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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
awleeh my scene


bharti (sees amrjeet nd says to herself):lo agayi hamare MU dictionary

amarjeet:kisine kuch "sayings "kya ..meine kuch "hearings"

bharti:kuch nahi sir ...mein toh aapko gud mornin wish kar rahi thi

amarjeet:continue "sayings"

[amarjeet goes away]

armaan:bharti ...

bharti:haan armaan

armaan :mein tumse kuch kehna chahth hu..😛

bharti smiles😳

armaan:bhartimein tumse shaadi karna chath hu..😃😛

bharti :...armaan...

armaan:bharti...BHARTIIIIII

[bharti realised tht she was dreamin]

armaan:tum ka soch rahi thi?

bharti:*smiles*kuch nahi

armaan :teek hai chalo...

bharti begins to walk ...she walks two steps...she see tht he isstil standin der

bharti:tum nahi aa raheho?

armaan:tum girog tohmujhehipakadna padegana..isliye tumpehlechalo🤣

bharti:ARMAAN..😳

armaan:bhaaarti...😳

*both smiletogethr*
armaan nd bhartitogether:chalo😛

*smaile again nd walks..




IlIlIl thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#12
aww sowwie i continued frm amrjeet post [:S]
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Armaan:Cofee??
Bharti:OK
both go to the cafe when Armaan recieves a call
Armaan:hey thats not fair
Armaan:But you promised me
Armaan:Fine sweet heart
Bharti feel a liitle sense of insecurity and uncomfortable
Armaan:Acha jaan
He then gives phone to bharti
Armaan:Bharti Jia tumse baat karna chahati hai
Bharti feels a bit embarresed and confuse as why she was insecure or rather say jealous
Bharti comes out of her thoughts as Armaan shake her a bit so that she can talk to Jia
Bharti:Hey Jia
Jia: Bharti auntei mujhe aapse ik favour chahiye
Bharti:Kya???
Jia:Bharti auntie wo kya hai na dada bahut dino se unke fav restraurent mein jaakar dinner karne ki baat kar rahe the aur humne aaj ka day select kia tha dada ne seats bhi reserve ki hui hain
Jia stopped for a while
Bharti:And???
Jia:Bharti auntie aaj main school gayi to mujhe pata chala ke meri ik friend ne apne ghar ik party organise ki hai
Bharti:Yo isme main kya kar sakti hoon???
Jia:Bharti auntie aap please dada ke saath ajj dinner karne jao gi???
Bharti gets shocked while Armaan asks her from eyes What happend????
Take Care
Zoya
Edited by Zoya_01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Jia:Bharti auntie aap please dada ke saath ajj dinner karne jao gi???
Bharti gets shocked while Armaan asks her from eyes What happend????

Bharti: Hmm beta...mujhe pata nahi...err...( hesitating )

Jia: Plzz aunty..! (pleading in a cute way )

Bharti smiles because she knows she can never say 'No' to Jia.

B: Haan teek hai..main tumhare papa ke saat dinner karne jaungi.

Armaan is intially shocked n then grins a wide smile. 😃

Bharti cuts the call n says, " Armaan..Jia chahti hai ki jis restaurant main tumne reservations karvaaye the ..vahan main aur tum dinner pe chale..😳

A: Haan haan no prob! 😉...restaurant kaafi door hai..to mujhe lagta hai hume abhi nikalna chahiye!

B: Hmm teek hai chalo

Armaan leads Bharti towards the car n they both sit down

Someone plzz continue 4m here...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
bharti and armaan sits in the car and armaan starts driving.
Arman: hmmm bharti, if u dont mind toh kia main music play kar sakta hun?

Bharti: ofcourse car tmhari hai. main ne is k paisay toh nai diye.
They both smile and the song is Khuda jane from bachna ae haseeno.

Arman: bharti tumhay nai lgta k pehla hamara relation professional tha, then we became friends aur ab.....

Bharti: aur ab?

Arman: "Aur ab hum donon" then suddenly some begger knocks on their car's window.
Sahab kuch paisay de do, ap donon ki jodi hamesha bani rahay gi.
they both r shocked and bharti's embarrassed😳 and arman smiles and gives him money.

Arman: yeh aj kal k beggers bhi na, kaisi duaen de detay hain.

Bharti: gets angry and says wat do u mean by kaisi duaen! us mein galt kia tha. and she realizes wat she said and gets embarrassed again.

Arman: kia! tum ne abhi kia kaha?

Bharti: Arman hotel a gaya hai.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Arman: kia! tum ne abhi kia kaha?

Bharti: Arman hotel a gaya hai

Armaan : Oh..haan..!

They both get out of the car n walk towards their table. Armaan pulls out the chair for Bharti n she's impressed by this gesutre. 😉

Bharti: Tumne kab itne manners seekh le? ( she asks teasingly )

Armaan : Jab tum meri zindagi main aake...meri life ko inna happening ban diya..tab..

Bharti blushes slightly at his comment.

They order the food n go on talking. When suddenly they hear an annoucement -

"Ladies and Gentleman. We're sorry for the inconvinience but you guys will have to stay in the restaraunt for the night as its snowing rapidly outside. We'll make the necessarry arrangements. "

(LOL..i know it does'nt snow in India..but just assume they're somewhere else )

Armaan n Bharti are shocked at this! "Lekhin Jiya!", they both say at the same time & smile sheepishly.

B: Armaan..i think tumhe usse call karke bata dena chahiye
A: Yeah..ure ryt ..abhi call karta hoon..

Armaan calls her up n asks her to stay at her friend's place.

