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Jess.

@Jess.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

i loved your story chhilt!! it was amazing!
so many details and perfect grammar/spelling!
i wouldn't be surprised to see you turn into an author!

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@chhilt

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Angad luver#1
i loved your story chhilt!! it was amazing!
so many details and perfect grammar/spelling!
i wouldn't be surprised to see you turn into an author!

Aww.... that's really very sweet of you, Jessie! The good grammar/spelling is partially due to my sister... she proof-read the whole story for me, told me which scenes needed more work and so on... thanks again! :)

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Hala

@MrMonster

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Amazing! If you can make it a little longer, and make him like escape or something you can publish a book, i'll be camping a week for it.. Plz make a sequel to this story, i love it, it kept me on my toes, and i am sitting!! O_o

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Just call me Chhilt :)

@chhilt

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: 090909as
Amazing! If you can make it a little longer, and make him like escape or something you can publish a book, i'll be camping a week for it.. Plz make a sequel to this story, i love it, it kept me on my toes, and i am sitting!! O_o

Wow, thanks, Hala! :D I'll try and figure out a way to make it longer.... and as for the sequel I might do that but I'm currently working on a new mystery story.... it's not going to be as long as this but it should be good fun.... keep your eyes peeled for it :P

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