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Hey guys i am a great fan of MAYUR, and nowadays i don't feel like watching MJHT since no MAYUR is shown. So i thought of suggesting a MAYUR scene for all of you and especially PD to consider in the show.
THE BHUSHAN HOUSE
(The doorbell rings and Uday opens the door)
Uday: Mayank, hey dude tum yahan?
Mayank: yeah, woh...
Uday: Oh sorry, stupid me, pehle andar to aao.
Mayank: thanks, who actually mein dekhne aaya tha ki subkuch theek to hai na, who Gunjan aur Samrat...
Uday: haan, jabse Sheena gayi hai tabse Samrat ki zyaada chinta nahin hoti, since Gunjan Hamesha usske saath jo reheti hai. So i guess everythings fine between them.
Mayank: Aur Nupur... (finally getting to the point he was there for), kyunki mein usse subahe se phone kar raha hoon, par koi phone hi nahin uttha raha.
Uday: Actually Mayank, I don't know, meine bhi usse subahe se nahin dekha woh toh breakfast khaane bhi nahin aayi.
Mayank: Kya?
Uday: I know, koi breakfast kaise miss kar sakta hai, mein toh deffinetly nahin.(like always his jokey ways)
Mayank: (shows irritation towards Uday)
Uday: Sorry(scared by Mayanks expression)
Soon Mayank forgets about Uday and starts to worry about Nupur, since it was quite strange that she wouldn't pick up her phone, plus even Uday didn't know where she was.
Mayank: mein dekh ke aaata hoon.(leaves to search for Nupur, first within the house only)
Uday: (scratches his head) ummm, okay!
Mayank reaches to Nupurs room first, but can't find anyone there, even her bed is a mess and not made yet.
SCENE SHIFTS TO THE TERRACE
Nupur is shown sitting on the swing that's on their terrace. She is silently swinging back and forth with tears in her eyes.
* FLASHBACKS*
Nupur and Gunjan are showed in their childhood
Scene 1
Nupur and Gunjan are running and playing, and Gunjan falls. Nupur runs to a crying Gunjan and consoles her.
Scene 2
Nupur and Gunjan are eating ice-cream, but little Gunjan drops her ice-cream accidently and starts crying. Worried Nupur consoles her and gives Gunjan her ice-cream. Their mother comes to them and hugs Nupur saying "Meri pyaari Nupur Hamesha upna aur Gunjan ka khayal aisi hi rakhna"
*FLASHBACK ENDS*
Nupur: (crying) Sorry Maa, mein apna farz pura nahin kar payi. Aaj mere hote hue bhi Gunjan ki aankhon mein aansoon hai. Agar aap aaj hoti to shayad yeh nahin hota. Sorry, (crying)
While she is saying all this, Mayank is standing in the entrance of the terrace hearing all this.
Nupur: Galti meri hi hain. To kya hua agar Gunjan ne mujhe Samrat se sach chupane ko kaha tha, zaroori nahin tha ki mein uski baat ko maanu. Mein bhi pagal hoon, apne mein itni uljhi rahi ki Gunjan ko hi bhool gayi.(suddenly feels a hand on her shoulder, turns around and sees Mayank)
Mayank: Galti tumhari nahin hai.
Nupur: Mayank?(shocked to see him there at this time)
Mayank: Mein tumhe subahe se phone kar raha hoon aur tum yahan ho?
Nupur: (cries and hugs him) Mayank mein achi behen nahin hoon, meri Gunjan ke aankhon mein aansoon hai aur mein kuch bhi nahin kar sakti.(she is saying this while hugging him)
Mayank: (still in the hug) Ismein tumhari koi galti nahin hai, and don't worry sub kuch theek ho jaayega.
Nupur: Par Maya...(starts to feel a little dizzy)
Mayank: (pulls out of the hug) Nupur? Tum theek...
Nupur: (still feeling dizzy) haa, woh..(suddenly she collapses on him)
Mayank: Nupur?
SCENE SHIFTS
Mayank and Nupur are in Nupur's room. She's on the bed.
Mayank: (giving her a glass of water) yeh lo,
Nupur(drinks the water) thanks.
Mayank puts the glass on the table next to the bed, and moves closer to Nupur, and sits right beside her
Mayank: dekho Nupur, mein jaanta hoon ki Gunjan tumhare liye kitni special hai, aur agar usse thodi si bhi chot lagti hair to dard tumhe zyaada hota hai. Par iska matlab yeh nahin, ki agar woh chot zyaada gehra ho jaaye, aur tum usse theek na kar paao to yeh tumhari galti hai.
Nupur: Par Mayank...
Mayank: (interrupts) Tum uski behen ho Nupur, aur sab jaante hai ki tumne uske liye kya kya kiya hai. Aur uske haal pe rone se acha yeh hai ki hum usko aur uske pyaar ko milaye.
Nupur: Hum?
Mayank: Kyun meri koi value nahin hai?(making the sarcastic Mayankish face)
Nupur: Par hum kar kya sakte hai Gunjan toh...
Mayank: Gunjan kuch bhi kahe, hum jaante hai ki Samrat aur Gunjan ek doosre ke liye perfect hai. aur ab without their permission hum koi bhi good deed kar sakte hai. (smiles and winks at nupur)
Nupur smiles and puts her head on Mayanks shoulder, a cute tune plays during this cute scene.
Mayank: (breaks the silence) Acha ab bohot senti.(sentimental) ho gaye hai hum, chalo utho aur tayaar ho.
Nupur: (confused) Kya? par kyun?
Mayank: Aree!, subahe se ro rahi ho aur kuch khaya bhi nahin hai issliye to itna tired feel kar rahi ho. Chalo bahar ghoom ke aate hai.
Nupur: Nahin Mayank woh...
Mayank: ACHA! mein tumhare kehene pe locket laaoon, date organize karoon, aur tum mere saath bahar nahin aa sakti.
Nupur:(hearing about the locket scene she feels guilty and agrees) Fine, chalo.
SCENE SHIFTS
Mayank and Nupur and walking in a park, Nupur is wearing a pretty and simple churidaar and her hair is left open. She's lost in her own thoughts and Mayank is busy staring at her. Suddenly a ball comes rolling and stops at Nupur's feet. A group of small children (maybe 5-6yrs ol) come to claim the ball. On seeing Nupur they insist she come to play with them.
Kid: Didi, didi, please khelo naa. Humare team mein kum log hai. Please.
Nupur: Nahin woh mein...(looks at Mayank who gives her a look that says "go and play")
Nupur on seeing Mayank, has no choice but to go.
In the beginning Nupur is hesitant in playing with the kids but soon she gets so caught up with them and starts enjoying herself. She hugs the kids, and one young girl enjoys sitting on her lap.
Looking at this Mayank gets a smile on his face. He gets lost in her simplicity and cuteness.
*A CUTE TUNE PLAYS*
Nupur is shown playing with the kids.
She comes across a person walking his little puppy. She nuzzles the puppy, and enjoys her time.
During all this Mayank, just smiles at her and gets lost in her cuteness.
THE END.
I just hope a scene like this is shown because i am really missing MAYUR, and this is the exact kind of scene i want to see between them, not cheezy, and boring scenes, or scenes shown just to show MAYUR fans that MAYUR exist. PLEASE PD TAKE THIS SCENE INTO CONSIDERATION.
PLEASE comment, and if possible make sure PD reads this SCENE, then obviously its upto her to consider it.
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