My first FF(ph)FATE Discontinued *Note* PG 67

hi guys i am trying to write an ff

i am a reader of different ffs here but last night i got an idea in my mind can i also do this.

my sister call me stupid after listening my idea but yar i want to write this.

so guys plz read character sketch of my first ff

if you like it i will continue otherwise i will stop this.i know there will be many mistakes here so plz forgive me.it will be a combination of hindi urdu and english bcz my english is not gd enough.

Character sketch

Heer maan:

She is 20 year old. She is beautiful graceful and simple. she belong from middle class family. her parents died when she was only 6.she is currently living with her mama and mami ji .they love her so much and treat her as daughter. they use all their resources to fulfill her dreams. She is a student of business and want to complete her parents and mama ji and mami ji dreams.

He is son of heer's mama ji and also fianc of Heer.he love and care Heer so much.

She is best friend of Heer she is also her classmate in collage. Heer always share everything with her.

He is 22 year old. he is also Heer collage fellow but 2 year senior. He is a son of great business man lalit juneja but he hates his father. His father is a characterless man. He thinks that her mother dies bcz of his father. But love his younger brother too much. he have no interest in girls. and currently living alone.

He is 20 year old. Love his bro to much. he is living with his grandma in a different city. he don't want to leave his grandmother in this age when she need him.

if name of my ff is already someones then plz tell me

so dear plz comment

Index

Part 1 : pg 2

Part 2 : pg 3

Part 3 : pg 6

Part 4 : pg 7

Part 5 : pg 8

Part 6 : pg 10

Part 7 : pg 11

Part 8 : pg 13

Part 9 : pg 14

Part 10 : pg 16

Part 11 : pg 17

Part 12 : pg 22

Part 13 : pg 26

Part 14 : pg 31

Originally posted by: -fsn-

Hi maha how r u?
nice do continue soon
i m waiting.
pm me when u update.
Luv
Fatima

the sketch was good.😊

nyc character sketch but i m confused tht heer is engagaed to her cousin, hwcum, i mn he is her bro.................

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

nyc character sketch but i m confused tht heer is engagaed to her cousin, hwcum, i mn he is her bro.................

anyways good work on character sketches