothing like that happens today."
He threw his bag on the floor and glared at her. "Fine. Let's go."
She chuckled getting another angry glare from him. Wiping off the smug smile from her face, she followed him to the auditorium.

"Am glad you both are finally here. Please be on time from tomorrow onwards. Now come here and see your steps." They both stood next to Savio as he did the step with the female instructor. "Now keep doing the step till you have mastered it."
Rahul took Muskaan's hand in his and placed his free hand on the small of her back and they did the basic step and than raising his left arm, stepped back on the right foot and turned her around…
As he raised his left arm, she took a step forward on her left foot and did a 360 degree turn.
As she turned around her curly hair hit his face and without realizing, he closed his eyes as the flowery smell from her shampoo hit his nose and in the process he forgot to do his step and as she stepped forward on her left foot, it got tangled in his right leg and she fell forward, taking him down with her.
"Oww!! What were you doing? You were supposed to move your right leg back."
With her hair falling over his face it took him a little time to register what had just happened, "Err…am…am sorry." Muskaan rolled off him and sat up.
"My foot hurts so bad. Damn you Garewal."
Rahul guiltily looked at her tending her hurt foot. "Am really sorry Muskaan. Here, let me see." He moved her hands away and examined her foot. "it's going to swell a little but you'll be fine. We just need some ice." He stretched out his hand for her to hold so he could pull her up but she shook her head. "I am not going anywhere. You'll have to get the ice here. It hurts like hell. I don't think I can walk."
"You can't nurse your foot sitting on the stage. Just walk to the chairs and sit there. I'll get the ice for you." When she refused to budge, he gripped her wrist tightly and with the other hand got hold of her elbow and forcefully pulled her up.
"Ouch!" She yelped in pain and would have fallen back on the floor but his arm immediately went around her waist, holding her up.
Muskaan felt her heart jump as her body brushed against his. She looked up and found him looking down at her. He knew he was staring at her face and should look away but for some reason he didn't want to.

"That's the second time, in a single day, that your brother has hurt my sister." Armaan spoke to Riddhima, looking at Muskaan lying on the floor.
"Armaan, Riddhima, you both have to go to the multimedia room to practice. We are taking the auditions for the second couple here." Savio steered them out of the auditorium not listening to Armaan who was asking for time to talk to Muskaan.
"Armaan, you don't just have to practice your step…but you also have to help Riddhima. So don't waste any time."
Armaan nodded his head but before he could turn to walk away he saw Rahul helping Muskaan up and at a sudden thought, he smiled and left for the multimedia room.

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"Okay, let's do it one more time and this time after you have stepped back, I will let go off your hand and you do the spin thing."
"What!? That's way too difficult. I think we have done enough practice for today and it's getting really late. Let us go to the library and I'll explain the chapter to you and than I can go home."
"But we have been doing the same step that we did yesterday."
"I know but I promise we'll practice in the zero period tomorrow. Please."
Armaan nodded his head and they picked up their stuff and left for the library.
"What chapter are we going to study?"
"Demand."
They reached the library but were stopped by the librarian. "We have a conference going on in there. You will have to go back."
"What do we do now?" Riddhima asked while they were walking towards the school exit.
"We can go to my place or yours." Riddhima frowned on not seeing Rahul anywhere and missed his question.
"Where's bhai?"
"He left." They both turned around on hearing Lovely's voice.
"He left without me?" Riddhima asked, surprised.
"I told him I'll drop you besides he had to take Muskaan home. She sprained her ankle."
Way to go Muskaan, Armaan thought grinning with his face turned away. He wasn't worried that she might be in pain because he knew she would be happy to be around Rahul.
"But the problem is that I have to go to my history tuition which starts in fifteen minutes. I had hoped you would leave half an hour earlier but you guys were down practicing."
"It's okay. I'll take a cab."
"I can't let you go alone. Rahul will kill me." Lovely replied looking worried.
"What are you, her bodyguard?" Armaan asked, irritated at the fact that Lovely just like Rahul was treating Riddhima like a kid but before she could answer he quickly added, "Don't answer that." He eyed her frame and decided it better to not venture into any dangerous territory with her. "I'll drop her."
"You would?"
"Yeah sure. She lives just a couple blocks away from my place so I don't see why not."
"Why…why would you help her?" she asked looking suspicious.
"Because I am a really nice guy and I may not be as good a bodyguard as you can be but I sure can safely drop her home. Trust me."
Riddhima looked from one to the other. She was not used to taking her own decisions but she wasn't sure if she wanted Armaan to drop her but if she refused than Lovely would have to miss her tuition so she left it to on them to decide.
"Fine." She leaned close to Riddhima and whispered in her ear, "Sorry about this but you be careful around him."
With that she left and Riddhima and Armaan collected their bag and walked out.
"Hey, it's raining." Armaan flashed his dimpled smile as the rain drops hit his face. "It's going to be one fun ride home"

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Sorry for the delay...this is what I have been saying every time i update...anyways, hope you guys like the part and do leave a comment.

Love
Krati

p.s. I have no idea what's wrong with the font..can't get it back to normal... :D

Edited by krati.mehra - 16 years ago

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he-lluva! its so drastic how your writing varies with each fiction....as if its so strong in you mind...there could be nothing else...and you write it just as the story calls for....! this one...so much of the college background happenings....the usual and the unknown yet fun stuff...i liked! But ....i have a biggie...and from the start of the update....the writing...its as if you took a leap back to kindergarten of writing...its so tacky...and messy..and unpolished (not in the lightest yaar) .....and its not annoying....but it just distracts me from the details that show...!!

So if you must...then do work on it...i liked the stuff otherwise!...yuppie!

821 ..😉

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