A:Voh teek rahegi..apne dost ke ghar pe ruk jayegi..

B: Hmm teek hai..

They finish their dinner n go to the reception to get their respective rooms.

( The rooms of the restaurant have been converted into hotel rooms for the time-being )

At the reception, the lady asks" How can i help u? ".

B: We want 2 rooms.

Lady: Yeah, let me check.

She types something in the computer while AB are waiting.

Lady: Sorry..we do'nt have many rooms since this is just an emergency. Could you two adjust in one room?!

AB do'nt know what to do. Bharti hesitates, n Armaan asks, " Tumhe koi prob hai?"

Bharti looks up at him n shakes her head in a 'NO'

A: Yeah sure..we'll manage..

They collect the keys n head towards the room.



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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
They enter the room and see only one bed .
Bharti : Ohh .. ekhi bistar hai
Armaan : Behtar ??
They remeber the incident after the night Jia was sick and laugh
Bharti : Tum bhi na
Armaan : Main bhi na ?
Bharti : Kuc nahi , nothing
Armaan : Ok , Madam as you say
Bharti , To ?
Armaan : To ?
Bharti : Umm hume sona chahi ye
Armaan : Yeah , I think you're right raat ke 12 baj ne wala hai
Bharti : Haan , Par ek hi bed hai
Armaan : Haan , we'll adjust
Bharti : What ??
Armaan : Mera matlab wo nahi tha , I mean tum bed par so jayo mein neeche so tha hoon
Bharti : AHHH
Armaan : Kya hua ?
Bharti : neeche cockroach tha , tum neeche nahi so sakta ho , tumhe bite kar liye to ?
Armaan : Cockroaches don't bite and I'll manage
Bharti : Nahi !!! Main neeche so tha hoon , tum upar so jao
Armaan : No Bharti it's ok
Bharti : Nahi !! Mein tumhe neeche nahi sona desaktha hoon
Armaan : To tumhe lagtha hai ke mein tumhe neeche sona donga
Bharti : Armaan .. tum upar so jao I'll manage
Armaan : You let's do this tum wo side bed ko so , main yeh side pe sotha hoon
Bharti : Umm .. wo .. actually
Armaan : Mein bol raha hoon na , main neeche so tha hoon , you'll be more comfortable
Bharti smiles at him because of how much he cares
Bharti : Hum dono upar so skatha hain ?
Armaan : Par abhi to tum uncomfortable thi
Bharti grabs Armaan's hand and pulls him toward the bed , andd pushes him down , takes off his shoes and puts the blanket over him
Bharti : Ab tum yahan se nahi hiloge , Samje ?
Armaan : Jo aap kahe , madam
Bharti goes and lies down on the tohe side of the bed without a blanket because she put it on Armaan .The window flies open and refuses to close back . Bharti starts feeling cold and starts to shiver . Armaan looks at her shivering and tries to put the blanket over her .
Bharti : Armaan , I'm fine tum so jao
Armaan : Bharti tumhe thandi lag rahi hai , mujhe dikh raha hai
Bharti : Seriously Armaan I'm good
Suddenly Armaan reaches ove and lands up really close to Bharti with his hands over her. Bharti starts feeling uncomfortable
Bharti : Wo Armaan
He takes his hand of her and with his other hand picks up his coat from her side of the bed .
Armaan : Yeh lo
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
He takes his hand of her and with his other hand picks up his coat from her side of the bed .
Armaan : Yeh lo

Bharti took the coat from him n asked suddenly, " Armaan tum mera itna khyal kyon rakte ho?!"

Now it was Armaan's turn to feel uncomfortable. "Voh..err..um..uh.h..."

Bharti chuckled seeing him stammering. Armaan smiled to see her laughing.

A: Chalo ab voh chodo..aur so jao..!

Bharti closed her eyes n within minutes she was in deep sleep. Armaan caressed her hair n went to sleep too.

Bharti moved so much in the night, that she came really close to Armaan. 😳

She woke up in the morning, n saw that her hand was on Armaan's waist.

She straightened up n mumbled to herself " Kya kar rahe ho Bhaskar! Do'nt forget u're the man!" , to calm herself.

But she smiled at the thought of what she was doing - an embarassed smile.

Just then Armaan woke up, n saw her smiling. He said "Kya baat hai! Subah-subah mujhe itni acchi smile dekhni ko mila hai".

Bharti blushed, to her suprise! She never blushed in her entire life. Afterall, Bhaskar does'nt blush, he makes people blush 😍



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bharti blushed, to her suprise! She never blushed in her entire life. Afterall, Bhaskar does'nt blush, he makes people blush Bharti:Kuch nahin main soch rahi thi ke Armaan(coming closer):Ke
Bharti:ke ab hume chalna chahiye mujhe bhook lagi hai
Armaan:Tum fresh up ho jao main bahar tumhaara wait kar raha hoon phir hum chalein ge to get something to eat
Bharti:Yeah right
Bharti goes towards the washroom while Armaan watches her go
Bharti inside the washroom washes her face and looks into the mirror smiling to herself as she remembered what happend a while ago
Then suddenly
Bharti:Bharti bhool mat that you are a man
she again put some water on her mouth and gets out of the room
She saw Armaan waiting for her
She felt herself smiling on seeing Armaan and was confused also that why is she smiling like an idiot to see Armaan as if she has seen Shahrukh Khan standing infront of her
Armaan clicked in front and she comes back to the reality
Armaan:kahan kho gayi???
Bharti:kahin nahin chalein
Armaan:After you
Bharti smiles again and starts to move
They reach the food court and order for them
Now someone else continue
Take Care
Zoya

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